新目标英语七年级下复习课件公开课写作训练.ppt

1、七年级英语下写作训练,葫芦岛市连山区山神庙九年一贯制学校 李丹,中考说明中的写作能力要求,1. 能正确使用大小写字母和标点。 2. 能简单描述人物、活动或事件。 3. 写作话题与学生个人、家庭和学校生活密切相关。 4. 学生即能表述事实，又能表达观点、情感和态度等。 5. 能正确使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。,解读中考说明写作要求,1. 主题（写人、记事） 2. 文章结构（开头、主体、结尾） 3. 时态 4. 句式多样 5. 适当使用连词 6. 美词使用,句子改错,I in the library read a book. I am listening the music. I love

2、 key ring because theyre beautiful. My breakfast have milk and eggs. I am a 7-years-old boy.,I read a book in the library.,I am listening to the music.,I love my/the key ring because it is beautiful.,I have milk and eggs for breakfast.,I am a 7-year-old boy.,句子改错,6.There has mutton and tomatoes. 7.

3、I can play the soccer. 8. The street has a bank there. 9. I at seven oclock went to school. 10.I with my family went to China.,There is mutton and tomatoes.,I can play soccer.,There is a bank on the street.,I went to school at seven oclock.,I went to China with my family.,句子改错,11.I had fun weekend.

4、12. How did you spent your weekend? 13. I and my friend went swam yesterday. 14. I would like watching TV tonight. 15. Thank you for help me .,I had a fun weekend.,How did you spend your weekend?,My friend and I went swimming yesterday.,I would like to watch TV tonight.,Thank you for helping me.,句子改

5、错,16.Im buy it in a market. 17. I went to school played basketball. 18. He has medium height and is long hair. 19.I am in the supermarket buy the watch. 20. I was last weekend very happy.,I bought it in a market.,I went to play basketball at school.,He is medium height and has long hair.,I bought th

6、e watch in the supermarket.,I was very happy last weekend.,句子改错,21. I reading a book. 22. Do you like the game show? No. I cant stand. 23. I am from Chinese. 24. I like the watch because it is my father bought. 25. I went to home late last night.,I am reading a book.,.No, I cant stand it .,I am from

7、 China.,I like the watch because it is a gift/present from my father.,I went home late last night.,句子改错,26. I at school played basketball. 27. I have pen, wallet, key ring and sunglasses. 28. Id like beef and tomatoes noodles.,I played basketball at school.,I have a pen, a wallet, a key ring and sun

8、glasses.,I d like beef and tomato noodles.,短文改错,I have four of these things. I have watch, scarf , wallet and sunglasses. I very like a wallet and scarf. Because they is very cute. And I dont like watch. Because is ugly. But I love sunglasses. Because color is blue. so I very like sunglasses.,I have

9、 a watch, a scarf, a wallet and sunglasses.,I like the wallet and the scarf.,Because they are very nice.,But I dont like the watch.,Because it is ugly.,I love the sunglasses.,Because it is blue and the color is my favorite.,短文改错,My friend is Alan. He is a actor. He has short straight hair. He is sma

10、ll eyes. He not wears glasses. He is medium height and medium build. He wears blue shirt and blue pants. He favorite sports is soccer ball. He plays soccer is very well.,I have a friend. His name is Alan.,He is an actor.,He has small eyes.,He doesnt wear glasses.,His favorite sport is soccer.,He pla

11、ys soccer very well.,How to describe a person: 1.look:face, hair, height, build, 2.wearings: clothes and color 3. decorations: watch, hair clip, 4. likes and dislikes: food, sports, TV shows, 5.specials. 6. age, sex, family, nationality,language,etc,人物描写,Hes short and thin. He has gray hair and a gr

12、ay beard. He always wears a green sweater, blue pants and brown shoes. He likes to tell jokes and never stops talking. Look! He is telling a joke now. He is very old, but he is still (仍旧) very healthy and happy.,人物描写,写作-ing,你班举行演讲比赛，主题是我的朋友。你有两个笔友，你打算选择其中一位介绍给大家。你的讲稿包括：笔友来自哪里；家庭情况；外表；爱好；他想从事的职业；你对拥有

13、笔友的感受。（可选用表格提示）,My pen friend I have a pen pal in Canada . She name is Mary. I have some of her photo . Look ,she is tall and thin ,and is long straight hair. She have a brother ,Tom. They study in the same middle school. She likes read and sing .And she want to be a teacher. In weekends, she usually teach kids to sing. She think its very exciting and interesting!,例文,Her,photos,has,has