英语书面表达之建议信.ppt

书面表达（三）-Aletterofgivingadvice,写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。,3.基本框架：开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.),4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式,常用套语,A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.6.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtoandIlltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.YouhaveaskedmeformyadviceaboutEnglishlearning.,B.表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondlythen，afterthat，intheendfinallyMeanwhile,whatsmore2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat4.IfIwereyou,Iwould5.Youmayconsiderdoing6.Iwouldseemtomethatyoucould7.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.8.Iwonderifyouhaveconsideredthefollowing.9.Whenitcometosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoucan,C.建议信结尾常用句式,1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.,写作模板,模板一：Dear_,Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout_(问题)，andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_(建议内容).Ihopeyoullfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytoDiscussthismatterwithyouaboutfurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour_(祝愿).Yourssincerely,LiMing,模板二：Dear_(对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning_(问题).Firstandforthemost_(建议一);inaddition_(建议二);whatsmore_(建议三).Ihopeyoullfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMing,书面表达如何写？,三个步骤,Step1Listthekeypoints,Step2Makesentences,Step3.Formapassageandpolish,为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearHeadmaster,Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschoolsdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.,注意衔接词使用:表先后次序：First,second,third.FinallyFirstly,secondly，eventuallytobeginwith/tostartwith,atlast递进关系：furthermore；moreover；notonly.butalso.；not.but.；,besides；inotherwords；onthe