《四级作文辅导二》PPT课件.ppt

1、大学英语四级作文辅导（二）,Composition,作文的大体分类： 1.图表作文 2.阐明不同观点的作文 3.看图作文 4.议论文 5.应用文,一、图表作文:Useful Structure,From the graph ( table, chart ), we can clearly see the increase ( decrease ) of _. It added up to ( decreased ) _ in 19_, while it increased ( decreased ,were ,was ) to _in 19_. Therefore, it can be pre

2、dicated that _ is ( are ) to be on the rise ( on the decrease) in the future.,There are chiefly _ reasons for the increase ( decline ). In the first place, owing to _, _have realized the importance of _. Secondly, with the development of ( with the growth of, with the increase of , with the improvem

3、ent of ) _, _ have adopted more active and effective methods. In spite of whats mentioned above, there are some problems. Hence, the situation is still serious and how to improve _ is still a challenging task.,图表作文 Model 1,Graph1:The Production of TV SetsGraph2:The Production of Radios,From the grap

4、h, we can clearly see the increase in production of TV sets in a certain factory .In 1980, the production of TV sets in the factory was only 500 sets. While in 1990, after ten years, the output rose to 3,000 sets. At the same time, with the production of TV sets going up, the production of radios wa

5、s coming down. It fell from 3,000 sets in 1980 to 500 sets in 1990. Therefore, it can predicated that the output of TV sets are to be on the rise in the future. There are chiefly three reasons for the increase. In the first place, owing to the advances in science and technology, the electronic indus

6、try has been developing faster and faster, which makes it possible for factories to produce more advanced domestic equipment.,Secondly, with the improvement of the living standard, people have made more money and became richer and richer today. TV sets easily enter into almost all households. Moreov

7、er, thanks to the increasing desire for entertainment and being well-informed, people turn to TV to relax themselves. All these in turn demand factories to produce larger quantities and higher quality of TV sets. That is why the production of TV sets in the factory is on the increase, while that of

8、radios sets is on the decline,图表作文:Model 2,Diet and Health Outline 说明正常身体每日所需热能与蛋白质的量。 举例说明美国与印度每人每日所摄取的热能和蛋白质与寿命的关系并得出结论。,The Graph,From the graph, we can clearly see that a dietary intake of about 2500 calories and 40 grams of protein a day is a basic requirement for proper health. Therefore, it c

9、an predicated (assumed) that if the protein intake in the diet falls below a certain level, it will lead to malnutrition and disease.,From the graph, we can clearly see that a dietary intake of about 2500 calories and 40 grams of protein a day is a basic requirement for proper health. Therefore, it

10、can predicated (assumed) that if the protein intake in the diet falls below a certain level, it will lead to malnutrition and disease. Take the United States and India for example, on the one hand, the United Stated is a developed country, people have far more calories and protein than necessary for

11、 health. They have a daily intake of 3200 calories and 95.6 grams of protein, which considerably exceeds the basic requirement.,On the other hand, in the developing counties like India, people have fewer calories than necessary, almost everyone gets a much lower daily intake of calories than conside

12、red basic, that is ( namely ), 1810 instead of 2500, and a bit more than the minimum amount of protein, about 45 grams. Obviously, India has a much lower life expectancy than the United States, 47 instead of 71 years. It can be concluded that there is a close link between low intake of calories and

13、protein, and life expectancy. If you intake more calories and protein, your life is long, on the contrary / in contrast, your life is short.,图表作文: Model 3,Changes in People Diet Outline: state the changes in peoples diet in the past five years give possible reasons for the changes draw your own conc

14、lusion,The Graph,From the graph, we can clearly see that great changes have been taking place in peoples diet over the period from 1992 to 1996. The consumption of grain is decreasing year by year, while that of some high energy food, such as milk and meat, is increasing steadily. There are two majo

15、r reasons. In the first place, with the improvement in the living standard, people can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition. Secondly, people now pay more attention to the quality of it, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way. The

16、refore, they try their best to improve the structure of their food. From the above, we can see that peoples living level has been rising markedly in the past five years. And it can be concluded that there will be a more prosperous future waiting for us.,Different people have different attitudes / op

17、inions on the question /matter / problem. Answers to the question vary greatly. Some people think that this phenomenon is good, while others believe / feel that it is bad. As is known to all, everything has two sides. The following is what I think. / What I think is as follows./ Lets follow up.,二、阐明

18、不同观点的作文 Useful Structure,Some people are in favor of the problem.( there are some advantages.) In the first place, _; Secondly, _; Moreover,_; Whats more, (important of all) _. However, other people are disapproval of it.( there are some disadvantages.) First of all, _; In addition, _. Besides, _. W

19、hats worse, _. In short, there is some truth in the arguments, but, as far as I am concerned, I think that _.,阐明不同观点的作文Model 1,Advantages and Disadvantages of Uniform Different people have different attitudes / opinions on uniform. Answers to the question vary greatly. Some people think that this ph

20、enomenon is good, while others believe / feel that it is bad. As is known to all, everything has two sides. Lets follow up.,There are some advantages of uniform. In the first place, in the eyes of most people, uniform looks more professional than civilian clothes; Secondly, people have become condit

21、ioned to expect superior quality from a man in uniform, for example, repairman who wears a uniform tends to inspire more trust; Whats more, (important of all) uniform can save money, and they are often more comfortable and more durable.,However, there are some disadvantages. First of all, uniform la

22、cks variety and individuality, for instance, the wearer is generally stuck with it, without change, until retirement. In addition, their initial expense is greater than the cost of civilian clothes; Whats worse, some uniforms are expensive to maintain, requiring professional dry cleaning rather than

23、 the home laundry. In short, there is some truth in the arguments. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to wear a uniform, because it can provide the wearer with a professional identity.( I oppose it, because it tends to lose individuality.),阐明不同观点的作文Model 2,My viewpoint on Chinas Entry into WTO Outli

24、ne: 1入世带来的机遇 2入世带来的冲击与挑战 3我该怎么办,Different people have different attitudes / opinions on Chinas entry WTO. Answers to the question vary greatly. Some people think that it is good, while others believe / feel that it is bad. As is known to all, everything has two sides. Lets follow up.,There are some

25、advantages. In the first place, after Chinas WTO entry, China will open wider to the outside world, which will speed up its overall economic reform. In addition, China can make full use of the global sales network and channels, striving for great changes in market structure. Moreover, Chinas WTO ent

26、ry will help it absorb much more foreign capital, which will create countless job opportunities by setting up more jointly-funded and foreign-funded enterprises. Whats more, it will nourish textile and tourist industries.,However, it is inevitable that WTO entry will bring certain buffet and challen

27、ges. First of all, the all-round opening will exert greater pressure and competition on car, telecom and many other industries. Second, the demerits existing in domestic companies such as loose management, rigid system, outdated methods of operation and low level of technology and network applicatio

28、n will lower their competitiveness in the global economic market. Worse of all, many high expertise professionals may be lured away by joint ventures,In short, there is some truth in both arguments. What should I do when I am faced with such a situation? As far as I am concerned, we should grasp opp

29、ortunities and meet challenges brought about by the WTO accession ( entry ). As a college students we must equip ourselves with knowledge and true capacity so as to be more competitive in the society.,三、看图作文,Useful structures 1 Nowadays_ is fashionable_ But as is shown in the cartoon, _. As far as I

30、 am concerned, _ should _ . However,_ . The given cartoon is a forceful satire(讽刺) on the kind of _,Useful structures 2,As is shown by the two pictures, _ , While _.It is clear that _. Obviously, ( It is obvious that ) the drawer, through these two pictures, aims at revealing to us the _. This probl

31、em, if not solved immediately and properly, will _.,To solve the problem, both the _ and the _ should make a sustained effort. For the _, it should not only make _ and _ but also heighten peoples awareness of _. As for the broad masses of the people, they should also _. In a word, if the _ and the _

32、 have really realized the problem and work hard on it, there is certain to be an encouraging prospect in _.,Model 1,As is shown by the two pictures, there was a great deal of groundwater in the early 1900s, while in 1980s, the groundwater level was extremely low ( became less and less ). It is clear

33、 that the problem of the serious shortage of groundwater resources has arisen.,Obviously, ( It is obvious that ) the drawer, through these two pictures, aims at revealing to us the shortage and exhaustion of all natural resources. From 1900s to 1980s, within less than a century, the rapid growth in

34、population and fast development of industries, together with the weak sense of natural resource protection caused the excessive opening up and irrational use of natural resources,And this finally led to the serious shortage and exhaustion of not only groundwater but also many other natural resources

35、 including land, mineral resources, and so on. This problem, if not solved immediately and properly, will further endanger the existence and development of man himself.,To solve the problem, both the government and the society should make a sustained effort. For the government, it should not only ma

36、ke new laws and regulations but also heighten peoples awareness of natural resources protection. As for the broad masses of the people, they should also fully understand the importance of protecting forest reserves as well as other natural resources. In a word, if the government and the society have

37、 really realized the problem and work hard on it, there is certain to be an encouraging prospect in natural resources protection.,Model 2,As is shown by the two pictures, the mountain was covered with dense forest in 1990, while in 1980, there was nearly no tree left on the mountain. It is clear tha

38、t the severe deforestation (乱砍乱伐) has resulted in the serious shortage of forest reserves.,Obviously, ( It is obvious that ) the drawer, through these two pictures, aims at revealing to us the shortage and exhaustion of all natural resources. From 1910 to 1980, the rapid growth in population and fas

39、t development of industries, together with the weak sense of natural resource protection caused the excessive opening up and irrational use of natural resources. And this finally led to the serious shortage and exhaustion of not only forest reserves but also many other natural resources including la

40、nd, mineral resources, and so on. This problem, if not solved immediately and properly, will further endanger the existence and development of man himself.,To solve the problem, both the government and the society should make a sustained effort. For the government, it should not only make new laws a

41、nd regulations but also heighten peoples awareness of natural resources protection. As for the broad masses of the people, they should also fully understand the importance of protecting forest reserves as well as other natural resources. In a word, if the government and the society have really reali

42、zed the problem and work hard on it, there is certain to be an encouraging prospect in natural resources protection.,四、议论文Useful structures 1,_is a common phenomenon in our society. _is a very popular topic which is much talked about not only by _ but also by _. From_ to _, _. This is not only aimed

43、 at_ but also at_. As a result, _ , when it comes to _.,Therefore, China is challenging _ by advocating _. It focus on_. While _ will no longer play a key role in _. In short, As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe in the magic force of _. It seems that I have seen in my minds eye the more color

44、ful life, the looser environment, the more creative minds of _.,Education system is a common phenomenon in our society. Especially quality-oriented education is a very popular topic that is much talked about not only by students, teachers and parents, but also by the government. From primary school

45、to college, students, teachers and parents are struggling for high scores, because the current education system is not aimed at students quality, but also at developing their ability to perform well on the tests. As a result, many students even those with high scores often do poorly when it comes to

46、 the practical application of what theyve learned.,Model composition 1,Therefore, China is challenging examination-oriented education by advocating quality-oriented education. It will focus on the students ability as a whole. The examination results will no longer play a key role in evaluating a stu

47、dent. In short. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe in the magic force of this new policy. It seems that I have seen in my minds eye the more colorful life. The looser the learning environment is, the more creative minds the future students will have. Our education, so to speak, will bring up

48、 a new generation.,Model composition 2,Interpersonal relationship is a common phenomenon in our society. It is a very popular topic that is much talked about by people of one kind or another. Since we are social beings, we need get support from one another, especially under stressful circumstances.

49、Therefore, it is obvious that interpersonal relationship is of great importance. In the first place, those of us with strong social ties appear better able to copy with major life changes and daily difficulties, meanwhile, they live longer and have better health than those without such ties.,Secondl

50、y, social companionship can distract people from their worries and troubles, because engaging in leisure-time activities helps people to forget their troubles. Whats more, we can get other supports from good interpersonal relationship , such as financial aid, material help and needed services. In sh

51、ort , in the competitive society, the quality of our lives depends in large measure on our interpersonal ties. We should pay more attention it.,Model composition 3,打折是商家吸引顾客的一种手段 近年来人们对商家打折的兴趣日趋减少 打折不是市场的万能药 Discount is a common phenomenon in our society. It is a very popular topic which is much tal

52、ked about by all kinds of people. That is because discount is a business means of attracting customers and enhancing their desire of purchasing. After years craze about discount, however, discount is losing its appeal.,There are several reasons for this. For one thing, customers are more mature and

53、sensible. They are more careful about their money and have a more reasonable budget. For another, customers begin to suspect what is behind the attractive appearance of discount, for example, how much are the articles on sale really worth? And how much money may the sellers earn if they sell at orig

54、inal prices? As a result, discount seems to them more like deception than a good bargain.,In short, as far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that discount is not a cure-all for the sellers. Nowadays some sensible enterprises achieve success in competition by advocating improving quality and wideni

55、ng the range of products and using their marketing strategy. They will focus on the products quality and services as a whole. The market become increasingly mature, so the sellers have to adapt themselves to the change.,Useful structures 2,Nowadays the problem is even more serious. With_ . At the sa

56、me time , _ has become an obstacle on the path of _ . The problem of _ is put under extreme stress mainly because of three reasons. In the first place, _. Secondly,_. Finally,_. To relieve / solve_ , active and effective measures taken are indispensable. First of all _ And then_ . If_ can be well un

57、der way, it wont be long for_ to get an easy breath.,Model composition 4,Pollution (Preserving Environment ) Nowadays the problem of pollution is even more serious. With the pollution increasing, more and more crops, trees and plants are destroyed by bad air and water. Environmental pollution makes

58、many people fall ill. It does great harm to man, and it has become an obstacle on the path of human survive.,The problem of pollution is put under extreme stress mainly because of three reasons. In the first place, natural resources are used excessively to destroy ecological balance. Secondly, massive polluted waste is produced in the course of production. For example, to prevent insects, farmers mak