8_读写任务评分标准解读

1、2008年高考(广东卷)英语读写任务评分标准解读佛山市南海区石门中学狮山校区 谢期繁资料来源：广东教育高中杂志2008年第9期广东卷高考英语读写任务主要考查考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力，满分25分。今年读写任务的抽样平均分为11.32，比去年略高。下面是2008年高考广东卷读写任务的考场评分标准。一、评分标准在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：1. 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分；2. Mike的发言概括部分必须包括以下要点：(1)Some basic life skills are necessary for a freshman to adjust himself to the college

2、 life.(2)Mike loved college, which offers students good facilities and rich activities.(3)To Mike, the important thing is to get himself active in things. 3. 写作内容应该包括：(1)对中学生活的感受，考生可以泛泛而谈，也可以谈具体的某一方面；(2)想象中的大学生活，内容可以包括理想的大学、进大学的心情（如：兴奋、担心等）、理想的大学生活（包括校园环境、学习环境、师生关系、社团活动等）等；(3)概况中学生活与大学生活之间的差异，比如：大学生

3、活更丰富、更自由，或大学生活更富有挑战性、更需要独立性等等。(4)给分时在通篇把握的基础上，考虑要点是否完整，语法是否规范，句型是否多样，词汇是否丰富。各档次的给分范围和要求：项目分值评分标准概括5按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。3基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信息，有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，有较多的抄袭。语言结构不

4、够准确，行文不够规范。0-1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作18-20包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或极少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。14-17包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。11-13包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误较好地运用了合适

5、的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。7-10包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性一般。4-6只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄源文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。1-3只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。0以下几种情况，给0分：(1)完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）(2)文不对题(3)只写一些零散的单词

6、，完全没有表达完整的内容二、解读标准下面以15篇专家评分的考场作文为例，解读今年的评分标准。示例1At first Mike didnt adjust himself well to the college life because of the lack of basic life skills and homesick. However, he got himself active in things and gradually enjoyed his new life. It is obvious that high school life is quite different from

7、 college life. We generally study the basic knowledge and seldom work out a project by ourselves. Additionally, most of us live with our parents and we arent independent enough to live alone. High school life is simpler than college life. However, college life is more challenges, Students not only s

8、tudying their own majors but also learn how to realize their dreams. They meet more new friends and gradually go into the real society. I enjoy my high school life a lot, which provides me with lots of useful skills and valuable experience. But I discover that I still lack some important life skills

9、, which requires me to improve myself. In order to adjust myself to the coming college life, I decide to gain more knowledge about the society and life skills. I will try my best to become an independent and mature college student.All in all, I am looking forward to the new college life. I will prep

10、are myself well and make improvement bit by bit.专家给分：420。 评析：该篇作文属于第一档。其概括部分能按照要求概括了原文的主要信息。语言结构基本正确，行文基本规范。写作部分包含题目所给全部内容要点，主题明确，内容丰富，词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且极少语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。虽然写作部分有些许语法错误（其中homesick应该用名词形式，即homesickness；college life is more challenges应为challenging），但其篇章结构严格按照写作内容分段写，较为直观，受到专家的青睐，

11、给了20分的满分。示例2According to what is mentioned that Mike shares his experience in his years of college. After the hard adjustment, he started to enjoy all the interesting activities in the college life.Actually, college life is quite different from high school life indeed. It reminds me of some unforget

12、table experience that having P.E. lesson together, going home together, copying others homework and so on.As beautiful the high school life is, I prefer to look forward for my college life. In my opinion, I will gain more freedom including playing and studying in college. I am eager to making practi

13、ce to what I most interested in . All in all, what I love most is college life.Moreover, I realize some effective measures should be taken by myself to adjust to the new life because of the difference between college life and the high school life. Obviously, I should begin to study living alone whic

14、h I dont need to consider then I was a high school student. As difficult there will be, I ought to try my best to overcome what happen without any assistance. Furthermore, the most important thing is I should make a daily list to make me adjust to college life, even social life quite easier.In any c

15、ase, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that I am ready to have my own college life.专家给分：3+16评析：该篇作文的概括部分基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。写作部分包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。示例3After hearing Mikes speech, I know how different betwe

16、en high school life and college life. In college, we should do and handle everything by ourselves. However, we will have a better study condition and make more friends in college.In my opinion, my high school life is so comfortable but unfree. I can not but admit that parents prepare everything for

17、me makes me feel convenient. However, their carefulness sometimes let me drop in a sense of unfreedom and made me lack necessary life skills.As far as I concerned, college life is total different from my high school life. In college, I can do everything I like and gives us freedom, we would think ho

18、me seriously.My ideal college life is that I can take part in dance team and make certain amount of friends. I can plan my time well and study freely. I can go to library any time.College life is so different from high school life. However, like it or not , we should adjust it. we should ask teacher

19、s or roommates for help.专家给分：2+14评析：此篇考场作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息。没有按要求概括Mike的发言要点，用错人称。作文部分包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。有个别用词错误。运用了一些合适的语言结构，有一些语法错误。示例4The lecture belonged to Mike said that he couldnt adjust the life in college at first and he must do any do anything he never did

20、before. However, he adapt himself to the life in college gradually. Then, he also talk us about the colourful activities in college as well as the way of getting together with each other.As far as for me, the life in senior school was both happy and unhappy. I can learn a lot of knowledge in my seni

21、or school from my teachers as well as I have get along with my classmate to do amount of things. we were trying our best and studying hard to realize our dream.In my opinion, the life in college is different from senior school. It is full of freedom and colourful. And them, we should do anything in

22、fresh, is that right. So I feel the life in college is of great comfort. I think that we havent anybody take care of us and blame us strictly in college as senior school. We should uncomfortable as well adjustless. Otherwise, I believe that we must adjust it through our hard work.I think that I will

23、 practice do some housework and take care of myself to prepare myself for college life.专家给分：2+12评析：此篇考场作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含一些不相关的信息，语言结构不够准确，行文不够规范。包含题目所给大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。有个别用词错误。有些合适的语言结构，有一定的语法错误。示例5In Mikes first year of college, he know some basic life skills, could joined intere

24、sting activities and made more friend, which is diffent from high school, he enjoy his college life.In my senior high school, I think that it is little bored and dull. Because I have a lot of work to do and even I have not time to relax myself sometimes. And some times I plastics from morning to aft

25、er, I faced the books all the time. It is so bored life!In my eyes, the colleges life should be full of rich and colourful. As a college student, we only have classes in morning. and we should have much time to know by ourselves and do our things. Such as we can go to libraried to read books . we wa

26、nt to, do some activites in varies club. And we should have many actives to make friend and learn some social skills.I think I will try my best my colleges life if college life has a great difference to my sinor life. I am confident to adult it.专家给分：2+10评析：此篇考场作文概括部分不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较多不相关的信息，语言结构不够

27、准确，行文不够规范。作文部分包包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关词汇有限，有较多的用词错误语言结构出现较多的语法错误。示例6Mike is very happy because he can join some pubs, easier to make friends and can know some basic life skills in college.In high school, we can make some friends and you can study andtive in a small place. I feel very happy

28、 in three years high school life. I have take part in many activety with classmate.I think I will study moor freedom in college, making some friends indeep and can take part in many interesting pubs and clubs. But I should live in school without my parents and have less time to care them.When I stud

29、y in college, I will study hard and more care about my parents.专家给分：2+6示例7Mike said that he love the colleges life, and he think it is usefull and happy. Even he must accept the new life, and be most do many he never do .Join in a common ground can make friend.I think my schools life is nevos. Becau

30、se I must no many homework, even I dont like to do it. But the classmates are very friendly. And the activity is happy.I image that my college life is wonderful. Because it have many thing that I have never do. And I think it is open.专家给分：2+5示例8Mike is good man who has good college. From he first co

31、llege to last college, he hard to finish it. His last college is become advancer and had a common ground.I though, my middle schools life is warmly. my parents usually treave with me until grade 3. I usually plays football with my father. I though it is my happy time.I will go to university. I thoug

32、h my college unerity is may make many friends. Do some works in common. Because a good team and have many good thing wait for me.I know, middle schools life and university life have difference. But, I feel. I sure I can and I will a good unerity student. I ready to my anything. I will have my colleg

33、e unverrity life.专家给分：1+4评析：没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。写作部分只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。示例9Mike very love life in the school. Mike never thought of in the high school. The Student Union organizes various parties wvery more.I love the high school. My teacher get

34、 me every more.In my school much every biness.So student so high.have some firend.专家给分：1+1评析：没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息。只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确。词汇极其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。示例10But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book. laundry, and the things yo

35、u have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! The Students Union organizes various parties every week.This is published as The Good University Guide, which features over fifty tables ranking universities by degree subject. It also includes course charts, teaching and resear

36、ch ratings, and advice on choosing your course. If youve enjoyed reading this magazine and want to keep up with the latest UK student news and views, place your order now for issues 3 and 4.专家给分：0+0评析：完全照抄原文。三、备考建议1. 注重平时书写的训练，保持卷面的整洁。由于评卷时间紧，评卷量大，评卷人员高度集中注意力。平均每人每天要评四百份试卷，基本上不到一分钟的时间要阅完一份卷并给出一个合理的分

37、数。在这种情况下，如果考生卷面差，就会严重影响到考生的成绩。所有考生的读写任务题都要进行二评，有时两位评卷老师的得分可能会相差10分之多（当然这种情况要经过第三位老师进行三评）。究其原因，主要是因为考生的书写潦草，卷面差。书写问题非一日之功，一定要从高一开始就抓好，最好先临摹英文字帖，一定要注意字迹的大小问题，尽量做到不要太小，另外最好不要出现涂改现象，每次写作时应该先列提纲，想好了再写。2. 写好句子，夯实基础。读写任务的话题一般都是贴近学生生活，为考生所熟悉，考生会“有话可说”，在内容上，大部分学生都可以按要求写。但从评卷的情况来看，考生所写的句子错误较多。因此，重视句子写作训练至关重要。

38、这是进行读写任务训练前最基本也是最重要的一环。首先要求学生写好简单句，抓住所要表达的内容的主干，即主语部分和谓语部分，然后添加一些成分，在写好简单句的基础上再进行扩展，例如并列句、复合句以及一些特殊句型的句子。在句子写作时，特别注意时态、语态的正确运用，单复数、语序、人称等问题也需要关注。其次是熟练使用一些特殊的句式，例如强调句型、倒装句型等。3. 加强针对性的训练。在对读写任务进行题型训练时，要做到“要点完整，语言规范，句型多样，词汇丰富”。首先，是写摘要训练。在读写任务提供的读的文章中找到每一段的主题句，然后找出关键词。所写的摘要围绕这些关键词进行组织句子。以今年高考的读写任务为例，文章的

39、第一段的关键词是adjustment和basic life skills, 第二段是love，第三段有 get active in, 评卷教师评分的依据主要在这几个关键词上。另外抓关键词不一定就不用原文的词，不一定就非得用另一个什么词来代替原文的某个词，这与题目要求不直接引用原文的句子是有区别的。其次，是对读写任务写的训练。在高考的评卷中，考生作文的段落是否清晰很重要，评卷老师在较短的时间内要给出一个分数，只能是抓住段落的要点了。因此，在训练写120词的论述或叙述时，一定要按照写作要求的要点进行分段，每段为一个要点。扣紧要求，一步一步来写；这就相当于你按顺序回答问题。每段的内容比例要适当，动笔

40、前为每一部分的内容设定好写几句话。有的同学常常对有话可讲的内容尽情地随意发挥，洋洋洒洒一大段，而把该写的要点部分漏掉或没有足够充分的表达。4. 加强对高级词汇和高级句型的运用。在阅卷速度较快的情况下，要想引起评卷老师的注意，得高分，在保持卷面整洁、书写漂亮的情况下，还必须使用高级词汇、多样的句式和合理的过渡。因为这牵涉到同一档次的得分高低问题，如同属于1820档次，若考生正确运用了一些高级词汇和高级句型，就可以给到20分，否则就有可能只有18分。下面这篇是考场高分作文，评卷场老师评为满分25分。 Mike said it was tough to accomplish the general

41、adjustment but he began to enjoy himself after that due to various activities. He advised freshmen to be active in order to make new friends.As far as I am concerned, Im preparing to enter a university and leaving the high school where Ive been studying for three years. I really had a great time in

42、this school where I grew from a nave kid to a grown-up. I think I will absolutely miss my life here and miss every single person that I met here. But in the meantime, I am looking forward to my new life in the college. I sometimes daydream that maybe Ill bump into a handsome boy, have fire friendly

43、roommates and be taught by a group of fabulous teachers. It would be wonderful if this ideal daydream come into reality!However, life is like a box of chocolate and youll never know whats inside until you open it. Of course the college life will greatly differ from my previous life in high school. But Im an active girl and Ill do what Mike taught us totake part in various activities. Im sure Ill make a