writingrangefinders六级写作范围.ppt

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling,1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2. 出现这种现象的原因是 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为,As known to all, there are many people learn English in China. However, many students prefer to read more rather than pay enough attention to spelling, which may contribute to their bad writing. Whats the reasons? Firstly, many of students may not know the importance of spelling clearly. Meanwhile, reading plays an important role in the English tests which makes the learners prefer choosing to spelling. In the end, many learn English just with the purpose of passing the tests or read English papers, while spelling may not help them much. As far as I am concerned, spelling is the important part in learning. The learners should not only spend time on spelling but also should use English much. On the other hand, the way of testing should be changed. More spelling can be added to it. Then the students can also do more spelling to learn more words. With the help of their teachers, the learners may make a progress in spelling.,Nowadays, many students dont pay attention to spelling in learning English. When they try to memorize some new words, they ignore spelling. As a result, they often make mistakes in spelling words. As far as I am concerned, I think the reason for this phenomenon is that students dont grasp the importance of spelling. They hold the view that its more important to read words and know the meanings of words correctly. However, they are not right. Spelling is very important for us to learn English. Imaging if you cant spell a word correctly, how can others know what do you want to say in your composition or something you write? In my opinion, students must pay more attention to spelling in order to change this phenomenon. First, they should know the importance of spelling clearly. Second, when they learn some new words, they should try really hard to spell them correctly. As long as they keep eyes on spelling, surely they can be successful in learning English.,These days when learning English, a large number of students fail to pay attention to spelling. Easily found in their essays are spelling mistakes which to some extent affect communication. Several factors may account for such phenomenon. In the first place, the wide use of network language with short-formed words and non-standard spelling should be responsible. It sets up a bad example for students to follow. Additionally, the time and effort devoted to different aspects of English learning have a lot to do with it. Oral English and listening skills have gained great attention, while spelling and writing training is inadequate. Last but not least, it is the students themselves that ignore the importance of correct spelling. To reverse the trend, joint efforts are needed. Teachers need to emphasize on spelling in class. On the part of students, its high time that they recognized the significance of spelling and tried to avoid spelling mistakes. By doing so, correct spelling will be guaranteed in the near future.,Nowday, in our study many students are not pay attention to spelling. In my opinion, the following count for this. Firstly, the increasing number of student think that the goal is able to communicate with foreiners. Secondly, in the English test these days, many student always not writing the word clear to confuse the teachers, that is the way of the test to give a chance to the students to do that. However, as it known to all, the right spelling is very important in many sides. The wrong spelling in your brief can just make you lose the job. In one word, the spelling is quite important. We should make a great concern in it. In order to change this problem, my thinking is that we should put the spelling in the English teaching. And in the homework and test of English, teachers should be sticker than before. Finally, as the student, we also should not only make effort in speaking but in spelling.,In today, with computer, some students often spelt fault, they are Attention. When they are spelling in English. Some students think English words spelling is different. Its no different in today. Why no arise the because? Because. Computer arised. Some students often use the computer. They are little use hand. They think. Computer should be help them in spelling. They are use due attention given to spelling. On the other hand, the teacher also give students hand homework, the teacher thinks some student also like doing homework. In order to some studentdon;t like the subject, So some teacher dont give them to do homework, computers arise is important; But the teachers important also is a part because. In order to change the contiet, I think student should be attent to spelling. Students should be think:spelling is very important in today. Students should be little use computer. And the teachers also should be give students to some homework. I think the important is themselves.,13-15 漂漂亮亮 切题. 表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好，基本上没有语言错误 10-12 清清楚楚 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误 7-9 马马虎虎 基本切题。表达思想比较清晰，文章尚连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误 4-6 稀里糊涂 基本切题。表达思想不够清晰、连贯性差，有较多严重的语言错误 1-3 一塌糊涂 条理不清、思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误,高分标准 1） 内容切题； 2) 表达清楚； 3） 文字连贯； 4） 句式多变；5） 语言规范。 低分特点 1） 扣题不紧； 2） 表述不准（词汇障碍，中式英语障碍，语法障碍）； 3） 字数不够； 4） 自迹不清。,段落的连贯性（coherence) 1） 合理使用代词及其他起指代作用的词； 2） 重复关键词； 3） 使用过渡词语； 4） 使用平行结构,句式变换 1） 长句与短句的变换； 2） 主动与被动的变换； 3） 非谓语动词与从句的变换； 4） 松散句与掉尾句的变换； 5） 强调句的变换； 6） 倒装句的变换,亮点句的设计 1） 遣词用语准确贴切 认真辨析同义词； 恰当使用限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度； 注意词语的习惯搭配； 避免生造词语； 避免口语化； 避免赘言啰嗦。 2） 遣词用语形象生动 选用具体明确的词； 利用不同的词类； 动态动词的使用； 注意词语的感情色彩； 3） 开头结尾突破常规 4） 适当运用修辞手法 5） 恰当使用警句格言,开头万能公式,开头万能公式一：名人名言 有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！ 原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？ 经典句型： A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言） It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言） 更多经典句型： As everyone knows, No one can deny that,开头万能公式,开头万能公式二：数字统计 原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型： According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造： Travel by Bike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 Youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 更多句型： A recent statistics shows that ,结尾万能公式,结尾万能公式一：如此结论 说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的