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佛山学习前线教育培训中心 初一英语讲义 （52期） 第八讲 书面表达专项训练 学习目标：书面表达综合训练 课前演练：根据下面中英文提示语，写一篇5060个词的英语短文。内容要点：昨天是母亲节，小明为妈妈做了很多事情。他上街为妈妈买了礼物，然后回家，打扫屋子，做饭。妈妈看到小明所做的这一切，非常高兴。小明虽然很累，但心里感到很愉快。提示语： Mothers Day（母亲节）， go shopping（去购物）， buy（买）， clean（清洁）， do the cooking（做饭）， be pleased（高兴的）， be tired（累的）要求：1.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。2.仔细阅读题目要求，将题目上的信息全部体现在短文中。3.要求5060词。（限时10分钟）_ 要点点拔：常见错误一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多同学在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s、前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。1. 审题不清。如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“My Favourite Sport”，同学们觉得这个题目符合要求吗？2. 拼写错误。拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。请同学们找出并改正下面文章的拼写错误：A folish man went to a food shop to buy a fish. As he didnt know how to cook fish, he asked the shop to tell the way of cooking it. The shop did so. “But I cant rember your way,” the foolish man said, “Will you please wrtie them down for me?” The shopkeeper was kind enough to write his words down for the man. The foolish man left happily with the fish in his baket and the note in his pocket. On his way home, a cat saw the fish and folow the man. Suddenly the cat jumped at him, took the fish away from the baket quickly and ran off at once. The foolish man stood there and didnt know what to do. Then he laughed to the cat, “Never mind. You don t know how to eat it. The note is in my pocket.”3. 名词单复数问题。误：My father and my mother is all teacher.正：误：There are a pen and some books on the desk.正：4. 缺少动词。在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：Im tired.误：I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.正：误：The apples cheap. Ill take some.正：5. 缺少介词、冠词等还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。误：Please look the picture.正：误：I will write the words.正：误：Tom can playpiano well.正：6. 代词的误用。英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。误：I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.正：误：This is I book and that is your.正：7. 句子不完整。有的同学因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。误：Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example， my friend in high school.(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)正:8. 前后不一致。所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。例1. When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants，本句是典型的主谓不一致。改为:例2When he was 13 years old, he is hard working.改为：9. 时态、人称和数的搭配错误。汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。误：When I get to the station， the train leave.正：误：The old needs our help.正：10. 综合性错误。综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。 及时演练：你是Betty，请根据根提示写一封e-mail,邀请Tony和你一起去看电影。内容要求：1，邀请Tony在这个星期五晚上和你一起到南海电影院去看Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows（哈利波特与死亡圣器）。2，对这部电影做简单的介绍：（1）这部电影来自于英国有名作家J.K, Rolling的小说Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows。（2）这部电影情节非常刺激，大家看了以后多说很好看。提示信息：南海电影院: Nanhai Theater; 来自: come from; 有名的：famous;刺激：excitingFrom: BettyTo: TonyDay: TuesdayHi! _Best wishes,Betty 综合练习一、 单项选择 ( ) 1. I want to drink _ water. Is there _ water in the glass? A. some, someB. some, anyC. any, anyD. any, some( ) 2. Look! There _ some sheep near the river. A. is B. areC. have D. see( ) 3. How_ you spell watch? A. areB. isC. do D can( ) 4. -Have you got any carrots? -No, I _. A. have B. havent C. dont D. am not( ) 5. Ann likes _, but she cant _ well. A. cook; cook B. to cook; cooks C. cooks; cooking D. cooking; cook( ) 6. Lucy likes drawing,_ she doesnt like reading. A. or B. so C. and D. but( ) 7. Mr. and Mrs. White _ a new car. A. have got B. has got C. is having D. does ( ) 8. This is _ mother, and _ name is Mary.A. her; hisB. my; herC. your; his D his, his( ) 9.-Is there a hospital near here? -Yes,_.A. theres B. it is C. there is D they are( ) 10. This boy is my _.A brother B daughter C father D uncle( ) 11. -Is this a knife?-_.A. Yes, its. B. No, its not.C. Yes, it is. D. No, it is.( ) 12. Its _ black. Its _ black car.A. /B. a/C./a D. a/a( ) 13. Where are the_?A .book B .pens C .map D water ( ) 14. -_students are there in your class, Mr. Li? -Fifty. A. How old B. How much C. How many D what ( ) 15. Theres _old pencil on the book. _ pencil is mine. A. a/an B. /the C. an/The D. the/the( ) 16. Betty is in front of me, so I am _Betty. A. next to B. behind C. in front of D under( ) 17. There are two American boys and _English girl in my class. A. an B. a C. the D many( ) 18. I havent got _ erasers. I think Ann has got _. A. any; any B. some; any C. some; some D. any; some( ) 19. There _ a mother, a father and children in the family. A. be B. have C. are D. is( ) 20. Were Kates _.Im her mothers brother. He is her fathers brother. A. uncle B. friends C. uncles D. brothers( ) 21. How many _ do you want?A. bread B. pieces of bread C. piece of bread D. a piece of bread( ) 22. Kate _ her mother. She _ swimming very much, but her mother doesnt. A. doesnt like, is likesB. isnt like, likes C. doesnt like, is likeD. isnt like, is like( ) 23. Would you like to come to meet my family? _. A. Yes, Id like. B. Yes, Id like to. C. No, I wouldnt( ) 24Can I help you? -Yes, Id like five _and some peas.A. potato B. tomatoes C. meat D. banana( ) 25.Nine _ pounds a week? Thats very good. A. hundred of B. hundreds of C. hundreds D. hundred.二、 完形填空Zhang Jun is a Chinese _36_.He is not young, but he is not_37_.He is thirty-nine. He has a daughter._38_name is Zhang Li. She is _39_._40_ is a Chinese girl. And she is a student. She _41_very lovely(可爱的). She is in _42_ Three, Grade One. She likes _43_because(因为) she likes the sky(天空). And she _44_dance.Mr Zhang teaches English._45_his class, there are forty-two _46_.They are all _47_ students. His wife（妻子）,_48_Zhang,is a teacher, too. Today is Sunday. They neednt（不必） go to_49_._50_is free（有空） in Mr. Zhangs family.( ) 1. A. worker B. policeman C. student D. teacher( ) 2. A. good B. old C. young D. friend( ) 3. A. He B. His C. Hes D. Her( ) 4. A. eight B. thirty-two C. double eleven D. double sixteen( ) 5. A. His B. She C. He D. Her( ) 6. A. is B. am C. are D .has( ) 7. A. class B. Class C. Grade D. grade( ) 8. A. apples B. dancing C. blue D. chairs( ) 9. A. can B. likes C .is D. do like( ) 10. A. At B. In C. On D. Of( ) 11. A. boy B. girl C. students D. boy and girl( ) 12. A. fine B. good C. Well D. OK( ) 13. A. Miss B. Mr. C. Mrs. D. Miss( ) 14. A. the work B. work C. a work D. works( ) 15. A. Every B. Every one C. Everyone D. One三、 阅读理解We do the shopping(购物)on Sundays. I often go to the supermarket(超市)with my mother on Sunday morning in a car. Father likes red apples very much. So we buy some red apples for him. Mother likes yellow bananas. The oranges are very nice. Mother buys some for me. I like oranges v