我手写我心新目标8下英语作文期末复习.ppt

1、我手写我心,新目标英语八年级(下)书面表达专题课件,By Mr. Zhu 星沙英语 ,Hello, dear friends! Are you afraid of writing English compositions? In fact, they are very simple. We neednt fear them. We all know, “英语作文不可怕，不过就是几句话！” Right? Now, here are some of our compositions. Lets take a look together. And think how to correct the m

2、istakes. OK, lets begin!,八年级下Units 78定时作业 书面表达（10分）,每个人在日常生活中都会遇到一些令人气愤的事情。请你根据下面提示，以第一人称英语写一篇短文。要求包含下面提供的信息。不少于60词。 提示：你的邻居喜欢听音乐，甚至晚上音乐声也很大，影响了你的生活和学习。为此，你很生气。最后，你找到了你的邻居，你的邻居表示歉意。 参考词汇：neighbor, make noise, cant stand any more, would you mind? say sorry.,原文一：(08.2 2007-6-15 8 分),Dear neighborhood,

3、 I know youre very happy, but I cant stand you and your family any more. Would you mind turning down the music? Please dont make noisy everyday. Your music sound is very big. Its infulus my life and learn. So Im angry with you. Im say sorry to you. Yours, sincelly, Mandy.,修改稿：,Dear neighborhood (nei

4、ghbor), I know youre very happy, but I cant stand you and your family any more. Would you mind turning down the music? Please dont make noisy everyday (make any noise / so much noise every day). Your music sound (删去) is very big (very / too loud). Its infulus (It infuences) my life and learn (study)

5、. So Im angry with you. Im say sorry to you. (I think you should say sorry to me.) Yours, (删去逗号)sincelly, Mandy. (删去句号),原文二：(08.2 2007-6-15 7 分),My neighbors are like listening music. And they listening music everyday. That made a lot of noise. Its bad for my life and study. One night, my neighbors

6、were listening music. The music was very loudly. I cant sleep. So I was very angry. I cant stand it any more. So I found my neighbor: “Would you mind turning down the music?” “No, not at all.” And they say sorry to me.,修改稿：,My neighbors are (删去) like listening to music. And they listening music ever

7、yday (listen to music every day). That made (It makes) a lot of noise. Its bad for my life and study. One night, my neighbors were listening music. The music was very loudly (loud). I cant sleep. So I was very angry. I cant (couldnt) stand it any more. So I found my neighbor: (went to my neighbors h

8、ouse and said,) “Would you mind turning down the music?” “No, not at all.” And they say (said) sorry to me.,原文三：(08.2 2007-6-15 6 分),My neighbor like to listen to music. Sometimes, them make noise very lound. Influence my life and study. I cant stand it. I find my neighbor, told them “Would you mind

9、 turning down the music?” Usually, Im mad at them. However neighbor say sorry. I dont ague with them.,修改稿：,My neighbor (neighbors) like to listen to music. Sometimes, them make noise very lound (they make too much loud noise). Influence (It influences) my life and study. I cant stand it (any more).

10、(So, one day, ) I find my neighbor (went and found my neighbors.) (I) told them “Would you mind turning down the music?” Usually, Im mad at them. However (, my ) neighbor say sorry. (So) I dont ague (argue) with them.,原文四：(08.2 2007-6-15 7 分),I cant stand my neighborhood. Because my neighborhood lik

11、e listenning the music. I think this music is noisy. So I say: “Dear Mr Green, Would you mind turning dwon the music.” Mr Green say: “Oh sorry. This music is very much. So I forget.” I say: “Dear Mr Green, thank you very much.”,修改稿：,I cant stand my neighborhood (neighbor). Because my neighborhood (n

12、eighbor) like listenning the (likes listening to) music. I think this (the) music is (too) noisy. So I say: “Dear Mr Green, Would you mind turning dwon (down) the music.” Mr Green say (says): “Oh sorry. This music (This piece of music) is very much (great / very beautiful). So I forget (forgot).” I

13、say: “Dear Mr Green, thank you very much.”,原文五：(08.1 2007-6-15 7 分),I have a neighbor. He very like to listen music. He often listen music all day. Ever at night. The music is make so much noisy that I cant stadly well. One day, I cant stand so londly noisy any more. So I went to his house and asked

14、, “Would you mind turing down the music. Because I cant stadly well. And I dont have a good rest.” Finally, the neighbor said sorry to me and agree ture down the music. Im very happy. Because I have a good rest and I can stady quaitly now.,修改稿：,I have a neighbor. He very like to listen music (He lik

15、es to listen to music very much). He often listen (listens to) music all day. Ever (And he plays music even louder) at night. The music is (删去) make (makes) so much noisy (noise) that I cant stadly (study) well. One day, I cant (couldnt) stand so londly noisy (the loud noise) any more. So I went to

16、his house and asked, “Would you mind turing (turning) down the music. Because (删去) I cant stadly (study) well. And I dont (cant) have a good rest (every night).” Finally, the neighbor said sorry to me and agree ture down (agreed to turn down) the music. Im very happy. Because (, because) I (can) hav

17、e a good rest and I can stady quaitly (study quietly) now.,二七年春期定时作业八年级英语（Units 12）学生作文,书面表达（10分） 每个人都有自己的理想，请以My Ideal为题写一篇畅谈理想的作文。 要求：1、词数80词左右；2、写出自己的真实感受；3、提示词必须用上。 提示：want to be, in the future, will, come true.,原文1：,My Ideal (08.3 ) In ten years, I think Ill be a actress and live in Shanghai. B

18、ecause I hard (heard / think) Shanghai is very nice. As a actress, I think Ill act a lot of interesting movies. And I think Ill become famous. I want to keep pets. I love pets very much. And my best pets are cat and dog. I think them are very cult. I might even want to travel the world. But niw, I h

19、ave to finish high school and will finish college. (词数：85词；作文得分：8分；全卷得分：88分),修改稿：,My Ideal (08.3 ) In ten years, I think Ill be a actress (an actress) and live in Shanghai. Because I hard (heard / think) Shanghai is very nice. As a actress (an actress), I think Ill act a lot of interesting movies. A

20、nd I think Ill become (very) famous. I want to keep pets. I love pets very much. And my best pets are cat and dog (cats and dogs). I think them (they) are very cult (cute). I might even want to travel the world. But niw (now), I have to finish high school and will finish (删去) college.,原文2：,My Ideal

21、(08.1 ) I want to be a famous basketball player. I will make a lot of money. I will buy some gitfs for my friend, family and teacher. I will travel around the world. I will meet lots of people. I will have any pets. I am like parrot very much. I will live in Shanghai in the future. I hope my dream w

22、ill come true in the future. (词数：67词；作文得分：9分；全卷得分：分),修改稿：,My Ideal (08.1 ) I want to be a famous basketball player. I will make a lot of money. I will buy some gitfs for my friend (friends), family and teacher (teachers). I will travel around the world. I will meet lots of people. I will have any pe

23、ts (pet). I am (删去) like parrot very much. I will live in Shanghai in the future. I hope my dream will come true in the future.,3,My Ideal (08.3 ) I is a student. My Ideal very poorly. I want to be a doctor. But I in doctor very I will is good doctor. (可以这样把话写通顺：I am a student. I have a good ideal.

24、I want to be a doctor in the future. I must study very hard now. I will be a good doctor. And I can help many sick people. I believe that my dream will come true. ) (词数：24词；作文得分：3分；全卷得分：43分),范文,My Ideal (Mr. Zhu写的范文) Hello, dear friends! Let me tell you something about my ideal, OK? I think I want t

25、o be a computer programmer in the future. Then I will be very famous. Ill work and live in Beijing because its a very beautiful city. Ill meet many interesting people there. And Ill live in an apartment with my family, because I love my family very much. Ill keep many pets. But now, my house is too

26、small, and my sister hates them very much. Well, this is my ideal. I hope my dream will come true soon. What about yours? Can you tell me? (字数：102词；作文得分：9.99999分；全卷得分：99.99999分),8下半期考试书面表达,八、书面表达 （5分） “英语作文不可怕，不过就是几句话！”同学们，只要你们平时注意英语知识的积累，多读多写，英语作文就肯定能拿高分！现在，就请用你们的最熟悉的单词和最简单的句子，向大家介绍一下你自己吧，题目就用“Myse

27、lf”，至少写5句话。,原文一：,Myself (08.2 ) My name is Mary. I am a outgoing gril. I have long black hear and I have black big eyes. I think I popular at school. I have too munh frinds. And My best frinds is Lily. She very shy. Many pepole said we both look like. But I dont thik so. This is me. If you want to k

28、now me, pleace write a letter for me. (字数：67词；作文得分：3.5分（满分为5分）；全卷得分：60分),修改稿：,Myself (08.2 ) My name is Mary. I am a (an) outgoing gril (girl). I have long black hear (hair) and I have black big (big black) eyes. I think I (am) popular at school. I have too munh frinds (too many friends). And My bes

29、t frinds (friend) is Lily. She (is) very shy. Many pepole (people) said (say) we both look like (look the same). But I dont thik (think) so. This is me. If you want to know me, pleace (please) write a letter for (to) me.,原文二：,Myself (08.1 ) Hello, everyone! I am is a middle school student. I live in

30、 Yue jiang twon. Im is a good student. I like English every much. I think Is good at write. I like math, too. I usually read books in classroom. I like make friends. If you want to become my friends, you can meet me at Yuejiang Middle School. My name is Mary. (字数：64词；作文得分：3.5分（满分为5分）；全卷得分：85.5分),修改稿

31、：,Myself (08.1 ) Hello, everyone! I am is (删去) a middle school student. I live in Yue jiang twon (Yuejiang Town / the town of Yuejiang / a town called Yuejiang). Im is (删去) a good student. I like English every (very) much. I think Is (Im) good at write (writing). I like math, too. I usually read boo

32、ks in (the) classroom. I like make (making) friends. If you want to become my friends, you can meet me at Yuejiang Middle School. My name is Mary.,原文三：,Myself (08.3 ) Hello! My name is Selia. Im a student. Im 14 years old. And Im a Chinese. I like playing ping-pong and basketball. I like eat some he

33、althy food. my favorit stars are 183 club. I love them very much. I love listening to music and watching TV. I think its very interesting. I like English, and I like my English teacher too. Are you like me, I want to make friends with you. (字数：73词；作文得分：4.5分（满分为5分）；全卷得分：85.5分),修改稿：,Myself (08.3 ) Hel

34、lo! My name is Selia. Im a student. Im 14 years old. And Im a (删去) Chinese. I like playing ping-pong and basketball. I like eat (eating) some (删去) healthy food. my (My) favorit (favorite) stars are 183 club. I love them very much. I love listening to music and watching TV. I think its very interesting. I like English, and I like my English teacher too. Are (Do) you like me, (?) I want to make friends w