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1、呈现现象 提出建议,假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点:1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。 注意：1 用五句话来表达全部意思 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。,文体： 人称： 时态：,认真审题,提出建议,兼顾第一和第二人称,现在时与将来时,如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading 开头: 表明写作意图 2. Body 中心记述:提出建议 3. Ending 结尾:(对提出的建议总结),一 How to begin a advi

2、se letter?开头,Dear.: (开门见山，点明意图） (1) I know you have some troubles in learning English after reading your letters. Here are a few suggestions. (2)I am writing to share my advice with you on how to learn English well. It will be wise of you if you take the following actions.,二 To list your advice(列举建议

3、）,First, it is important to do sth as +句子 Then, it also helps to do sth because+句子 Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth You had better do sth. If you do sth, you will (注意连贯和逻辑，合理使用连接词或短语）,1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。,take a Chinese course,watch TV and read books, newspapers a

4、nd magazines in Chinese,三 A perfect ending !(小结）,In conclusion， in a word ， （结论简洁，指明观点） Practice makes perfect！ Nothing is difficult If you put your mind into it. (2)I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful. (3) I will be more than happy to see your improvements.,Dear Peter, Im glad to

5、receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazi

6、nes in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends and they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. I hope you find the

7、se ideas useful . Best wishes Li Hua,S城的交通拥挤现象目趋严重，事故时有发生，告别是在早晚上， 下班高峰期。市政府决定采取措施改善交通现状，向广大市民征 集建议。请根据下面的要点向市政府提出建议。 （1）修缮公路，改善路面状况(condition)； （2）修筑立交桥(overpass)，缓解交通阻塞现象； （3） 控制小轿车的产量。 要求：短文用5句话写，需要涉及上述所有内容， 可以适当增加内容，阐述自己的其他想法。,As everybody knows that the traffic problems in our city become more

8、and more serious, especially during the rushhours。_,As everybody knows that the traffic problems in our city become more and more serious, especially during the rushhours , so I think that it is high time for the city government to take some measures to solve this problems. First of all, we should r

9、epair the roads, for some of the roads are in bad condition and it is difficult for the drivers to go through. Secondly, we had better build more overpasses so as to cut down traffic jams. Thirdly, the production of cars should be controlled, for there are too many cars moving on the roads every day. As long as we do something like th