高中英语Unit3AhealthylifePeriodFiveWriting—Persuasivewriting：letterofadvice教案.docx

Period FiveWritingPersuasive writing：letter of advice本单元的写作要求是写一封劝告信，属于应用文写作范畴。劝告信的目的是让人们的行为更加合理，对达到某一目的或实现某一愿望更加有利。一般说来，劝告比建议语气更重一些，有时还略带几分强制的意味，像“Youdbetter.”就属于这一类句型。劝告信可采用“三段式”写法，第一段提出问题；第二段写“三要三不要”；第三段表明自己的看法和期望。(一)开头常用句式引出话题1Iamsorryyouhavehadsomuchtroublein.2Youhaveaskedformyadviceon.andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.(二)主体常用句式提出建议1Inmyopinion，itwouldbewiseforyoutotakethefollowingaction.2Firstofall，.；Meanwhile，.；Inaddition，.3Itsimportantforyouto.4Inthefirstplace，Iwouldalsorecommendabalanceddiet.5Whynotdrinkalittle，exercise，stopsmokingandeatmorefruit?(三)结尾常用句式提出期望1Cheerup！Yourtroubleswillsoonbeover.2Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.3Dontloseheart，whateverhappens.4Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.5PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友John写信询问你关于如何过低碳生活的有关情况。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封100词左右的回信，建议他也过低碳生活。1陈述理由：为什么要过低碳生活？(环境质量日益恶化等)2如何过低碳生活？提出至少三条建议。(必要时才开灯；让电器按节能方式运转；坐公交车或骑自行车；限制塑料袋；垃圾分类等)注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：过低碳生活：livealowcarbonlife审题1确定体裁：本文为建议信；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。谋篇本文可以分为三个部分：第一部分，点出写建议信的原因。第二部分，具体可行的建议：正确使用电器；首选公交车或自行车；限制塑料袋；垃圾分类。第三部分，提出希望。必备词汇1日益恶化gofrombadtoworse2一种做的好方法agoodwaytodo.3执行carryout4开灯turnonthelights5让运转keep.working6是某人的首选beonesfirstchoice7排放emission关键句式1过低碳生活是减少温室气体排放的一种好方法。Livingalowcarbonlifeisagoodwaytoreducetheemissionofgreenhousegases.2我将用以下几种方法执行我的计划。Ishallcarryoutmyplaninthefollowingways.3只有在必要时，我才会开灯。Ishallturnonthelightsonlywhenitisnecessary.4为了节省能源，我将让冰箱和空调以低碳模式运转。Ishallkeeptherefrigeratorandairconditionersworkinginthelowcarbonmodetosaveenergy.5公交车或自行车将是我的首选。Thebusorbicyclewillbemyfirstchoice.6当我购物时，我将限制使用塑料袋。WhenIgoshopping，Iwilllimittheuseofplasticbags.7只要有可能，我将把垃圾分成不可回收垃圾和可回收垃圾。Whenever/Nomatterwhenitispossible，Iwillseparatemyrubbishintononrecyclableandrecyclablewaste.句式升级1用as引导的原因状语从句连接句1和句2。Aslivingalowcarbonlifeisagoodwaytoreducetheemissionofgreenhousegases，Ishallcarryoutmyplaninthefollowingways.2用并列连词and连接句3和句4。Ishallturnonthelightsonlywhennecessaryandkeeptherefrigeratorandairconditionersworkinginthelowcarbonmodetosaveenergy.3用notonly.butalso.且notonly位于句首合并句6和句7。NotonlywillIlimittheuseofplasticbagswhenIgoshopping，butalsoIwillseparatemyrubbishintononrecyclableandrecyclablewastewheneverpossible.用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。参考范文DearJohn，YouhaveaskedformyadviceonhowtolivealowcarbonlifeandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.Withtheenvironmentalpollutiongoingfrombadtoworse，Isincerelysuggesttoallthatweshouldlivealowcarbonlifetoday.Aslivingalowcarbonlifeisagoodwaytoreducetheemissionofgreenhousegases，Ishallcarryoutmyplaninthefollowingways.Tobeginwith，Ishallturnonthelightswhennecessaryandkeeptherefrigeratorandairconditionersworkinginthelowcarbonmodetosaveenergy.Additionally，thebusorbicyclewillbemyfirstchoice.Lastbutnotleast，notonlywillIlimittheuseofplast