2018_2019学年高中英语Unit16StoriesSectionⅥ（自修课）Writing—叙事类记叙文学案北师大版.docx

Section (自修课) Writing叙事类记叙文叙事类记叙文以叙述事件为主，突出事件的发生、发展和结果。一、基本结构1开篇：文章开篇交代事件的背景时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件的起因(why)和结果(what)。2主体：重在叙述事件的发生、发展以及结果，可分为若干段落来写。3结尾：呼应标题，发表感想、陈述愿望等。二、增分佳句1There was an interesting experience/story happening in 2017, which I still remember now.2It was a beautiful day and the sun was shining.3Up to now, I still remember one interesting/terrible/embarrassing thing which happened years ago.4It was ones turn to do sth.5I felt happy/excited/overjoyed/sad/embarrassed at .6We enjoyed . happily.7Since then I have worked hard at lessons.8I secretly swore that I would .题目要求你今年暑假到一家肯德基(KFC)快餐店做保洁员 (cleaner)工作。你每天工作七个小时，为期3周。这项工作辛苦且枯燥，你感到非常疲劳，几乎中途放弃。每天你都要起早贪黑地工作。在新学期开始之前，你终于完成了这项工作，并由此认识到了劳动的意义。你认为这是一次成功的体验。注意：1.必须使用第一人称；2词数100左右。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为记叙文中的叙事类记叙文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：叙述过去发生的事情主要用一般过去时。二、构思第一部分，叙述自己的打算。第二部分，详细叙述事件的经过。第三部分，叙述事件的结果，介绍自己的感想。第二步：核心词汇想周全1tiresome令人厌倦的2available 可以得到的3abandon 放弃4be_eager_to_do_sth./be_keen_to_do_sth. 渴望做某事5It_occurred_to_sb._that_./Sth._stroke/hit_sb. 某人忽然想起6in_particular/particularly 尤其；特别7put_up_with/stand/bear 忍受8in_a_way/in_some_ways/in_a_sense/to_some_degree 在某种程度上9figure_out/make_out/understand 理解；明白10make_sense 有意义；讲得通11end_up_doing_sth. 结果做某事第三步：由词扩句雏形现1今年暑假期间我渴望做一些有意义的事情。(主谓结构)During_the_summer_holidays_this_year,_I_was_eager_to_do_something_meaningful.2我突然想起来了在肯德基快餐店应该可以找到工作。(it 作形式主语；occur)It_occurred_to_me_that_there_should_be_some_jobs_available_at_a_KFC_fast_food_restaurant.3这是我第一次在那儿工作。(It was the first time that .)It_was_the_first_time_that_I_had_worked_there.4这项工作辛苦且枯燥。(主系表结构)The_job_was_hard_and_boring.5我感到非常疲劳，无法忍受，几乎中途放弃。(并列句)It_made_me_too_tired_to_put_up_with_it_and_I_almost_abandoned_the_chance_halfway.6是我的意志使我坚持了下去。(强调句型)It_was_my_determination_that_made_me_stick_to_it.7每天我都要起早贪黑地工作。(主谓结构)Every_day_I_started_for_work_early_in_the_morning_and_got_home_late_in_the_evening.8在新学期开始之前，我终于完成了这项工作。(主谓宾结构；时间状语从句)I_ended_up_finishing_the_job_before_the_new_term_began. 9我明白了尽管劳动在某种程度上让人很累，但是很有意义。(宾语从句；although 引导的状语从句)I_figure_out_that_although_the_labour_is_tiring_in_a_way,_it_is_meaningful.10我认为工作越努力，结果就会越好。(the比较级，the比较级)I_think_the_harder_you_work,_the_better_result_you_will_get.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句4和句5The_job_was_hard_and_boring,_which_made_me_too_tired_to_put_up_with_it_and_I_almost_abandoned_the_chance_halfway.2用省略的状语从句改写句9I_figure_out_that_although_tiring_in_a_way,_the_labour_is_meaningful.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇During_the_summer_holidays_this_year,_I_was_eager_to_do_something_meaningful._And_it_occurred_to_me_that_there_should_be_some_jobs_available_at_a_KFC_fast_food_restaurant.I_got_a_job_there_as_a_cleaner._I_worked_seven_hours_a_day_for_three_weeks._It_was_the_first_time_that_I_had_worked_there._The_job_was_hard_and_boring,_which_made_me_too_tired_to_put_up_with_it_and_I_almost_abandoned_the_chance_halfway._After_all,_it_was_my_determination_that_made_me_stick_to_it._Every_day_I_started_for_work_early_in_the_morning_and_got_home_late_in_the_evening.And_I_ended_up_finishing_the_job_bef