外研社Module3myfirstrideonatrain写作.ppt

Module 3 My First Ride on a Train,Writing,写作五步骤,1. 审清主题 看题目中涉及到了哪些关键点，这些点要全部包含其中 2. 搜集素材 素材的收集 一定要在已经将关键点包含其中的基础上，在头脑中进行相关的内容串联。 3. 编写句子： 句子的编写过程中要主要句子成分一定要完整；具体的语法使用一定要正确 （主谓一致，主格，宾格，固定短语等）；省略掉累赘不必要的句子。 4. 提示技巧 回忆自己曾经记忆过的好的句型，将简单句适当转换为高级句子。 5.Write a ParagraphParagraphs 连句成文 Firstly , First, First of all, Secondly, Then, After this/that, Finally, Last, Lastly, and, however, therefore.,Brainstorming:,试着描述一次你的旅行，写出相关的可能涉及到的要点：,August 14th,it was cloudy.,My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road （大洋路）in Australia.（时间，天气，人物，目的地）,We started from Melbourne. We drove along the freeway through the desert and forests. (旅程 以及交通工具）,We saw some kangaroos and koalas along the road. （见闻）,Finally, four hours later, we arrived at the Great Ocean Road. （注意写作中连词的运用）,At this moment it began to rain cats and dogs.猛烈的大雨（旅途中的天气变化）,In the rain, the waves ,rocks and winds looked splendid(壮观). (旅途中的景色）,I took a lot of pictures there.(我的活动）,After a while, the rain stopped and the rainbow appeared.（天气变化）,In the sun, the sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden.,Its very beautiful. This is a memorable trip. (结束语：多为对上文写作内容的总结，可表达自己的感受等）,August 14, it was a cloudy winter in Australia. My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road. We started from Melbourne. We drove along the freeway through the desert and forests. We saw some kangaroos and koalas by the road. Finally, four hours later, we arrived at the Great Ocean Road. At this moment it began to rain cats and dogs. In the heavy rain, the waves , winds and rocks looked splendid(壮观).I took a lot of pictures there. After a while, the rain stopped and the rainbow appeared. In the sun, the sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden. Its very attractive. I enjoyed myself very much,在作文中用到第一人称用来描述真实的或者想想类的发生在自己身上的事件,Instructions,2. 可能用到的时态（参考时态） 一般过去时态： e.g. My colleges and I had a visit to the Great Ocean Road in Australia. 过去进行时 e.g. It was raining for about half an hour. 过去完成时 e.g. The train had already left by the time we got to the station.,作业：根据你自己写出的要点，结合练习册60页上的要点描述你的一次旅行。,results,Attitudes