《高考英语写作指导》PPT课件.ppt

高考英语写作指导 之 复杂结构和高级词汇,近三年山东省高考英语书面表达 2007年山东卷书面表达,今年，教育部直属师范大学将招收一批免费师范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教十年以上，你愿意成为一名免费师范生 吗？请陈述理由。,近三年山东省高考英语书面表达 2008年山东卷书面表达,假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点给他写封信： 1. 帮他分析原因 2. 给他提出建议 3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算 注意： 词数 120150,假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith ， 但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信： 1.感谢Tom 对你英语学习的帮助； 2 询问Mr. Smith 的近况并索要其联系方式； 3 邀请Tom在春节期间来感受中国文化。 注意：1. 词数120150 ； 2. 可适当增加细节,近三年山东省高考英语书面表达 2009年山东卷书面表达,高考英语写作大纲要求： 要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能： 1.准确使用语法和词汇； 2.使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。要求考生根据提示写一篇120词左右的英语作文。,根据文体划分：记叙文，说明文，议论文，应用文 根据类型划分：图表式，提纲式，图画式，开放式,高考英语写作评判标准： 1.内容：覆盖全部要点，进行合理想象，不得随意发 挥； 2. 语言：使用简单语言清晰表达意思； 并使用了较多的语法结构和词汇，使用复杂结构或高级词汇； 3.结构：叙述连贯，逻辑合理。有效地使用了语句 间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅。,高考英语写作解题要点： 1.审题审要求，审文体，审人称，审时态； 2.要点齐全，滴水不漏； 3.好的开头，靓的结尾； 4.使用复杂结构，高级词汇； 5.用好过渡性词汇。,什么是复杂结构呢？ 如定语从句，状语从句，名词性从句，倒装句，强调句，感叹句，非谓语动词，插入语，with的复合结构，省略，独立主格结构等； 什么是高级词汇呢? 一般认为，不常用的词汇或者超纲词汇均可视为高级词汇。,1. It is said/reported/believed that 2. It is the first time that 3. ., however. 4. It is not long before 5. It seems/looks as if 6. No soonerthan Hardly when,常用的复杂结构句型：,1. The pet dog is so lovely that almost everybody likes her. 2. The pet dog is so cute that almost everybody likes her.,比一比,A. Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. B. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.,C. There goes the bell. D. The bell is ringing now.,高级词汇,复杂结构,复杂结构,升级之后： Weather permitting, I will come tomorrow. （独立主格结构）,复杂结构,原文： When he heard the bad news ，the young man couldnt help crying.,升级之后：Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.（分词作状语）,原文：If the weather permits , I will come tomorrow.,复杂结构,升级1：Only when we finished the whole project could we leave.（倒装句）,原文：When we finished the whole project, we could leave. (when引导的时间状语从句),升级2：It was not until we finished the whole project that we could leave.（强调句）,原文： My brother was riding a bike and I sat at the back of it. (and连接的并列句),升级后：My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat back.（with的复合结构）,复杂结构,升级之后：Students who have the ability to learn by themselves will learn what they need at anytime, which can save more time for them to learn more.（定语从句）,原文：Many students have the ability to learn by themselves. They can learn what they need at anytime. It will save more time for them to learn more.,练一练,1.我是一个高中生，今年18岁。,I am a high school student. I am 18 years old. (两个独立的简单句),I am a high school student, who am 18 years old.,I am a high school student of 18 years old.,2. 临沂是一个有着60万人口的城市。,Linyi is a city and it has a population of 600,000.,Linyi is a city whose population is 600,000.,Linyi is a city with a population of 600,000.,高级词汇,高级词汇：Suddenly I came up with a good idea.（用短语替代了普通单词）,原文：Suddenly I had a good idea.,原文：The question is really difficult to understand.,高级词汇：The question is really confusing. （用不常用词汇替代了常见表达）,原文：Everyone should do his or her best.,高级词汇：Everyone is supposed to do his or her best.（用不常用词组替代了常用单词）,高级词汇,原文：He was so clever that he could repair the radio himself.,高级词汇：He was so smart that he could repair the radio himself.（用不常用词汇替代常用词汇）,高级词汇：Take a moment to see what is going on around you.（用短语替代常见单词）,原文：Take a moment to see what is happening around you.,练一练,3. 我喜欢旅游。,I like travelling.,I enjoy travelling.,I am found of travelling.,I take great interest in travelling.,4. 我决定要努力学习。,I decide to study hard.,I am determined to study hard.,I am determined to make great effort to study.,课堂小结,化平常为神奇 1. 简单句连接成复杂句；复杂句精简成结构特殊的简单句； 2. 灵活多变地使用特殊句型； 3. 常见的普通单词换成较少使用的单词； 4. 灵活运用同义词、近义词和短语。,1.他是一个八岁的男孩,练一练,A. He is a boy and he is eight years old(普通并列句),C. He is a boy of eight,B. He is a boy ,who is eight.,2.我们发现河水太脏无法钓鱼。,A. We found the water was too dirty and we could not catch fish in it.（普通并列句）,B. We found the water was so dirty that we could not catch fish in it.（sothat句型）,C. We found the water was so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.（hardly替代not）,练一练,高级词汇：It will be a lot of fun.,A. It will be very interesting.,练一练,原文：The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way through college. 升级之后：Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.,复杂结构,原文：I went to school and did homework in the daytime and did homework at night. I went to bed at 11:30 p.m. 升级之后: I was too busy to go to bed before 11:30 p.m., because I had to deal with my school work day and night.,高级词汇,原文：The environment will never improve until everybody takes care of it. 高级词汇：Not until everybody takes care of it will the environment improve. 原文：She was robbed of her purse but she had no time to call for help. 高级词汇：She was robbed of her purse before she could call for help.,使用过去分词 例2 Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. 一般 Once seen, it can never be forgotten. 特殊 使用 v- ing When he arrives，please give me an e- mail一般 On arriving /his arrival ,please give me an e-mail. 特殊 .,使用定语从句 例; The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.一般 The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 特殊 使用状语从句 1. I wont believe what he says.一般 No matter what he says, I wont believe.特殊 2 If you come back before six oclock, you can go out.一般 You can go out on condition that you come back before six oclock. .特殊 3 If she doesnt agree, what shall we do? 一般 Supposing that she doesnt agree, what shell we do ?特殊,使用虚拟语气 例: The ship didnt sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.一般 But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board.特殊 使用倒装句型 例：Though Im weak Ill make the effort.一般 Weak as I am, Ill make the effo