2011寒假返校考书面表达.ppt

假如你叫李华，你们学校最近开展了一次创建“ 平安校园”的活动。请你用用英语写一篇短文， 谈谈创建“平安校园”活动的重要性。短文应包 括以下内容： 增强安全意识的重要性； 2. 在不同场合均要注意安全（如在交通中、在 运动中、在同学间发生矛盾时等）; 3. 将活动转化成全体师生的实际行动。 注意：1、根据以上内容写一篇短文，可适当 增加细节以使行文连贯； 2、词数120左右 Recently our school has carried out the “safety at school” activity aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on. _ 思路点拨 Para 1 增强安全意识的重要性 Para 2 叙述在几种不同场合要注意的安全 事项 Para3(Para 3)将活动转化为全体师生的 实际行动。 Useful expressions and structures promote/ raise the awareness of safety in different situations/ on various occasions cross the street do sports quarrel with classmates put into practice Action speaks louder than words. Easier said than done. Its of vital/ great importance to attach importance to obey the rules; watch out for warm up first remain calm Its high time that we did sth. Only when/ if we do sth can we 高分范文 Recently our school has carried out the “safety at school” activity aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on. There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. （简明扼要点出重要性，但还可适当展开些 。） I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will keep us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. （本句使用动词短语consideras, keep+符合 宾语，短语come first, which引导的定 语从句，whetheror结构，when引导 的时间状语从句。） We should be more cautious in different situations. We should obey the traffic rules when crossing the road. When we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically. (运用状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、以及副词 mentally，physically的使用均是亮点） As far as I am concerned, I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and creatively to keep the “safety at school” activity in mind. Besides, we are supposed to observe the law and discipline wherever we are at any moment.(过渡自然) 点评：本文要点齐全，表达规范，熟练运用各 种复杂的结构、句式、动词短语和高级词汇等 ，显示出扎实的语言功底。上下文结构紧凑， 过渡自然。 It goes without saying that teachers and students should pay close attention to safety as nothing is more essential than our life, which can never come back once lost. So it is of great significance that we bear in mind that “safety comes first” on every occasion. When crossing the streets, we should make sure that there is no danger ahead. Also, we ought to be careful to avoid being hurt while doing sports. Whats more, if you see some classmates having an argument, you should turn to the teachers for help without delay. It is high time that we joined hands to raise everyones awareness of safety. Only when every member of our school puts this activity into practice will we be able to build a safe and harmonious campus. As is widely acknowledged，the awareness of safety is of vital importance. If we dont have the awareness of safety, we will do poorly in our studies and even lose our lives. And therefore we are supposed to do everything with an awareness of safety. Only in this way can we lead a harmonious life. Under no circumstances can we forget the awareness of safety. Firstly, we should obey the traffic rules when we are crossing the street. Secondly, every time we want to do some sports, we should make preparations before we start exercising. Above all, when we have quarrels with our classmates in school, we shouldnt solve the problem by violence and we should tell the teachers or have a heart-to-heart talk with our classmates. The most significant