2019_20学年高中英语Unit4HelpingpeoplearoundtheworldPeriodSixWriting—Writingaproposal课件.pptx

,Helping people around the world,Unit 4,PART 1,技法点拨,PART 2,写作训练,Period Six WritingWriting a proposal,PART 1,技法点拨,文体分析 把握写作动脉,本单元的写作要求是写一封建议信。建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法，也可能是写给某个组织或机构就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。 其基本结构为： 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。 尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以采纳、问题得以解决的愿望。,1.Im sorry to know that you have some trouble/difficulty/problems in.after reading your letter. 2.Im writing to persuade you to. 3.First of all，I think it would be better if. 4.Here Id like to give my advice on./I would like to suggest that. 5.If I were you，I would. 6.The reason why.is that. 7.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision. 8.I am looking forward to your good news.,PART 2,写作训练,弄清文络 写作妙笔生花,某国际购物中心拟建立“无烟超市”，从“本商场不出售香烟”入手，号召广大顾客在本商场购物期间不吸烟。但是来自美国的Smith经理又考虑到个人权利和自由问题，怕影响商场的经营。因此他想先征求大家的意见。假设你是李华，请你给该商场的经理写一封150词左右的书信，表达自己的观点，并简单陈述理由。,1.时态：本文以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，个别地方也可能用到现在完成时或现在进行时等。 2.人称：以第一、第二人称为主，少数句子中会用到第三人称。 3.目的：表达个人观点并陈述理由。,必备词汇 1.国际购物中心 _ 2.无烟超市 _ 3.在我看来 _ 4.不但而且 _ 5.对有好处 _,查看答案,an international shopping center,Non-smoking Supermarket,in my opinion/view,not only.but also.,do good to.,6.放弃 _ 7.作为回报 _ 8.另外 _ 9.总而言之 _ 10.正相反 _,查看答案,give up,in return,in addition,all in all,on the contrary,句式升级 1.它可以帮助吸烟者少吸烟，对其他顾客的健康也有好处。 _and it can also do good to other customers health. _，but it can also do good to other customers health.(not only.but also.) 2.他们会很高兴听从你的建议，不会再考虑自己的权利和自由了。 They will be happy to follow your suggestions and _ _. They will be happy to follow your suggestions，_ _.(现在分词短语作伴随状语),查看答案,It can help the smokers to smoke less,Not only can it help the smokers to smoke less,they wont consider,their own rights and freedom again,not considering their own,rights and freedom again,3.另外，在购物中心吸烟可能导致火灾，对于你的财产和顾客都是非常危险的。 In addition，smoking in the shopping center may cause fire and _ _both your possessions and the customers. In addition，smoking in the shopping center may cause fire，_ _both your possessions and the customers.(非限制性定语从句),查看答案,it is very,dangerous for,which is very,dangerous for,参考范文 Dear Mr Smith， Im very glad to hear that your international shop ping center will build a “Non-smoking Supermarket”.In my opinion，it is a good idea to do so，for not only can it help the smokers to smoke less，but it can also do good to other customers health while they are doing some shopping there.Since you have given up some benefits by not selling cigarettes，the smokers are most likely to support you in return.They will be happy to follow your suggestions，not considering their own rights and freedom again.In addition，smoking in the shopping center may cause fire，which is very dangerous for both your possessions and the customers.,查看答案,All in all，the “Non-smoking Supermarket” will not