Agree-or-Disagree-型.docx

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and population problems(两个问题要提出两个解决方案).To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective?(第一句写背景)There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and motorways(高速公路) everywhere. (第二句点明自己的观点)Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.(第二段第一句肯定题目方案的有用之处，提高油价直接可以抑制私家车的使用数量)While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are likely to limit the number of drivers for long(长久). (第二句承上启下，以“这个政策”开头，同时提出这样做的不可行性，从而否定这一观点)As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. (第三句转折，引出下一段，点明有其他更可行的方法)But there are various other measures(措施) that could be implemented(实施) that would have a huge effect on these problems.(第一句点明，先说解决污染的问题)I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. (第二句说明可行的原因，因为技术已经支持电动汽车的生产)The technology is already available to produce electric cars (that说明电动汽车的好处)that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. (既然好，就要广泛采用，那么应该采取什么具体措施呢)Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.(第一句说明仅仅这样不能解决堵车问题，从而引出第四段对堵车问题的解决方法)However, traffic congestion(堵车) will not be solved by (对上一段的总结)changing the type of private vehicle people can use. (既然不能解决，怎么做？)To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. (第三句，举例论证)For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, (因果论证，改写)then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. (第四句继续举例)Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the (公众怎么做)public to use public transport more, and on governments(政府怎么做) using public money to construct and run efficient systems.It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?(第一句写背景)One important stage in a childs growth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. (第二句this skill开头承上启下)This skill comes with time and good parenting, (第三句点明自己的观点)and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. (第四句同样是点明观点，反对题目的观点)Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement.(具体情况具体对待)To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. (第二句展开支持句具体举例)To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, (举例解释)as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. (既然惩罚不合适，那么可以改用奖励制度)Once the age of reason is reached(承上启下) however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. (this kind指代“奖励制度”，与惩罚比较)This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail(牵涉) many negative consequences unintended by the parents.(那么老师和家长应该怎么做)To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modeling in their own behavior. After that, if sanctions(惩罚) are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, (每个观点都要解释原因)as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel.(提出第二个可行方案)Rather, teachers and parents can use a variety of methods to discipline(管教) their young charges, such as detention(监禁，放学后留校), withdrawal of privilege, and time-out. Making the punishment fit the crime is a useful notion(观念), (举例论证)which would see children being made to pick up rubbi