专四作文评分标准.doc

Section A: Composition (15%)能根据所给的作文题目、提纲或图表、数据等，写一篇200个单词左右的作文。能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺，表达得体。考试时间35分钟。Section B: Note-writing (10%)能根据所给提示写50至60个单词的便条、通知、请帖等。能做到格式正确，语言得体。考试时间为10分钟Section A: Composition评分标准：14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误。11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。8分：基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字上连贯，但语言错误较多，其中有少量严重错误。5分：基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差，有较严重的语言错误。2分：条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。交白卷者或作文与题目毫不相关，则以零分计算。注：1.如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。2. 对于规定三段的作文，只写一段者：04分； 只写两段者：09 分。3. 按规定，考生作文若为0分，考试均作不及格处理；若作文分高于0分，低于6分，要在总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。注：字数不足应酌情扣分。*累计字数在150-170之间，扣1分。*累计字数在130-150之间，扣2分。*累计字数在110-130之间，扣3分。*累计字数在90-110之间，扣4分。*累计字数在90个以下，最多给5分。作文命题英语专业四级命题作文的出题范围是根据考生的知识结构、年龄特点和文化背景而确定的，不外乎校园生活、社会生活等日常话题，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容校园话题:My Idea of a University Arts Festival (2005)Travel Broadens the Mind? (2001)The Importance of Extracurricular Activities (2000) 社会话题1. 社会生活The Benefits of Volunteering (2008)Saving Money or Spending Tomorrows Money (2006)2. 环境与健康The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood (2003)The Best Way to Stay Healthy (2002)3. 科技与校园Is It Wise to Make Friends on the Internet? (2007)Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? (2004)A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television (1999)Section B: Note-writing根据大纲，便条的满分为10分，评分主要参照作文格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。以2008年专业四级考试的便条写作要求为例：Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 作文格式、内容、语言、语言得体性评分标准：1. 格式日期、称呼和结尾不符合格式，人名没写或用XX表示等要扣1分，最多扣2分。2. 内容要求涵盖 telling her which one + two features少一点扣一分，最多三项内容扣3分。3. 语言严重词法、句法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误两个扣1分，最多扣4分。4. 语言得体性总分在8分及以上可考虑加此分。总字数少于40或多于70字扣1分。便条写作要领:一、格式固定1.日期 2.称谓 3.便条主体 4.署名1.要求日期写在右上角，以下写法均可：1(st) October(,) 2008 May 20(th), 2008 20/5/2008 5/20/2008May 20th May 202. 称呼写在日期下一行左侧Dear Jane, Dear Jane:Dear Dr. Herce,Dear Mr. Wang,Dear Grandpa, Dear Aunt,3. 结尾写在右下方Yours sincerely, Sincerely yours, Sincerely,Yours,二、信息明确便条内容要明确，如时间、地点和事由等。三、语言通俗写便条时应该避免使用过于书面化的语言。从语言上来讲，便条的语言一般通俗易懂，接近口语。例如：We are greatly honored to write to you. Having been living on the campus for a whole year, we have happily witnessed the great changes here. (过于正式）四、内容得体从语言得体性上来讲， 便条的语言要区分对象，使用不同的礼貌语言。不同的便条用语要有所不同。如邀请朋友参加音乐会，The concert is of modern significance. Your acceptance will be highly appreciated. （过于客气）The concert is great. Im sure you will like it. 另外，过于随意的语言在试卷中也是不合适的，如Im gonna go. See ya. TEM4便条的要点：一、写便条的原因二、要告诉的事情三、有关的希望、建议或要求等Task 1Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. May 20Dear Jane, I have heard that you are thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. Id like to recommend 21st Century to you. The paper is also characterized by its simple language and lots of information. You can not only learn English but also broaden your horizon by reading it regularly. I hope you can find the newspaper that you want.Yours, Mary1. AppointmentsUseful Expressions: Could/Shall we meet/go/discuss Would you please meet (sb.)/pick (sb.) up The flight/train arrives/leaves/departs Would/Could you please pick me up/arrange for sb. to (do)Exercise One:留条给Robert Stein, 告诉他已安排好小周送他去机场，请他11点在宾馆大厅等候。 April. 5Dear Robert/Mr. Stein, Ive arranged for Mr. Zhou to take you to the airport. Please wait for him at 11 a.m. at the hotel lobby. Yours, (your name)Assignment One:Write a note to a foreign expert, and make an appointment to discuss the outline of your paper with him/her.2. Apologies致歉类便条主体通常包括四个部分：第一部分是作出道歉；第二部分是向对方说明道歉的原因；第三部分是具体解释过失事件的原因；第四部分是提出补救措施。致歉类便条应该注意语言的得体性。Useful Expressions： (I am) (very/terribly) sorry that (Im) sorry about/for (doing/not doing) sth. I am afraid/I am sorry I (must/do) apologize for I would like to express my apologies for Please accept my (sincere/earnest/deepest/belated) apologies for I/We very much regret any inconvenience it may cause youTask 2Directions: You are Katherine. You have made a meeting with your business partner Sam on Mar. 6. Unfortunately, you have to be out of town that day. So you want to postpone the date to the same time two days later. Write a note to tell him the delay and make an apology. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.March 3Dear Sam,I am sorry to say that I shall be out of town on business on Mar. 6, so I am afraid I will have to postpone our meeting to Friday, Mar. 8 at the same hour. I hope that you can still come, and I am regretful for the inconvenience that this postponement brings to you. Please tell me if you can come on Friday.Yours, KatherineTask 3 2001年Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.Oct. 5Dear Professor Wang,Im deeply sorry I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you. I fear you are displeased but I hope you will forgive me, for my mother was sick early yesterday morning and I had to send her to hospital. I know youre busy these days, but I wonder if you could arrange for another appointment by this weekend. I look forward to your early reply.Yours, JohnAssignment Two:写便条给外国教师David King,因没有能够在校图书馆为他借到他要的书向他致歉，并告诉他将设法到其他图书馆试试能否找到。Assignment Three:Youre Peter/Mary. You had a Party at your home recently, but you unintentionally neglected to invite a close friend of yours-Victoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came about.3. Informal invitations邀请类便条书写时要注意以下要求：1