2023年高考英语二模试题分项汇编-10作文（教师版）（上海）

专题10作文-学易金卷：2023年高考英语二模试题分项汇编（教师版）

一、建议信

1.（2023•上海长宁•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校将开设讲座“上海老洋房”，现就讲座内容征求学生的意见。请

给负责的王老师写封邮件，具体提出你的建议。内容须包括：

1）你对讲座内容的具体建议；

2）简述你的理由。

［答案】DearMr./Ms.Wang,

Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents,adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheold

western-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.Hence,Iamwritingtosharemyviews.

First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.Besides,anotheraspectshouldbeincludedintothelectureistheprofound

culturebehindthesehistoricalbuildings.Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.Lastbut

notleast,howaboutofferingtheaudiencesomeusefultipsastohowtopreservethesepreciousbuildings?

Onlybyknowingthatcanweprotectthemefficiently.

Asabigfanoftheseoldbuildings,Isincerelyhopeyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Respectfullyyours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份为学校即将举办的“上海老洋房”讲座提

供建议，提出讲座应该包含什么内容，并指明提出这些建议的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

关于：about—^concerning

深厚的：de叩一profbund

保护：protect—♦preserve

考虑：consider-*takesth.intoconsideration

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeep

impressionoftheirappearance.

拓展句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses,whichundoubtedlywouldleaveusa

deepimpressionoftheirappearance.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.（运用了itis+被强调部分

+lhat+其他成分的强调句句型）

[高分句型2]Learningthatourschoolisseekingfbrstudents'adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheold

western-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.（运用了that引导的表语从句）

二、邀请信

2.（2023•上海嘉定•统考二模）Directions:WritecmEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长,

影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊，在信中你必须：

1.简要介绍此次“国宝展”；

2.给出理由再次劝说王磊同往。

【答案】DearWangLei,

I'msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasureExhibition.This

exhibitionhasdisplayedthenationaltreasuresofthemainlandandTaiwan,whichisavaluableopportunity.

AlotoffamousChinesetraditionalpaintingbytopartistswillbeexhibitedthere.Youcanseesome

famouspaintersdrawingChinesepaintingsonthespot,whichIthink,willcertainlyattractthevisitors,eyes.I

thinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyour

understandingofChina.Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucan

relieveyourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.

Again,Isincerelyinviteyoutogototheexhibitionwithme.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiMing

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李明，你得知美术馆将要举办“国宝展”，邀请好友王磊周

末同往。但王磊担心参观耗时太长，影响课业复习，婉拒了你的邀请。写一封电子邮件给王磊。

【详解】1.词汇积累

拒绝：turndown—»refuse

宝贵的：valuable—>precious

机会：opportunity—+chance

力口强：enhance—^strengthen

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Ithinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibitionandfurtherenhanceyour

understandingofChina.

拓展句：Ithinkyoucanlearnmoreabouttraditionalculturethroughthisexhibition,whichfurtherenhanceyour

understandingofChina.

【点睛】［高分句型1］【'msorrytohearthatyouturneddownmyproposalofvisitingNationalTreasure

Exhibition.（运用了that引导宾语从句）

［高分句型2］Besides,asthesayinggoes,allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy,soyoucanrelieve

yourselffromtheheavystudyloadsfromthis.（运用了as引导非限制性定语从句）

三、感谢信/祝贺信

3.（2023・上海崇明•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，你校的英文报向即将毕业的高三学生征文，给高中三年来最值得你感

谢的一个人或一件事表达感谢。你有意投稿，内容包括：

》描述这个人或这件事；

A表达感谢，说明感谢的理由。

注：文中不得提及真实姓名或学校。

［答案】DearMs.Zhang,

I'mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.Youaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhen

necessary.

Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecomer,Iwasnervousandinlow

spirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.WhenIwasataloss,asmyheadteacher,youaskedmetogoto

youroffice.Insteadofblamingme,youcomfortedmeanddiscussedwithmethereasonsformyfailinginthe

exam.Moreunforgettably,youmanagedtohelpmewithmystudyandinspiredmefromtimetotime.

Ms.Zhang,Fmmorethangratefulfbrwhatyouhavedoneforme.Wishyouhappinessandgoodhealth.

Yours,

XuJing

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是明启中学高三学生徐晶，你校的英文报向即将毕业的高三

学生征文，给高中三年来最值得你感谢的一个人或一件事表达感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感谢：gratitude—>appreciation

帮助：givesb.ahand-*dosb.afavor

害怕的：afraid—^scared

鼓励：inspire—>encourage

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandinlow

spirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.

拓展句：Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecomer,Iwasnervousandinlow

spiritsbecauseIwasafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.

【点睛】［高分句型1JYouaretheverypersonwhogavemeahandwhennecessary4运用了who弓|导的定语

从句和when的省略句）

［高分句型2］Onemonthago,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationaroundthecorner,Iwasnervousandin

lowspirits,beingafraidoflettingmyparentsdown.（运用了with的复合结构和现在分词作状语）

四、推荐信

4.(2023•上海松江•统考二模)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。你校图书馆计划布置一个英语读书角，需要一张图片作为背景。校

方搜集了以下两张图片，向同学们征求意见。请你给图书馆馆长写封邮件，内容包括：

(1)你的选择；

(2)你的理由。

Pu-tam-ABl

【答案］Deartheheadlibrarian,

I'mdelightedtohavethechancetoexpressmyopinionaboutthechoiceofthebackgroundimageforthe

Englishcomer.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ichoosethesecondone.Thereasonsareasfollows.

First,thesecondimageiseasytounderstand,highlysymbolic,withanoriginalitythatanyonecanswimin

theoceanofbooksattheEnglishcorner.Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartin

thereadingthere,makingstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.

Second,thepatternisclearandsmooth,thecolorsaresimpleandgenerous,withanappropriateand

profoundimpressiontostimulatestudents?interestinEnglishlearning.

Ihopemysuggestionwillbeacceptedbyyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给图书馆馆长写封邮件，表达布置一个英语读书角所选的

图片的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted-pleased

就我而言：AsfarasIamconcerned—►Formypart

不由自主地：spontaneously-^involuntarily

参力「：takepartin—►participatein

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,makingstudents

feeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.

拓展句：Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,whichmakes

studentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.

【点睛】【高分句型1]First,thesecondimageiseasytounderstand,highlysymbolic,withanoriginalitythat

anyonecanswimintheoceanofbooksattheEnglishcomer.（运用了that弓卜导的同位语从句）

[高分句型2]tsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,making

studentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.（运用了现在分词短语充当结果状语）

五、告知信/通知

5.（2023・上海虹口•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

每年的4月23日为世界读书日。明启中学学生会为宣传该主题日，鼓励同学发掘阅读之乐，特向各个

班级征集海报。现有两份海报脱颖而出，进入最后的角逐。假设你是王磊，请给学生会写一封邮件表达

你的想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求：

1.简要描述你选择的海报；

2.说明选择的理由。

READtoaVisitthe

READ

friendonlibraryand

onthesubway

thephoneREADthere

READmtheWorldBookDay

READwith

dorkwitha

April23yourfamify

flashlight

READaREADa

READ

newspaperbestsellerTHATNEVERENDS

underafree

articleJ

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

Ichosethesecondposter.

Inthisposter,thereisaglobeandastackofbookswithacupofcoffeeonthem.Theposterwas

accompaniedbythetext“Readingisanadventure.Thatneverends.^^

ThereasonswhyIchoosethisposterareasfollows.First,itismorecolorfillandattractspeople'sattention.

Second,thepicturesinthepostershaveagoodsymbolicmeaning.Thegloberepresentstheworld,which

symbolizesthatreadingbooksallowsustoexplorethiswonderfulworld.Acupofcoffeeisplacedonapileof

books,symbolizingthatreadingcanberelaxing.Thirdly,combiningwordsandpictures,theposterwell

conveysthesignificanceofreadingthatreadingisanadventure,whichallowsustoexploretheunknownand

alsomakesusmorerelaxedandliveamorefulfillinglife.

Yours

WangLei

【导语】本篇书面表达属厂应用文，要求考生给学生会写一封邮件，表达对自己所选择的海报的看法,

简要描述选择的海报并说明选择的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

选择：choose—»select

表达：convey—♦express

一摞：astackof—>apileof

吸弓I某人的注意：attractone'sattention—>drawone'sattention

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First,itismorecolorfulandattractspeople'sattention.

拓展句：First,itismorecolorful,whichenblesittoattractpeople'sattention.

【点睛】［高分句型1JThereasonswhyIchoosethisposterareasfollows,(igfflTwhy引导的限制性定语从

句)

［高分句型2］Thegloberepresentstheworld,whichsymbolizesthatreadingbooksallowsustoexplorethis

wonderfulworld.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

六、其他应用文

6.(2023•上海闵行•统考二模)Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是明启中学的学生李华，你们学校将组织一次高三学生参观大学的活动，学生可以从“专业及课

程介绍(MajorandCourseDescriptions)";“参观图书馆、实验室(Library&LaboratoryVisiting)”;“随

班学习体验(OnSpotStudying)”和“与教授面对面(DialoguewithProfessors)”四个活动中选取两个作

为主要活动，特此向高三学生征求意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：

1.你最感兴趣的两个活动；

2.你对这两个活动感兴趣的理由。

【答案】Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,1am

veryexcitedandhappy.WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities.MajorandCourseDescriptionsand

OnSpotStudying.

Firstofall,IamfondoftheactivityMajorandCourseDescriptions,whichcanhelpmehaveadeeper

understandingoftheuniversity'sprofessionalcoursesandclarifythedirectionformyfuturestudy.

Besides,IamdeeplyinterestedintheactivityOnSpotStudying.Intheactivity,Icantrulyexperiencethe

learningatmosphereoftheuniversity.Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthe

studentsintheuniversitytakecourseseveryday,whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangetheway

thatIlearninthemiddleschool.

Allinall,theactivityofvisitingtheuniversityisofgreathelptoourfutureplanning.Iamlooking

forwardtothearrivalofthatday.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给活动组织者写一封信，说明你对学校组织的高三学生参

观大学的活动中感兴趣的两个活动以及对这两个活动感兴趣的理由

【详解】1.词汇积累

喜欢：befondenjoy

高兴的：happy—>plcascd-^delighted

此外：besides—►what'smore

机会：chance—>opportunity

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamvery

excitedandhappy.

拓展句：Becauselhearthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,I

amveryexcitedandhappy.

［点睛］［高分句型1］WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsand

OnSpotStudying.（运用了what引导的主语从句）

【高分句型2］Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthestudentsintheuniversity

takecourseseveryday,whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangethewaythatIlearninthemiddle

school.（运用了how与whether引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及that引导的定语

从句）

7.（2023•上海浦东新•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假期即将来临，你的朋友李华计划完成一篇调查报告，他对去公共图书馆还是去自习室（self-study

room）写报告犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。请参考以下信息，写一封邮件，内容需包括：

1.你的建议；

2.你建议的理由。

公共图书馆门刃室

收费标准免费20元/5小时

开放时间9：OOa.m-5：OOp.m24小时

交通时长45分种10分钟

设施环境免费使用馆内资源免费茶点

【答案】DearLiHua,

Knowingthatyouareintwomindsaboutwhethertogotothepubliclibraryortheself-studyroomtowrite

yourreport,Isuggestthatyougotothepubliclibraryforthefollowingreasons:

Firstofall,thepubliclibraryisfreeofcharge,whilegoingtotheself-studyroomwillcostyou20yuan

every5hours.Second,althoughtheself-studyroomisopen24hoursaday,itisenoughtowriteyourreport

from9a.m.to5p.m.Third,itmaytakeyoumoretimetogotothepubliclibrarythantotheself-studyroom,

butyoucanusethetimeonthebustoformulateyourreport.Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthof

resourcesandtheseresourcesmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyourreportandtheyarefree;however,youcan

onlyenjoyfreerefreshmentsintheself-studyroom.

Hopethatmysuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.

Yours,

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友李华写一封邮件，就寒假期间去公共图书馆还是去

自习室写调查报告提出建议，并说明理由。

【详解】L词汇积累

犹豫不决：intwominds—>hesitant

建议：suggest—>advise

丰富的：awealthof—>abundant

对...有帮助：behelpfulto-beofhelpto

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesandtheseresourcesmaybehelpfultoyouin

writingyourreportandtheyarefree.

拓展句：Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesthatmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyour

report,andtheyarefree.

［点睛］［高分句型1］Second,althoughtheself-studyroomisopen24hoursaday,itisenoughtowriteyour

reportfrom9a.m.to5P.m.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句）

【高分句型2】Knowingthatyouareintwomindsaboutwhethertogotothepubliclibraryortheself-study

roomtowriteyourreport,Isuggestthatyougotothepubliclibraryforthefollowingreasons.（运用了现在分

词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）

8.（2023・上海青浦•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。你的学校即将举办“回眸五十年”纪念活动，你在学生会参与相关的准

备工作，并负责向来宾介绍学校的变化，等等。请就此给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件交流你的想法。

你的邮件必须包括：

1.介绍纪念活动的主要内容；

2.描述你所见闻的学校变化；

3.简述你对学校发展的期许。

（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）

【答案】DearAlan,

Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled"LookingBackonFiftyYears”attheendof

thismonth.Iwillparticipateintherelevantpreparationsasamemberofthestudentunionandberesponsible

forintroducingthechangesintheschooltoguests.Becausethiseventissoimportant,1needsomeadvicefrom

you.

Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,leadinggueststo

visittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.Asisknown,

ourschoolhasundergonetremendouschangesinthepast50years.State-of-the-artteachingequipmentand

evenartificialintelligencedevicestoassistinteachinghavebeenequippedinourschool.Besides,thereare

variousculturalclubsandcommunitiestoenrichourleisurelife.

Hopemyschoolwillbecomebetterandbetter!

Yours,

LiQing

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件介绍你学校即将举办“回眸

五十年''纪念活动，内容包括纪念活动的主要内容、你所见闻的学校变化和对学校发展的期许。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参力口：participatein—*joinin

止匕夕卜：besides—>what,smore

希望：hope—*wish

帮助：assist—*help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears^^attheendof

thismonth.

拓展句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventwhichiscalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears”at

theendofthismonth.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,

leadinggueststovisittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbe

significant.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.（运用了because弓I导的原

因状语）

9.（2023•上海奉贤•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你的朋友Jack邀请你一同制定毕业后的暑假计划，请从他提供的计

划清单中选择你所心仪的一个。给他写封邮件，内容需包含：

1.你的选择

2.你的理由及如何执行该计划

①参加山区支教志愿服务②去祖国各地走走

③学习技能，如驾驶、乐器演奏、视频剪辑等

【答案】Dearjack,

I'mmorethangladtohearfromyou.Yes,likeyousaid,Ihavebeenlongingfortheupcomingsummer

vacationaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,duringwhichIcandoalotofamazingthings.

Thisthree-monthvacationwillundoubtedlybemylongestholidayever.Therefore,Tdliketomakeitas

meaningfulaspossible.Firstly,riltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneytocoverpartofmycollegetuition.

Inthemeanwhile,Icanmeetmanyinterestingpeopleandlearnaboutsociety.Besides,Fmplanningtoenroll

inadrivingcourseandtrytogetmydriver'slicenseasdrivingwillbeanimportantandnecessaryskillin

modemsociety.Iftimepermits,I'mgoingtolearnsomeMusicalInstruments,whichissomethingI'vealways

wantedtodo.Ihaveastronginterestinguitar,soIwanttolearnhowtoplayguitar,whichcanenrichmy

hobby.Ipracticeinmysparetimeintheevening,sothatIcanenjoythepeaceoftheguitarmelody.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的朋友Jack邀请你一同制定毕业后的暑假计划这一

情况，请从他提供的计划清单中选择你所心仪的一个，写封邮件给他。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad-*happy

与此同时：Inthemeanwhile—>Atthesametime

此外：Besides-What'smore

重要的：important—>vital

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly,I'lltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneytocoverpartofmycollegetuition.

拓展句：Firstly,Tiltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoney,whichcancoverpartofmycollegetuition.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Yes,likeyousaid,Ihavebeenlongingfortheupcomingsummervacationafterthe

CollegeEntranceExamination,duringwhichIcandoalotofamazingthings.（运用了介词during+which弓|

导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Ipracticeinmysparetimeintheevening,sothatIcanenjoythepeaceoftheguitarmelody.（运

用了sothat引导的的目的状语从句）

七、开放性作文

10.（2023•上海静安•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

你是李华，你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动，共有三个备选体验场所：①快递驿站

（deliverystation）;①网络科技公司（networktechnologycompany）;（l社区托儿所（communitynursery）o写一篇

日记，谈谈你的想法。日记中必须包括：

1.你选择的体验场所；

2.你选择该场所的理由；

3.你准备在体验当天做什么。

（日记中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）

[答案】Afewdayslater,ourschoolwillcarryout''Professionalone-dayexperience^^activity,whichisavery

goodsocialpracticeexperience.Outofloveforchildren,Idecidedtogotoacommunitynurseryschoolto

experienceadayofvolunteerwork.

Becauseoftheirparents'work,thesechildrenaresenttothecommunitynursery,wheretheycangetgood

care.Asnurseryteachers,theirjobrequiresalotofpatienceandlove.Onthedayoftheexperience,Idecided

tomakethekidshappybyplayinggames.Interactingwiththemasmuchaspossiblecanstrengthenthebond

withchildrenandmakethemfeelcomforted.

Thisjobissacredandglorious,anditrequiresplentyofloveandcare.Ibelievethatthroughthis

""Professionalone-dayexpcricnce^^activity,wecannotonlyimproveourextracurricularpracticeability,but

alsomakeusmorecaring.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动，

共有三个备选体验场所：加快递驿站（deliverystation）。网络科技公司（networktechnologycompany）;由社

区托儿所（communitynursery）o写一*篇日记，谈谈你的想法。

【详解】I.词汇积累

开展：carryout—>launch

由于，出于：Outof—>Dueto

需要：requires—*needs

提高，增强：improve—*enhance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thisjobissacredandglorious,anditrequiresplentyofloveandcare.

拓展句：Thisjobissacredandglorious,whichrequiresplentyofloveandcare.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Afewdayslater,ourschoolwillcarryout^Professionalone-dayexperience^^activity,

whichisaverygoodsocialpracticeexperience.（运用了which弓I导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Ibelievethatthroughthis''Professionalone-dayexpcricnce^^activity,wccannotonlyimprove

ourextracurricularpracticeability,butalsomakeusmorecaring.（运用了notonly...butalso…的固定句型。）

H.（2023•上海金山•统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是明启中学的学生李明，学校准备开展“发现春天'’的社会实践活动，并在校园网上征集大家的意

见，请你发贴简要阐述你的设计方案。内容需要包括：

1）活动线路与内容。

2）推荐理由。

【答案】DearSir/Madame,

Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled''DiscoveringSpring"，Iamverydelighted

topresentmydesign.

Itismysuggestionthatallteachersandstudentstakepartinoutdoorhiking.Therouteisfromourschoolto

BeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.Allstudentsarerequiredtotakeaplasticbagto

pickuprubbishthrownbytouristsonthewayandinBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagestudentscanvisitthevillage

tobuyhand-madearticlesmadebycraftsmenandenrichthemwithcolorfullocalculture.

AsfarasI'mconcerned,tostartwith,it'sabetterchoicetohelpstudentsdevelopakindofbearing

hardshipsspiritwhichishelpfulfortheirfuturelife.Besides,Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthe

groundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironme