书面表达第三讲：通过高考教你作文得高分的诀窍课件--名师微课堂.ppt

书面表达临场提分宝典第三讲通过高考看作文高分点,学习内容,增加得分的亮点高分点,2013年广东卷书面表达：Tomanypeopleeventheword“work”soundsunpleasant,notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice,mayworkhardattheweekend,paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.Whatisthereason,then?Inmostcases,itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobthey,高分点一内容扩展有度,110个词,110个词,Theyalsosufferfromlessrespectandlowerpay,workingalldayinthestreetsnomatterhowbadtheweatheris.（22个词）,Althoughcleaningstreetsisnomorethanordinarywork,itcontributesalot.（13个词）,内容衔接,1+1=2衔接法,1+1+1-3+1=内容充实,Althoughcleaningstreetsisnomorethanordinaryjob,itcontributesalot.（13个词）,110个词,Theyalsosufferfromlessrespectandlowerpay,workingalldayonthestreetnomatterhowbadtheweatheris.（22个词）,145个词,Theyalsosufferfromlessrespectandlowerpay,workingalldayonthestreetnomatterhowbadtheweatheris.（22个词）,Ononehand,Ontheotherhand,词汇衔接,（1）表示顺序/对照：firstsecondthird,firstlysecondlythirdly,firstofallthen/nextafterthatfinally,ononehandontheotherhand（2）表示转折：onthecontrary,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,Ontheotherhand,theyalsosufferfromlessrespectandlowerpay,workingalldayonthestreetnomatterhowbadtheweatheris.,Ononehand,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,（3）表示总结：,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,句子衔接,Weknowcleaners.Judgingfromtwofacts,theyaredoingthehardestwork.,Ononehand,theygetupearlyinthemorningeverydayandcleanthestreets.Althoughtheweatherisbad,theyhavetogetup.Ontheotherhand,theyalsosufferfromlessrespectandlowerpay,workingalldayinthestreetsnomatterhowbadtheweatheris.,2013年全国高考新课标卷I书面表达：假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,要点一：告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,高分点二衔接/层次三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,长短句交叉：要点一：告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,单词短语：要点一：告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,单词短语：,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,高分点三结构交叉并用法（长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）,第一段：Today,themajorityofpeopledontliketheirjobsbecausetheyconsidertheyaresmallanduseless.Onthecontrary,theyarewrong.第二段：Weknowcleaners.Judgingfromtwofacts,theyaredoingthehardestwork.Ononehand,theygetupearlyinthemorningeverydayandcleanthestreets.Althoughtheweatherisbad,theyhavetogetup.Ontheotherhand,theyalsosufferfromlessrespectandlowerpay,workingalldayinthestreetsnomatterhowbadtheweatheris.Althoughcleaningstreetsisnomorethanordinarywork,itcontributesalot.Ifcleanersdontwork,ourcitywillbedirtyverymuch.Peoplewillthrowrubbisheverywhere.Iftheydontstop,wecantfindaplacetolive.Wemaydie.Therefore,