2017考研英语写作强化

1、2017考研英语写作强化,陈鑫 微信：yanshengtangcx,2016年全国硕士研究生招生考试考生进入复试的初试成绩基本要求（学术学位类）,2016年全国硕士研究生招生考试考生进入复试的初试成绩基本要求（专业学位类）,大纲要求,全国硕士研究生入学统一考试英语考试大纲(非英语考生)在考试说明部分要求考生掌握的写作技能：考生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等，还应能写一般描述性、叙述性和说明或议论性的文章。短文写作时，考生应能： (1)做到语法、拼写、标点正确、用词恰当; (2)遵循文章的特定文体格式; (3)合理组织文章结构，使其内容统一、连贯; (4)根据写

2、作目的和特定读者，恰当选用语域。,评分原则,B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有13分的调节分。 B节作文的字数要求是160200词。文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 如书写较差，以致影响理解，将分数降低一个档次。,评分标准,第五档: A节(910分), B节(1720分) 很好地完成了试题规定的任务： 包含所有内容要点; 使用丰富的语法结构和

3、词汇; 语言自然流畅，语法错误极少; 有效地采用了多种衔接手法，文字连贯，层次清晰; 格式和语域恰当贴切。 对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。,标准问题,Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on

4、the ANSWER SHEET.(20 points),历年题目,命题特征,作者：邢群麟 黑龙江科学技术 出版社出版,优秀青少年具备的30个特征,1.自信 2.自尊 3.自立 4.乐观 5.坚韧 6.勇敢 7.进取 8.勤奋 9.珍惜时间 10.注重行动,11.认真 12.负责 13.自制 14.诚实 15.正直 16.忠诚 17.善良 18.包容 19.谦逊 20.孝顺,21.节俭 22.感恩 23.尊重他人 24.乐于合作 25.分享 26.主动学习 27.积极创新 28.自省 29.热爱他人 30.崇尚运动,2001年,2002年,2003年,2004年,2005年,2006年,200

5、7年,2008年,2009年,2010年,2011年,2012年,2013年,2014年,2015年,2016年,优秀青少年具备的30个特征,1.自信 2.自尊 3.自立 4.乐观 5.坚韧 6.勇敢 7.进取 8.勤奋 9.珍惜时间 10.注重行动,11.认真 12.负责 13.自制 14.诚实 15.正直 16.忠诚 17.善良 18.包容 19.谦逊 20.孝顺,21.节俭 22.感恩 23.尊重他人 24.乐于合作 25.分享 26.主动学习 27.积极创新 28.自省 29.热爱他人 30.崇尚运动,优秀青少年具备的30个特征,1.Confidence 2.self-esteem 3

6、. Independence 4. Optimism. 5. Persistence. 6. Brevity. 7. Enterprising. 8. Diligence. 9. Cherishing time. 10. Action,11. Conscientiousness 12.Responsibility 13. Self-restraint 14. Honesty 15. Integrity 16. Loyalty 17. Kindness 18. Inclusiveness 19. Modesty 20. Filial piety,21. Thrifty 22. Gratefuln

7、ess 23. Respect 24. Cooperation 25. Sharing 26. Active learning 27. Innovation 28. Introspection 29. Benevolence 30. Athleticism,万能例子,1.Bill Gates （比尔盖茨） When Bill Gates made his decision to drop out from Harvard, he did not care too much of the result. Gates entered Harvard in 1973, and dropped out

8、 two years later when he and Allen started the engine of Microsoft. Many people did not understand why Gates gave up such a good opportunity to study in the worlds No.1 University. However, with size comes power, Microsoft dominates the PC market with its operating systems, such as MS-DOS and Window

9、s. Now, Microsoft becomes the biggest software company in the world and Bill Gates becomes the richest man in the world. 自信、勇敢、进取、勤奋、注重行动、创新,万能例子,2.Thomas Edison （托马斯 爱迪生） In 1879, after more than 1,000 trials and $40,000, Thomas Edison introduced an inexpensive alternative to candles and gaslight:

10、the incandescent lamp. Using carbonized filaments from cotton thread, his light bulb burned for two days. These bulbs were first installed on the steamship Columbia and have been lighting up the world ever since. 勤奋、注重行动、创新、主动学习,万能例子,3.Mother Teresa （特雷莎修女） Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace P

11、rize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India, thus gaining her the name Saint of the Gutters.” The devotion towards the poor won her respect throughout the world and the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979. She founded an order of nuns called the Missionaries of Charity

12、 in Calcutta, India dedicated to serving the poor. Almost 50 years later, the Missionaries of Charity have grown from 12 sisters in India to over 3,000 in 517 missions throughout 100 countries worldwide. 乐观、进取、负责、热爱他人,万能例子,4.Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela （纳尔逊罗利赫拉赫拉曼德拉） Mandela, the South African black p

13、olitical leader and former president, was awarded 1993 Nobel Peace Prize for his efforts to antiracism and antiapartheid. Nelson Mandela is one of the great moral and political leaders of our time: an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa

14、 won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the presidency of his country. Since his triumphant release in 1990 from more than a quarter-century of imprisonment, Mandela has been at the center of the most compelling and inspiring political drama in the world. As president of the African National Congress and

15、 head of South 勇敢、坚韧、善良、热爱他人,万能例子,5.Beethoven （贝多芬） Beethoven, the German Composer, began to lose his hearing in 1801 and was entirely deaf by 1819. However, this obstacle could not keep him from becoming one of the most famous and prolific composers in art history. His music, including 9 symphonies

16、, 5 piano concertos, several senates and so on, forms a transition from classical to romantic composition. 自立、坚韧、进取、勤奋、,万能例子,6.Raoul Wallenberg （瓦伦堡） Raoul Wallenberg was a young Swedish aristocrat. In 1944 he left the safety of his country and entered Budapest. Over the next year he outwitted the N

17、azis and saved as many as 100,000 Jews (he was not himself Jewish) from the death camps. In 1945 he was arrested by the Russians, charged with spying, and imprisoned in a Russian labor camp. 勇敢、正直,万能例子,7.Paul Revere（保罗 ） Our perceptive towards Paul Revere just illustrates this point. According to th

18、e romantic legend, he, galloping along of the dark from one farm house to another, alerted the people to the coming British. And of course the story emphasized the courage of one man, made him a hero in our history books. However, his heroism required a matrix of others who were already well-prepare

19、d to mobilize against the oppressor and he was just one part of a pre-arrange plan. Heroes like Revere have no usefulness apart from a society primed to act. 合作,万能例子,8.Henry Ford（亨利 福特） Henry ford, one of the most influential inventors in the history, was always inattentive in school. Once, he and a

20、 friend took a watch apart to probe the principle behind it. Angry and upset, the teacher punished him both to stay after school. Their punishment was to stay until they had fixed the watch. But the teacher did not know young fords genius, in ten minutes, this mechanical wizard had repaired the watc

21、h and was on this way home. It is imagination that invigorated Ford to make a through inquiry about things he did not know. He once plugged up the spout of a teapot and placed it on the fire. Then he waited to see what would happen. The water boiled and, of course, turned to steam. 创新,万能例子,9.Alexand

22、er Graham Bell （亚历山大 格雷厄姆贝尔） Not realizing the full impact it would have on society, Alexander Graham Bell introduced the first telephone to an amazed audience at Americas Centennial Exposition in Philadelphia in 1876. Within a year, Bell had installed 230 phones and established the Bell Telephone C

23、ompany, which was later transformed into AT 2) ; 3) . Therefore, I will be much obliged if you can help me . Please feel free to call me at for further questions. Thank you for your time and patience, and I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Ming,投诉信 Dear_, I am . (自我介绍) I feel b

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