（新课标）2019_2020学年高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤWriting—如何写建议信教案新人教版.docx

Section Writing 如何写建议信 写作规范题目要求假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封100词左右的信。1要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。第一步：审题谋篇1体裁：书信；2话题：向好友提建议；3时态：一般现在时为主；4人称：第二人称。5结构第二步：词汇推敲1交朋友make friends2做有困难 have trouble/difficulty (in) doing.3做朋友 be a friend4和同甘共苦 share happiness and sorrow with.5需要 call for/need第三步：句式锻造1知道你在交友方面有麻烦我很难过。I am sorry to know that you are having trouble/difficulty(in) making friends.2如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境很容易。The situation is easy to change if you take my advice.3想要交朋友，首先要做一个朋友。If you want to make friends, you should be a friend first.4你要和朋友同甘共苦。You should share happiness and sorrow with your friend.5患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。A friend in need is a friend indeed.6友谊需要时间和投入。Friendship calls for/needs time and effort.第四步：句式升级7用why not改写句3。If you want to make friends, why not be a friend first?8用wouldt it be a good idea if.改写句4。Wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend?9用just as a saying goes来丰富句5。Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed.第五步：妙笔成篇(注意使用however, to begin with, in addition, last but not least等关联词) 参考答案：Dear Su Ru，I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends? In addition，wouldnt it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least, wouldnt it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort. I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours，Li Hua写作提升假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你给他写一封回信。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2开头和结尾已给出；3词数100左右。Dear Peter，Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well._ _ _ Yours，Li Hua参考答案：Dear Peter，Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Yours，Li Hua亮点点评：文章首句点明写信的原因，并表达自己的观点，开门见山。引出下文。该句是一个复合句，其中as引导的是原因状语从句。文章结尾暗含盼望回复并表示期望，言简意赅。题型分析建议信是书信的一种，是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文本。注意事项：1建议信一般由开头、正文和结尾三部分构成。2建议信开头要做到开门见山，直接点出写信的目的。3正文一般要给出23条建议，可以利用适当的过渡词让正文结构更有层次性，从而引出所给的建议。4使用“希望这些建议会很有用”来结尾，简短有力。增分佳句1建议信开头常用句式：(1)Im sorry (that) you are having trouble/difficulty/ problems in making friends.很遗憾听说你在交友方面有麻烦/困难/问题。(2)I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely.我知道你目前在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。(3)Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。2.表达建议常用句式：(1)First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this you can make friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部呢？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。(2)Second(ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。(3)Third(ly), it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. By doing this, you will calm yourself down.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。(4)Last but not least, you should talk with her first.最后同样重要的，你应该先和她谈一谈。(5)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other.就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。3建议信结尾常用