《高考书面表达》PPT课件.ppt

高三复习,记叙文写作,近年高考书面表达透析,Topic: How to do well in narrative writing, Six elements 5 Ws; 1H Three parts, eight sentences,（2007湖南卷）,假设你是王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。 要点：1. 简要表述李华在你心目中的印象； 2. 用一到两个相关的事例进行描述； 3. 你对李华表示美好的祝愿。 注意：1. 内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。词数120左右。 2. 不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。,真题分析,本书面表达题是文字提示,因此学生在动笔前先要审阅提示。如： 文章的体裁：记叙文。 人称：第一和二人称。 时态：以过去时和一般现在时为主，表述李华在你心目中的印象时用一般现在时。 关联词：when, still, later, while, without, till等。,破题分析,写作指导,开头,Some possible expressions : I feel very sad that we shall say goodbye to each other. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. At the time for us to say goodbye, I feel very grateful to you for your great help. Its time to say goodbye. Ill value the time when we study together. Its time to recall those beautiful days we spend together.,写作指导,正文,Some possible expressions: One day in spring after school, it began to rain suddenly when we were on our way home. I didnt take my umbrella with me, but you offered to help me. As a result, you got yourself all wet. The next day, your mother called our head teacher and said that you had caught a bad cold. Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination.,写作指导,结尾,Some possible expressions: I feel very glad that I have a good friend like. I hope well keep in touch with each other all the time. I hope our friendship will last for ever. I wish you a bright future. I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe!,Dear Li Hua, Its time to say goodbye. Its time to recall those beautiful days we have spent together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. You are the most considerate person who knows exactly what I need. Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.! Yours, Wang Ping,范文,操练,2008年元月下旬，全国下了一场几十年未遇的大雪。假设你是某英语报社的记者，请你用英语向国外朋友介绍你在永州的所见所闻。 1简要介绍这场大雪的情况。 2举例说明造成的影响和人们采取的措施。 3最后写出你的感受。 注意：1词数：120左右。 2参考词汇：目的地：destination 停开：out of service,本书面表达题是文字提示,根据上面介绍的方法先要审阅提示。如： 文章的体裁： 人称： 时态： 关联词：,破题分析,记叙文。 第一和三人称。 以过去时态为主。表述你的感受时可用一般现在时。 besides, not onlybut also, as a result, therefore, as soon as等。,范文,A heavy snow In the late January of 2008, Yongzhou saw a disaster of snow that has never happened in several decades. It lasted for a long time, greatly affecting peoples life. As a result, many vehicles were trapped on the roads. Therefore, people were forced to head for their destinations on foot. Not only were all the flights cancelled but also the trains were out of service. The city government called on all the citizens and soldiers to take part in the activities of cleaning the roads covered by snow. Besides, the city government took all kinds of effective measures to rescue the people trapped in the snow to ensure that everything returned to normal as soon as possible. Experiencing such a heavy snow, I firmly believe that united, we are strong; divided, we are weak., 审试题：以切中题意。 圈要点：防止遗漏要点。 注短语：为写作做好准备。 定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、 开头、正文、结尾。 写全文：一鼓作气，一气呵成。 改病句：认真检查