高考英语大一轮复习写作必备写作体裁技巧点拨一记叙文写作（一）写人课件外研版

写作体裁技巧点拨 一、记叙文写作(一)写人,写作指南,常用句型,写作实例,佳作向导,范文体验,写作指南,以写人为主的记叙文在写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题: 1.要按照写作要求来写。所写内容要包括所给的全部信息点,既不能遗漏, 也不能随意添加。 2.对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。 重点信息通常是写作的目的所在,比如求职要重点突出学历、经历;新 闻报道要重点突出事迹;介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点等。 3.注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在 时;而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。 4.写作段落布局 第一段:基本信息; 第二段:具体介绍个人事迹; 第三段:结尾 (评价)。,常用句型,.was born in a poor/rich family. 出生在一个贫穷/富裕的家庭里。 I will be twenty-eight years old by then. 那时我将二十八岁了。 He/She is a kind-hearted/handsome/charming/pretty person,so we all respect/like him/her. 他/她是一个心地善良/潇洒/迷人/漂亮的人,所以我们都尊敬/喜欢 他/她。 .he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.(2015安徽) 他不仅是去太空的第一个中国人,也是世界上最伟大的宇航员 之一。 As for my favourite figure in Chinese history,it must be Wei Yuan,a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.(2016北京) 关于我最喜欢的中国历史人物那一定是魏源晚清一位伟大的思 想家。,In fact,he inspires me to major in English in college,to be a bridge between China and the world.(2016北京) 事实上,他激励我在大学里主修英语专业,将来成为架在中国与世界 之间的桥梁。 He was honored as.for. 他因为获得的荣誉。 He is such a(n).person that we all.him. 他是如此的一个人以至于我们都他。,写作实例,根据表中信息,对我国第一位在太空为中小学生授课的女宇航员王亚平做一个简单的介绍。,要求: 1.100词左右; 2.不能逐字翻译,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:征募recruit,佳作向导,1.文体信息 (1)体裁: 记叙文 (写人) (2)时态: 本文是宇航员王亚平的简历,要对她从出生到成为中国第一位在太空为中小学生授课的女宇航员的情况作简要的介绍。因此,应以一般过去时为主。 (3)人称:第三人称 2.思路点拨 写作时,要避免出现就要点逐一翻译的情况,应该对所给要点进行重新加工,根据记叙文的段落要求,合理分配。在叙述时还可充分挖掘自己的表达潜力,尽量使用较复杂的词汇、句型等,以提升文章的档次。,3.要点表达 (1)女宇航员王亚平,37岁,学士学位,是土生土长的中国东部山东省烟台市人。 Female astronaut Wang Yaping,aged 37 and holding a bachelors degree,is a native of Yantai City in East Chinas Shandong Province. =Female astronaut Wang Yaping,who is (at the age of)37 and holding a bachelors degree,comes from Yantai City in East Chinas Shandong Province. (2)17岁时,她被招募进解放军,在长春飞行学院学习,几年后成为中国空军飞行员。 At the age of 17,she was recruited to the Peoples Liberation Army,where she became a pilot of Chinese Air Force after several years study in Changchun Flight Academy.,(3)因做事积极、优秀,2000年5月她被吸收为中国共产党党员。 Being active and excellent in everything,she was absorbed as a member of the Communist Party of China in May,2000. =Because/As she was active and excellent in everything, she was absorbed as a member of the Communist Party of China in May,2000. (4)2010年,她成为首批女航天员之一,于2013年4月被选为执行神舟十号太空任务的宇航员 In 2010,she turned one of the first female astronauts and was selected to the crew of the Shenzhou-10 space mission in April,2013. (5)那时她也成为了中国第一个太空女教师,在轨道上给中小学生讲课。 .when she also became Chinas first woman teacher in space,giving lectures to middle and elementary school students while in orbit.,范文体验,Female astronaut Wang Yaping, (37岁,学士学位),is a native of Yantai City in East Chinas Shandong Province. Wang Yaping was born in January,1980.At the age of 17,she was recruited to the Peoples Liberation Army, (在那里她成为一名飞行员)of Chinese Air Force after several years study in Changchun Flight Academy. (因做事积极、优秀),she was absorbed as a member of the Communist Party of China in May,2000.In 2010, (她成为首批女宇航员之一)and was selected to the crew of the Shenzhou-10 space mission in April,2013, (那时她也成为了中国首位太空女教师),giving lectures to middle and elementary school students while in orbit.,答案:aged 37 and holding a bachelors degree whe