2019_2020学年新教材高中英语Unit3FamilymattersPartⅤWriting——道歉信课件外研版.pptx

1、Part Writing道歉信,道歉信是因为自己的过失或者疏忽，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽，道歉的语言应该简练诚恳，并且希望收信人能够原谅自己。通常包括以下三部分内容： 1.开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意； 2.说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施； 3.再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。,【增分佳句】 1.表示歉意,(1)Im very sorry for not being able to visit Beijing with you next weekend.Im writing to a

2、pologize to you for it. (2)The reasons why I cant go with you are as follows.,2.解释原因，提出补救办法,(1)Just now I received a call from my cousin, who went to Australia for further study last year. (2)He told me that he would be back to China at 8 am on Saturday, and he hoped I could pick him up at the airpo

3、rt with his family. (3)We havent seen each other for a year, so I think I am supposed to meet him. (4)I make an apology to you for any inconvenience caused, and I hope you can understand my situation. (5)Lets make it another time.How about May Day?,3.再次致歉，希望得到理解,I would appreciate it if you could ac

4、cept my apology.Looking forward to your early reply.,第一步：布局谋篇很关键,审题 1.确定体裁：本文是一封道歉信，属于_； 2.确定时态：主要使用_ 和一般过去时； 3.确定人称：本文主要人称为_。 构思 1.表明写信目的，因为丢书表示歉意； 2.解释丢书的原因，并提出_； 3._并反省自己的过失，恳求对方原谅。,应用文,一般现在时,第一、三人称,解决方案,再次道歉,第二步：核心词汇想周全,1._ 宝贵的；珍贵的 2._ 重新获得 3._ conj. 一旦 4._ 代替；取代 5._ 回忆；记忆 6._ 打算做 7._ 没能够做成 8._

5、与有关联,valuable/precious/of great value,recover/make up for,once,replace/displace/take the place of,memory/recall/remember,intend to do/mean to do,fail to do,be connected with/relate to,第三步：由词扩句雏形现,1.非常抱歉地告诉你，我把上周你借给我的宝贵的书弄丢了。(宾语从句；定语从句) I am terribly sorry to tell you that _. 2.一旦丢失，它们就无法取代。 _， they

6、can never _. 3.我应该对这一不能挽回的损失负责。(be to blame) And for this irrecoverable loss, _. 4.如果我更加谨慎，它就不会丢失。(if虚拟条件句) If _, it _.,I have lost the valuable book you lent me last week,Once they are lost,be replaced,I am to blame,I had been more careful,would not have been lost,第四步：句式升级造亮点,1.用状语从句的省略改写句2 _, they

7、 can never be replaced. 2.用倒装句改写句4 _,Once lost,Had I been more careful, it would not have been lost.,第五步：过渡衔接连成篇,Dear Frank， I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me last week.I read it every day and intended to finish it next week.Last night whe

8、n I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you.,But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends.Once lost, they can never be replaced.They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blameif I had been more careful, it