如何写好有关地点介绍的基础写作.ppt

Basic Writing,基础写作,HOW TO INTRODUCE A PLACE,When you want to describe a place, what aspects will you write about?,1. location (位置) 2. area (面积) 3. population(人口) 4. history (历史) 5. places of interest (名胜) 6. climate (气候) 7. resources(资源） ,常用语句：useful expression,1.所处位置（Location） There be/stand(s) be located/situated in lies in/on/to . be in the east/west/south/north of To the east/west ofis . in the middle/center of .stands at the foot of/ on the top of,1.日本在中国的东方。 2.这房子朝南。 3.新教学楼坐落在学校的中央。,翻译,Japan is/lies to the east of China.,The house faces (to) the south.,The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.,4.中国位于亚洲东部，是世界上最大的国家之一。,China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of the largest countries in the world.,常用语句：useful expression,2.人口（Population） It has a population of. Its population is The population of is It is a with a population of Its population is increasing rapidly.,常用语句：useful expression,3.面积（Area） It has/covers an area of A takes up thousand square kilometers. It is thousand square kilometers Tiananmen Square, covering an area of,is the largest square in the world.,常用语句：useful expression,4.历史（History） has / with a (long )history of .has a history of over 5000 years. .is a developing country with a long history. The castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history.,5. Places of interest (名胜) 1)The city, known as, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 2)The city is well-known / famous for its/as 3) A walk around is a feast for the mind as well as the eye. 4) There are many places of interest in .,among which,、气候(climate)： （注意表示天气变化的形容词） There is a variety of climate ( warm, dry, humid, cold, sunny, stormy, rainy) The climate there is mild all the year around. 四季温和 with four distinct (clear-cut) seasons 7.Resources（资源）: be rich /abundant in The places around our city are rich in natural resources,常用语句：useful expression,8.其他 transportation convenient economy prosperous environment harmonious people hospitable eye-catching scenery,练习：请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。 龙川县位于广东省东北部，历史悠久，是一个山区县，自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富，总面积3089平方公里，人口约90万，气候宜人，夏天不是太热，冬天不是太冷。霍山是龙川县的风景名胜之一,每年吸引大量游客。,写作思路,1、审题- 文体： 人称： 时态： 要点：,地点介绍,第三人称,一般现在时,位置、历史、资源、面积、人口、气候和风景名胜（特色),2、谋篇：要点重组,第一句： 第二句： 第三句： 第四句： 第五句：,地理位置/特点、历史,面积、人口,气候,风景名胜,资源,第一步，提取信息： Longchuan is located/situated/lies in the northeast of Guangdong province. It is a mountainous county . It has a long history. It takes up/ covers an area of 3089 square kilometers. It has a population of about 900 thousand.,6.The climate is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. 7.Every year, the Huoshan Mountain attracts many tourists from different places for its beautiful scenery. 8.It is rich in natural resources, such as mine, forest, farm produce and so on.,第二步，连句成篇 Located in the northeast of Guangdong province, Longchuan is a mountainous county with a long history. It covers a total area of 3089 square kilometers with a population of about 900 thousand. The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are many places of interest, among which is the,Huoshan Mountain, whose scenery is very beautiful, attracts lots of tourists from different places every year. Longchuan is also rich in resources, such as mine, forest, farm produce and so on.,Writing suggestions,审题：文体，主体时态和人称； 考虑篇章结构; 确定要点，写出相关英语词语； 根据所列词语，写出句子(表达变化)； 连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语和适当 增加细节。,假如你是一名导游，请根据下面的内容介绍我国的海南岛. 面积:约35 000平方公里 (中国第二大岛) 历史:6 000多年 人口:7 110 000左右,包括十个民族. 居民谋生方式:种水稻,捕鱼等. 气候:四季温和 风景名胜众多, 是著名的旅游胜地.,Assignment,Hainan Island When you come to Hainan, the second largest island in China, you will find it mild all the year round and the places of interest there are really a feast for eyes. It covers an area of 35000 square kilometers with a history of over 6000 years. The population of it is 7.11 million, which consists of 10,nationalities. People here get many ways to earn their living, for example, growing rice, fishing and so on. Tourism is also developing fast with its vast coastline and natural harbors.,Lets practise,请根据下面的提示,介绍香港. 1.香港位于中国的南海之滨，面积约1104 平方公里，包括香港岛、九龙及新界 和离岛(Kowloon,New Territories,Outlying Islands).人口约为699万人。 2.香港电影业也很繁荣,对香港的经济发展 做出了很大贡献。 3.香港人热爱体育运动，被选为2008年 奥运会部分项目比赛的举办城市。 4. 风景秀丽，气候温和，名胜众多是著名的 旅游胜地和购物天堂。,Hongkong Hongkong,like a brilliant pearl,is located on the northeastern coastline of china, covering an area of 1104 square kilometers with a population of over 6.99million. It consists of Hong Kong Island,Kowloon,New Territories,Outlying Islands.It is a thriving tourist resort and shopping paradise due to its mild climate and beautiful scenery , natural harbors, attracting tourists from all over the world.,The film industry