基础写作的写作技巧(如何写出复杂性的句子).ppt

Basicwriting基础写作,Howtowriteastoryaboutaperson?,本节课重点难点重点：短句变成长句，尤其是复合句和并列句的使用。难点：五个句子之间的自然过渡和衔接词的选用是写作难点。,Makethesentencelonger.Thelonger,thebetter.Ourmathsteacherisawoman.,Ourmathsteacher,Ourmathsteacherisa_woman.,Ourmathsteacherisa_woman,who_,_,ourmathsteacherisa_woman,who_.,某中学生英语报社举办中学生“2005感动中国”观后感征文。你被2005感动中国人物洪战辉的事迹深深感动。根据下面提示写一篇征文，投给这家报社。洪战辉事迹简介：1、1982年出生于河南农村；2、1994年父亲得了精神病并在当年捡来了一个刚出生的女弃婴；3、1995年，母亲不堪重负离家出走。4.他边学习边照顾捡来的妹妹和生病的父亲，担负着常人难以想象的重担考上大学，并一直带着妹妹上大学，照看她写作要求：只能用5个句子（不包括已给出的部分）表达全部的内容。参考词汇：2005感动中国TouchChina2005,Group11.Recently,IwatchedTouchChina2005onTV.2.IwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhui.3.HewasborninHenanProvincein1982.Sentence1:_,Recently,IwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeeplymovedbythestoryofHongZhanhuiwhowasborninHenanProvincein1982.,Group21.Hewas12.2.Hisfathergotmentaldisease.3.Onedayhebroughthomeanabandonednewly-borngirl.Sentence2:_,Group31.Hismothersufferedfromtheheavyburden.2.Ayearlater,hismotherdesertedthefamily3.Hongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.Sentence3:_,Ayearlater，hismother,sufferingfromtheheavyburden,desertedthefamilyandHongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.,Group41.Honglovedschoolandstudiedhard,2.Hewasfinallyadmittedtocollege.3.Hetookhissisterwithhimandcontinuedtocareforher.Sentence4:_,Hong,wholovedschoolandstudiedhard,finallywasadmittedtocollege,buthetookhissisterwithhimandcontinuedtocareforher.,Group51.Personally,Iholdtheview.2.TherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning.3.Thequalitiesarehissenseofresponsibility,courageandalovingheart.Sentence5:_,Personally,IholdtheviewthattherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning,includinghissenseofresponsibility,courageandalovingheart.,Recently,IwatchedTouchChina2005onTVandwasdeepmovedbythestoryofHongZhanhuiwhowasborninHenanProvincein1982.Whenhewas12,hisfathergotmentaldiseaseandonedaybroughthomeaabandonednew-borngirl.Whatsworse,ayearlater，hismother,sufferingfromtheheavyburden,desertedthefamilyandHongbegantoshouldertheresponsibilityfortakingcareofhislittlesisterandsickfather.Toourdelight,Hong,wholovedschoolandstudiedhard,finallywasadmittedtocollege,buthetookhissisterwithhimandcontinuetocareforher.Personally,IholdtheviewwhichtherearemanygoodqualitiesinHongworthourlearning,hissenseofresponsibility,courageandaboveall,alovingheart.,PractiseBasicwriting基础写作实战演练,写作内容：GreatSwimmerMichaelPhelps1.迈克尔菲尔普斯是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员。1985年6月30日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。2.他7岁开始游泳,经历了许多艰苦的训练。15岁的时候，他参加了2000年奥运会，并在200米蝶泳比赛中排名第五。据报道，他是这次次奥运会中自1932年以来竞争的最年轻的男性选手。3在北京奥林匹克运动会，迈克尔菲尔普斯实现了他的8枚金牌梦，打破了7个世界纪录，创造了历史。4.你的启示。(可以用谚语)写作要求：只能用5个句子（不包括已给出的部分）表达全部的内容。参考词汇：迈克尔.菲尔普斯MichaelPhelps；马利兰州巴尔的摩市Baltimore,Maryland；非凡的extraordinary.蝶泳butterfly。,GreatswimmerMichaelPhelpsMichaelPhelpsisagreatAmericanswimmerwhowasborninBaltimore,MarylandonJune30,1985.Whenhewassevenyearsold,hestartedswimmingandexperiencedmuchtoughprofessionaltraining.Attheageof15,heattendedthe2000Olympicsandplacedfifthinthe200-meterbutterflyastheyoungestmaleathletetocompeteintheOlympicssince1932.Furthermore,attheBeijingOlympicGames,Phelpsrealizedhis8-gold-medaldreamandbravelybroke7worldrecords,creatingthehistory.Itsnowonderthatwheretheresawill,theresaway,astheoldsayinggoes.,DearMr.Helper,Imasenior3student.IamnowingreatneedofyourhelpbecauseIcanhardlystandthegreatpressure.Everydaywestayatschoolforabouttenhourstohavelessons_spendatleastthreetofourhoursdoingourhomework._,hardlycanwefindanytimetodowhatwewant._,Wesufferfromlackofsleep,which,inthelongrun,isnotgoodforourhealth.Thereasonwhywearecarryingsuchaheavyburdenisthatwe