2018_2019学年高中英语Unit19LanguageSectionⅥ（自修课）Writing—咨询信学案（含解析）.docx

Section (自修课) Writing 咨询信书信的写作是近几年高考书面表达的热点，而咨询信是一种常用的书信形式，在平时的练习中一定要重视它。咨询信要写明写信的理由，最重要的是咨询的内容。一、基本结构咨询信的格式通常由下列五个部分组成：1信头：信头包括写信人地址和写信日期，通常写在信笺的右上角。2称呼：称呼指写信人对收信人的称呼，如Dear Mr.Li，写在信头的下方和信笺的左边。称呼一般用Dear .或My dear .开头，称呼后一般用逗号。3正文：这是书信的主体部分，即写信人要表达的内容。正文要求语言通顺、层次分明、表意清楚。正文通常要包括以下两点：(1)写信的理由I am writing to ask for more information about .(2)说明要咨询的内容I would like to know more about the sort of conditions .4结束语：它是书信结尾的恭维话，相当于中文书信最后的“祝好”“致礼”之类的话语。“Best wishes”(致以最美好的祝愿)是最常用的结束语。5签名：签名通常在结束语下方的中间偏右的位置。在签名的上方可以根据写信人和收信人的关系写上Sincerely yours/Yours sincerely(用于长辈或朋友之间)，或Respectfully yours/Yours respectfully(用于对长辈或上级)。二、增分佳句1I would be grateful if you could give me more information about the accommodation.2Could you please send me information about the accommodation?3Could you possibly tell me what . ?4I wonder whether you could possibly send me details about the health insurance.5I would prefer to have a single room, if possible.6I would also like to stay on for another two days, if that is at all possible.7I would like to . provided that it has . 8I would prefer not to share . unless/except if I have to . 9It is not clear if/whether your company only arranges flights .题目要求假设你是李华，就申请加入英语俱乐部给俱乐部负责人写一封信，咨询相关事宜，如入会方式、条件、会费、活动等。注意：1.词数100左右；开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam， Yours faithfully，Li Hua第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为咨询信；2确定人称：本文主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：本文主要时态应为一般现在时。二、构思第一部分：写信目的。第二部分：咨询内容。第三部分：盼回复。第二步：核心词汇想周全1apply_for申请2._membership 会员3be_eager_to_do_sth.;_be_keen_to_do_sth.;_long_to_do_sth. 渴望做某事4improve;_raise;_increase 提高5pay_for 为付费6._host;_hold 举办第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我给你写信申请英语俱乐部的会员。(主谓宾结构；apply for)I_am_writing_to_you_to_apply_for_the_membership_of_the_English_Club._2作为来自英语系的学生，我渴望成为英语俱乐部的一员，进一步提高我的英语。(主系表结构；不定式作目的状语)As_a_student_from_the_English_Department,_I_am_eager_to_be_one_member_of_the_English_Club_to_improve_my_English.3我知道有一些要求，但我不清楚细节。(but连接的并列句)I_know_there_are_some_requirements,_but_I_am_not_clear_about_the_details.4我有必要付会员费吗？(主系表结构；it作形式主语)Is_it_necessary_for_me_to_pay_for_membership?5如果是这样，应该付多少？(if 引导的条件状语从句)If_it_is_so,_how_much_should_I_pay?6我还听说俱乐部将举办各种活动，你能给我更多的细节吗？(and连接的并列句)I_have_also_heard_that_the_club_will_host_various_activities,_and_can_you_give_me_more_details?7如果你能尽快给我一个答复，我将非常感激。(if 引导的条件状语从句)I_would_be_very_grateful_if_you_could_send_me_a_reply_as_soon_as_possible.8期待很快收到你的来信。(主谓宾结构)Im_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you_soon._第四步：句式升级造亮点1用so that/in order that引导的目的从句改写句2As_a_student_from_the_English_Department,_I_am_eager_to_be_one_member_of_the_English_Club_in_order_that/so_that_I_can_improve_my_English.2用状语从句的省略改写句5If_so,_how_much_should_I_pay?第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear Sir or Madam，I_am_writing_to_you_to_apply_for_the_membership_of_the_English_Club._As_a_student_from_the_English_Department,_I_am_eager_to_be_one_member_of_the_English_Club_in_order_that/so_that_I_can_improve_my_English._I_know_there_are_some_requirements,_but_I_am_not_clear_about_the_details._Is_it_necessary_for_me_to_pay_for_membership?_If_so,_how_much_should_I_pay?_And_how_often?_I_have_also_heard_that_the_club_will_host_various_activities,_and_can_you_gi