关于食品安全的基础写作.ppt

基础写作 basic writing,关于食品安全话题,基础写作 假如几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品，请同学吃，他们吃后食物中毒，肚子痛，被送往附近的医院治疗后脱险。请给报社写一封信描述他们食物中毒及脱险的经过，呼吁社会重视食品安全问题。 【内容要点】： 1越来越多的食品存在安全问题 2买回食品共食 3中毒、肚子痛 4送医院治疗后脱险 5希望全社会都重视食品安全,【写作要求和标准】 1、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容; 2、将5个句子组成连贯的短文; 3、注意短文内容的完整性和连贯性。开头已经写好。 参考词语：中毒 get poisoned 肚子痛 have stomachache 脱险 out of danger Dear editor, Im writing to tell you something about the problem of food safety.,写作前准备： step1. 把要写的内容概括成5个汉语句子： 1.越来越多的食品存在安全问题 。 2.几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品,请同学吃。 3.他们吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。 4.被送往附近的医院治疗后脱险。 5.希望全社会都重视食品安全。,1.越来越多的食品存在安全问题 。,安全：safty 存在：exist,2.几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品，请同学吃。,超市：supermarket,3.他们吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。,中毒： get poisoned 肚子痛：stomachache,4.被送往附近的医院治疗后脱险。,附近的: nearby 治疗: examine and give some medicine 吃药：take medicine,5.希望全社会都重视食品安全。,重视：pay more attention to /attach importance to,1.越来越多的食品存在安全问题 。,Food safety exists more and more serious question.,2.几天前你的同学从某超市买回食品，请同学吃。,A couple of/A few days ago/The other day, one of my classmates bought a bag of food from a supermarket and some roommates were invited to enjoy the food.,Step2: 写出简单句并进行修改,3.他们吃后食物中毒，肚子痛。,After they finished it, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches (with their faces pale).,After finishing it, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with their faces pale.,4.被送往附近的医院治疗后脱险。,They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital, A doctor examined them, and gave them some medicine 。 They were out of danger/escaped from danger soon after they took the medicine.,They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital, where a doctor examined them and gave them some medicine and they were out of danger soon after taking the medicine.,5.希望全社会都重视食品安全。,I hope that the whole society pay more attention to food safety.,适当加上一些内容，让句子更连贯 (This accident made me realize the seriousness of the food safety problem, so) I sincerely hope that the whole society pay more attention to food safety.,Dear editor, Im writing to tell you something about the problem of food safety. Nowadays, food safety exists more and more serious question. A couple of days ago, one of my classmates bought a bag of food from a supermarket and some roommates were invited to enjoy the food. Unfortunately, after finishing it, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches,Step3:把五个句子用适当的连接词，过渡词连成一篇较通顺的短文。最后认真检查。,with their faces pale. They were quickly sent to a nearby hospital, where a doctor examined them and gave them some medicine and they were out of danger soon after taking the medicine. This accident made me realize the seriousnes