高考英语大一轮复习 写作必备 写作体裁技巧点拨 三 应用文写作（一）日记课件 外研版

三、 应用文写作(一) 日记 写作指南 常用句型 写作实例 佳作向导 范文体验 写作指南 日记是以记叙一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所思为内容的一种文 体。写英语日记一般要注意以下几点: 1.规范的格式:英语日记通常由两部分组成,即书端和正文。书端用于记 载写日记的日期、星期和天气情况。它位于正文上面的第一行,顶格写 起。日期和星期写在第一行的左上角,天气情况写在第一行的右上角。 2.正确的人称:日记是对生活的记录,是把自己一天中最有意义的事情记 录下来所形成的书面材料,故写日记多用第一人称。 3.正确的时态:日记一般记叙当天发生的事,因此多用过去时态。但如谈 论个人感悟或说明客观事实、普遍真理时,可用现在时态。 常用句型 Last Tuesday,our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.(2015北京) 上周二,我们班邀请了一位老艺人教我们如何做面人。 We hope we can have more activities of this kind! (2015北京) 我们希望能有更多这样的活动! He appreciated me for what I had done. 他因我所做的事感激我。 Although tired,I spent the most exciting day in my life. 尽管疲惫,但我度过了一生中最令人兴奋的一天。 We had such a good time that we didnt realize it was very late. 我们玩得非常开心以至于没有意识到天已经很晚了。 From this experience I learned that. 从这次经历中我懂得了 写作实例 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,校报英文版正在开展“续 写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,将你今天早上所做 的一件好事以日记形式记述下来,向校报投稿。 注意:1.日记的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.词数100左右。 Saturday,June 2 Fine This morning, 佳作向导 1.文体信息 (1)体裁:应用文(日记) (2)时态:日记叙述的是已经发生的事情,故用一般过去时态。个人 感想、体会可用一般现在时。 (3)人称:第一人称 2.思路点拨 本篇书面表达要求考生写一则日记,内容涉及当日的活动,并需要说 明对这一活动的感受。当日活动在题目要求和图片中提供了较为充分的 材料,考生表达起来有话可说,但最后的表达感受则在材料中没有给出, 需要考生根据所给材料进行思考,其内容可与“助人为乐而感到自豪” 等相关。 3.要点表达 (1)今天上午,我正在街上走着,看到两名游客在看地图,他们看起来 很困惑。 This morning,when I was walking in the street,I saw that two travellers were reading a map and they looked puzzled. =This morning,I was walking in the street when I saw two travellers were reading a map and looked puzzled. =This morning,I was walking in the street when I saw two travellers were reading a map,looking puzzled. (2)似乎他们迷路了。 It seemed they were lost. =They seemed to have been lost. (3)我过去询问他们是否需要帮忙。 I went up to them and asked,“Do you need help?” =I went up to them and asked whether they needed help. (4)我带他们到附近的公交车站,建议他们乘坐20路公交车,这路公 交车可以把他们直接带去那里。 I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20.It could take them there directly. =I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20,which could take them there directly. (5)他们非常感激我的帮助。 They thanked me for my help very much. =They appreciated my help greatly. =They were very grateful to me for my help. =They showed much gratitude to me for my help. (6)看到他们上了公交车,我的心里感到很高兴。 I felt very happy when I saw them get on the bus. =Seeing them get on the bus,I felt very happy. 范文体验 Saturday,June 2Fine This morning, (我正在街上走着,看到两名游客在 看地图,他们看起来很困惑。)They seemed (迷路了).I went up to them and (询问他们是否需要帮忙).They said they were looking for the Temple of Heaven.I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20, (这路公交车 可以把他们直接带去那里).They (非常感激我的帮助 ).Before long,the bus came.We waved goodbye to each other. (看到他们上了公交车),I felt very happy. 答案:I was walking in the street when I saw two travellers were reading a map,looking puzzl