高考英语写作

1、Zhonghua-A Woman Scientist Dr. Zhong Hua, aged 52, is now working at a street plant as a senior woman engineer in Shanghai since she graduated from Beijing Steel and Iron Institute in 1964, she stuck to her study and research work. As a result, she got rich scientific fruits. Later in 1982, she was

2、sent to a university in Germany to go on with her studies. Through hard work, she got excellent results and received a doctors degree for physics. Soon after she became famous, a German steel company tried to invite her to work there and promised to give her high pay. But Dr.Zhong didnt accept the i

3、nvitation. She made up her mind to work for her motherland. Therefore, she returned to China in 1987. Now she has made great contributions to her country.,How to improve your writing,Writing skills,城西中学 英语组 刘 平,高考书面表达题,主要特点,记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明,空间顺序,时间顺序,逻辑顺序,能力要求,书面表达,六 步 法,书面表达六步法,幻灯片 23,怎样使用恰当的连接词,May 25

4、, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked w

5、hat was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _The salesgirl treated me

6、 coldly. _She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _She said that I made it dirty. _She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. _He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They c

7、hanged another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.,However,At the beginning,Later,In a word,I got so angry that,After that/ As soon as/ The moment,Just at that moment,1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort.

8、(使用倒装句) 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,How to enrich your writing,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until

9、he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 7.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语

10、从句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to schoo

11、l.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school !, This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor. However,it has changed a lot since 1978 ,and has been deve

12、loping very fast.,People here live a much better life than before .,书面表达：,Now it is taking on a new look.,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. ,But now it has been rebuilt and, which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All

13、the school-age children can study here., Whats more,they enjoy free education., May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,/ May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,结 论,审题，抓点 造句，成文 改错，誉写 背诵精彩范文,Thank you,书面表达六步法,一、审题,确定基本要素:5W1H,何 时 何 地 何 人 为 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主

14、要行为,What happened?,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Who did what?,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,要尽量剔除错误,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,卷面不工整扣5分,2002年,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。 讨论的组题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。 注意：1、信的开头以为你写好。2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：门票 entrance fee Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you abo

15、ut the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.,Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion we ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entran

16、ce fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. Whats more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On th

17、e other hand, 40 %of them think (hold the view) that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua,2002One possible version,04江苏卷 假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他

18、所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。,Dear Bob， Its very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now Id like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its eco

19、nomy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should

20、develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that well have a better hometown in future. Yours, Xiaohua,根据下列汉语提示，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。 现在广告越来越多地出现在报纸、杂志、电视、广播甚至街头。有些人认为广告能指导消费，使消费者了解产品、商家，且精心制作的广告能给人以艺术享受。而有些人认为某些虚假广告坑害消费者，也占了报刊太多