高三英语作文专题训练.ppt

高三英语作文专题训练,-巧解作文中“逗号”和“句号”的使用,导学案,学习目标： 1.认知“逗号误用”现象并学习修改方法； 2. 学习使用“连句”法改进“句号过多”的现象。 学习重点： “逗号误用”的修改、“连句”的方法。 学习过程： 1. 自学学案自主探究学习日志课前报告 2. 问题展示合作探究答疑解惑巩固训练,预习任务单,1. 学习学案中有关“逗号误用”的内容 2.学习学案中有关“连句”的内容 3.完成上述两项内容的相应巩固练习 4.完成学习日志，提交个人疑问难题,潜心自学,（学案引领，自我体悟，合作探究）,一、“逗号误用”现象举例,中文与英文最大的区别，在于中文句子是“意合”的，而英文句子是“形合”。英语中，句子之间必须有连词连接，构成并列句或者复合句；独立的两句话不能仅靠逗号连接。如： “他赢了，我们笑了。” He won, we laughed. (F) He won, and we laughed.(T),2.“逗号误用”修改方法,对于误用“逗号”而造成的“逗号误用”现象，可以通过四种方法修改：即 1. 逗号变句号 2.逗号变分号 3.句间加连词 4.变成非谓语动词,请试翻译,习主席应英国首相卡梅伦邀请，在一家乡村酒吧喝了啤酒，吃了炸鱼薯条。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron, they enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub. 【改错】,四种改法之一,1. 变逗为句号。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron. They enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub.,之二,2. 变逗为分号。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron；they enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub,之三,3. 句间加连词。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron and they enjoyed a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub,之四,4. 变成非谓语动词。 President Xi was invited by Prime Minister Cameron to enjoy a drink and a portion of fish and chips at a country pub,即学即用(改错-逗号误用）,1）The exam was postponed, the class was cancelled. 考试推迟了，上课取消了。 2）It rained all night, the ceiling began to leak. 雨下了一整夜，天花板开始漏水。,二、句号问题,1. “联句“(sentence combing)现象举例 有时两个或者更多的句子，如果内容上关系很密切，我们可以把它们连城一个句子。通过联句的方法，使文章的意思更加连贯，结构更加紧凑，语言更加生动。掌握好的联句方法，对英语写作能力的提高有很大的帮助。,2.联句的方法,1）介词联句法 eg. He didnt write the letter himself. He asked his friend to do it. _writing the letter himself, he asked his friend to do so.,2.联句的方法,1）介词联句法 eg. He didnt write the letter himself. He asked his friend to do it. _writing the letter himself, he asked his friend to do so.( instead of ),eg2. Ford produces cheap cars. Ford also supplies Americans with better ones year after year. _ producing cheaper cars, Ford also supplies Americans with better ones year after year,eg2. Ford produces cheap cars. Ford also supplies Americans with better ones year after year. _ producing cheaper cars, Ford also supplies Americans with better ones year after year.( Besides, Apart from).,2)并列连词法,eg1. The moon was hidden entirely behind the dark clouds. Not a single star could be seen. 变为_The moon was hidden entirely behind the dark clouds and not a single star could be seen,2)并列连词法,eg1. The moon was hidden entirely behind the dark clouds. Not a single star could be seen. 变为_The moon was hidden entirely behind the dark clouds and not a single star could be seen,eg2. He had failed many times. He was confident that he would succeed in the end.,eg2. He had failed many times. He was confident that he would succeed in the end. 变为句子He had failed many times， yet he was confident that he would succeed in the end.,3. 从属连词法（名定状）,1. Intelligence tests actually give a measurement of the intelligence of individuals . But they are questioned by some experts.,3. 从属连词法（名定状）,1. Intelligence tests actually give a measurement of the intelligence of individuals . But they are questioned by some experts. 变为句子 That intelligence tests actually give a measurement of the intelligence of individuals is questioned by some experts.,eg2. There were many people waiting at the bus stop. Some of the people looked very anxious and disappointed at the station.,定语从句,eg2. There were many people waiting at the bus stop. Some of the people looked very anxious and disappointed at the station. 变为句子There were many people waiting at the bus stop where some of the people looked very anxious and disappointed at the station.,定语从句,状语从句,eg3. He was so sad. He didnt know what to say or what to do.,状语从句,eg3. He was so sad. He didnt know what to say or what to do. 变为He was so sad that he didnt know what to say or what to do.,4)非谓语动词法（分词，不定式，动名词）,eg1. I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday. I tried to find a garage to repair my car. 变为句子I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday ， trying to find a garage to repair my car.,4)非谓语动词法（分词，不定式，动名词）,eg1. I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday. I tried to find a garage to repair my car.,(to do ),eg2. On national day he got up very eary. He wanted to watch raising national flag on Tiananmen Square.,(to do ),eg2. On national day he got up very eary. He wanted to watch raising national flag on Tiananmen Square. 变化句子On national day he got up very early to watch raising national flag on Tiananmen Square.,eg3. The dog barked all night long. They kept the whole neighbor hood awake. .,eg3. The dog barked all night long. They kept the whole neighbor hood awake. 变化句子The dogs barking all night long kept the whole neighbor hood awake.,5) 同位语短语法,There they were greeted by a woman called Zenobia. She was a beautiful woman of wealth and position.,5) 同位语短语法,There they were greeted by a woman called Zenobia. She was a beautiful woman of wealth and position. 变为句子There they were greeted by a woman called Zenobia, a beautiful woman of wealth and position.,6)独立主格法,Their children watched the buses passing through the village. Their eyes were bright and eager. 变化句子Their children watched the buses passing through the village, their eyes being bright and eager.,3.即学即练,1）Dogs are able and willing to learn a wide variety of tasks. They are intelligent and devoted to their owners.,2）,I cleaned the spot on the kitchen floor. It still looked dirty.,3),John Smith planted these apple trees three years ago. They have not born any fruit.,4),Old students acquire most of their information from reading. Therefore good reading habits are extremely important.,5),I approached the island. I noticed a row of newly built houses.,6),His sons lie in cemeteries in France. His sons were killed during the Second World War.,7),One cheats on tests repeatedly. This is risky. This is self-defeating.,8),Tom was an eventempered man. He was nevertheless extremely angry when he heard the news.,9),We have considere