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文章第一段：图画描述段文章第一段：图画描述段 写第一、二共写第一、二共 2 2 句话句话 文章第一句：文章第一句：therethere bebe 描述描述 小虹语录：这句话只要概括性的描述图画中的对象以及对象的动作状态或基本状态就可以 了，我们可以采用初中就学过的 there be 句型搞定，可以用简单句加简单词，但是一定 不能写错 AsAs isis symbolicallysymbolically portrayedportrayed inin thethe picturepicture givengiven above,above, therethere is/is/ areare sb.sb. doingdoing sth.+sth.+方式方式+ +地点地点+ + 时间时间 . . 历年真题举例：历年真题举例： 20112011 There are two people sitting on a boat and throwing rubbish into the lake. ( There are two tourists taking sightseeing on a small boat while dropping litter carelessly into a lake.) 20102010 There is a boiling hot pot containing various elements (ingredients) of multi-culture. 20092009 There are many people sitting in front of their computers and communicating with each other through the Internet. 20082008 There are two disabled (crippled ) men running forward together. 20072007 There are two people playing soccer on a court. (There is a striker going to shoot at the goal defended by a goalkeeper on a football field.) 20052005 There are four people standing in front of a goalmouth(goal) while an old man is sitting in the middle. 20042004 There is a man running toward the finishing line of a race. 20032003 There is a flower facing two completely different destinies in two different living circumstances. 20022002 There is a young American girl wearing traditional Chinese dress and ornaments. 20012001 There is a small oil lamp lighting up the dark room. 20002000 There is a change between the number of fish boats and fishes. 文章第二句：细节描述文章第二句：细节描述 小虹语录：将图画中的人物的表情，道具，文字说明，左右图画分别描述进行细节性、补 充性的描述；只写和主旨有关的内容-举例：“终点就是新起点” 相关道具：相关道具： 2011- The lake is already full of flowing rubbish such as plastic containers, fish-bones, banana skin, watermelon rind, bottles, tins, food wrappings, and so on. 2010-These pluralistic cultures can be categorized as cultural celebrities home and abroad as Bi Sheng, Lao She, Shakespeare, and Einstein, philosophical concepts as Buddhism, Taoism, Confucianism, benevolence, ritual, humanism, enlightenment, post-modernism, and deconstruction, as well as performing arts as Peking Opera, kung fu, and Swan Lake. 2009- Their workplaces are divided into separate parts which isolate people from each other. 2008-They bind their disabled legs together and hold each others shoulder tightly, with their sticks left behind. 文字说明：文字说明：TheThe captioncaption belowbelow thethe drawingdrawing indicatesindicates thatthat 2010- the cultural “hot pot” is both delicious and nutritious 2009-the near and far among the Internet. 2008-We can go anywhere with the combination of one of your legs and one of mine. 2005-a foot ball match of love 2004-the end is the beginning 2003-the flower in greenhouse can hardly withstand rain and storm 2001- and that the darker the room is, the brighter the lamp becomes . The caption below the drawing indicates that “love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.” 两幅图画：两幅图画： 2007- on the left side, the goal-keeper imagine that he is so smaller than he actually is that guarding the goal becomes a mission impossible. On the right side, the striker is hesitant to shoot due to his illusion of the “giant ” goal-keeper. 2006-The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon phenomenon that people in increasing numbers are showing their admiration to their role model in an excessive way.(总句抽象)On the left side, the young man writes the word “BECKHAM” on his face. On the right side, the other young man spend RMB300 on his hair in a Beckham-style. 2003-on the left side, the flower is placed in a green house which shelters it from the severe wind and storm. On the right side, when removed from the green house and exposed to the wind and storm, the flower immediately fades and withers 2000- On the left side, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing boat in 1990. By contrast, on the right side, in 1995 there was only one fish, but many fishing boats. 动作表情： 2006-the elderly son kicks out the father, and the second son is preparing for warding him off. The other two children are also reluctant to let their father roll into their goalmouth. 2004-Although sweating profusely and seems quite tired, he continues to run rather than stops on the finishing line. 2002- She looks very beautiful with a nice smile on her face. It seems that the girl is very fond of the Chinese costume. 文章第二段：寓意文章第二段：寓意+ +论述论述 写第三、四、五、六共写第三、四、五、六共 4 4 句话句话 小虹语录：这段写 4 句话：第三句话，写图画寓意第四句话决定论述方式；第五、六句 分别是具体的论据，需要考前大量背诵 文章第三句：寓意说明段文章第三句：寓意说明段 小虹语录：注意从表层含义到深层含义的提炼！图画所画的寓意一般都是表面的，浅显的， 但是第二段提炼的寓意，应该是深刻的，概括的，切忌就画说话，应该以画见大 TheThe cartooncartoon aimsaims atat informinginforming usus ofof thethe phenomenon of / the situation of/ the problem of / the significance of / the merits（优点）of/ the demerits(缺点) of. 历年真题寓意提炼举例： 2011-informing us of the fact that the environment of scenic spots and many other places is being damaged now. 2010-informing us the situation of cultural integration. 2009-informing us of the merits and demerits of Internet. 2008-informing us of the importance of cooperation 2007-informing us of the fact that under no circumstances should we underestimate ourselves while overestimate the hardships. (the importance of confidence) 2006- informing us of the phenomenon of blind idol worship. 2005-informing us of the importance of love and responsibility. 2004-informing us of the significance of persistence. 2003-informing us of the fact that parents overprotecting will do harm to children. 2002-informing us of the phenomenon of cultural integration 2001-informing us of the fact that love seems to be greater when the need is greater. 2000-informing us of the fact that our natural resources have been seriously damaged. 文章第四句：论述方式文章第四句：论述方式 小虹语录：论述方式也即文章的展开方式，共四种：1 解释原因、2 利好重要、3 弊端危害、 4 举例论证；写第二段的时候，你可以将这几种论证方式结合起来写，也可以一种写到尾， 关键在于，那种论述方式，你的论证素材比较多，比较好些！ 第一种论述方式第一种论述方式- -解释原因：解释原因： 小虹语录：这种方式一般是写社会现实性比较强的话题，类似环保，产品质量，诚信，假 货，物价高等；注意万能理由和论据的积累 Many factors can account for this phenomenon， and the followings might be the critical ones： 或 What exactly contributes to this phenomenon？it is a thought-provoking question and answers could be listed as follows： (2011 年；2010 年；2006 年；2005 年；2003 年；2002 年；2000 年) 第二种论述方式第二种论述方式- -利好重要：利好重要： 小虹语录：这种论述方式，一般写积极价值观作文，比如自信、合作、爱心的重要性等等， 关键要写作对哪些方面哪些人有哪些好处，需要背诵 12 条万能理由 We cant emphasize too much the benefit/importance of sth. （confidence， cooperation，trust）. (2010 年；2009 年；2008 年；2007 年；2005 年，2004 年；2002 年；2001 年) 第三种论述方式第三种论述方式- -弊端危害：弊端危害： 小虹语录：这种论述方式，一般写价值观作文，但是一般都是缺乏自信、缺乏合作、缺乏 爱心带来的危害，关键要写作对哪些方面哪些人有哪些坏处，需要背诵 12 条万能理由 The sth.sth. (loss of trust / absence of confidence ) will be bound to exert a detrimental impact on our life/ lives/growth/the development of economy. (2011 年；2009 年；2007 年；2006 年；2005 年；2003 年；2000 年) 第四种论述方式第四种论述方式- -举例论证：举例论证： 小虹语录：这种论述方式，关键要看题目中有没有具体要求 givegive specificspecific exampleexample，如 果有要求，那就必须要用举例论证了，举例可以举身边的例子，自己的例子，也可以是社 会现象，社会事件的例子 Quite a few examples can be given to prove the harm (demerits 缺点) of sth. I can think of no better illustration than the following one: 举例： Without confidence， how can Yao Ming，an once ordinary and unknown basketball player, achieve unprecedented success in NBA ? 2007 年自信 The successful hosting of the 29th Beijing 2008 Olympic Games should be attributed to cooperation among people from all walks of life. 2008 年合作 (2007 年；2004 年；2001 年) 文章第五句：论据一文章第五句：论据一 （1.原因之一； 2.好处之一； 3.坏处之一；4.例子之一） 文章第六句：论据二文章第六句：论据二 （1.原因之二； 2.好处之二； 3.坏处之二；4.例子之二） 小虹语录：文章第五、六句是证明第四句话论证方式的例子，可以是写原因、好处、坏处 和例子。考前都有类似于“12 条万能利弊理由”和“话题论据积累”背诵，一定要背诵下 来，以免考试的时候无话可说！ 文章第三段：评论文章第三段：评论 commentscomments 写第七、八、九共写第七、八、九共 3 3 句话句话 小虹语录：文章的最后一段时评论段，评论段有