全国卷短文改错题2010-2013.doc

2010-2013年全国卷英语短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。2010年（全国卷I）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the firstprize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to dowas to write a story or present it. My teachershave been telling me how great my writing was.So if they had said was true, I would have a chanceof winning the prize. What were better, I had usefulhelp. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman livingnear my house, who was a very much famous writer.He agreed to reading my story and give me someadvices on how to write like a real writer.2010年（全国卷II）Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together.Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to showmy best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, weve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.2011年（全国卷I）One of my unforgettable memory of my school inXinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going toschool. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunchbell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall treeand had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was usedto share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind ofcake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. NowAigulie andI study at different colleges or we can only see each otherduring the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I missthe food and the good time we had together.2011年（全国卷II）Dear George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. ,that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. Yours, Mike2012年（全国卷I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That wont easy, I know，but we have to start anywhere. Whats more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there? 2012年（全国卷II）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Sincerely, Li Hua2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 2013年新课标2The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in BritainIt is said to have started in the early 1800sHave tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at nightThis custom soon becomes another meal of dayInteresting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industryTea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handlesWhen tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habitsThis made for the grow in the porcelain industry2013年 (全国一卷）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.2013年 (全国二卷）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.2010年（全国卷I）76.去掉第二个a77. on改为in 78. or改为and79. have改为had 80. they前加what81. were为was 82. Uncle后加a83.去掉much 84. reading为read85. advices为advice2010年（全国卷II）76.friendfriends 77.spendspent 78.ThankThanks 79. to abroad改为abroad 80. a long 81.去掉off 82.himher 83.hashad 84. kept in touch 85. seeseeing2011年（全国卷I）76.把memory改为memories。77.在lunches前面加the。78.把hold改为held。79. 把Since改为When/After。80.me改为I 81. 把was去掉。82. 把specially改为special。83. 把them改为it。84. 把or改为and。85. 把over改为of。2011年（全国卷II）76. after-since 77.them-us 78. for-with 79. That改为Where 80.去掉 much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip 前 a 85.better-more2012年（全国卷I）1. efforts改为effort 2.off改为down 3.把to删掉4. wont be 5. anywhere-somewhere 6. andor 7. Other-Another 8. electricelectricity 9.and改为but 10 television后加on2012年（全国卷II）76.you后加my 77.animal-animals 78.or-nor 79.seemed-seems 80.we-they 81.a-the/this/that 82.though-because/since/as 83. left 改为be left 84.using-used 85.去掉for2013年新课标11.hold改为hold 2.passes改为passed 3.much改为well/clearly 4.shoulder改为shoulders 5.toward改为to/into 6.himself改为him 7. he was改为and he was 8.去a 9.during改为when 10.never改为ever2013年新课标2 1.去of 2.Have改为Having 3.that改为which 4.becomes改为became 5. of day改为of the day 6. Interesting 改为Interestingly 7.by改为with/to 8.drank改为drunk 9. good cup改为good cups 10. grow改为growth2013年 (全国一卷）1.visit改为visited 2.but改为and/so 3. comfortably 改为comfortable 4.were改为was 5.for改为with 6.forwith 7takingtaken take 8dishdishes 9such后加a such 10memine 2013年 (全国二卷）1.before改成 ago; 2. for去掉； 3.Unfortunate改为Unfortunately 4. week 改为weeks； 5.so改为but；6.will改为would；7.myself改为me 8.farther改为far; 9.interested改为interesting; 10.truth前面加the2010-2013年全国卷英语短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。2010年（全国卷I）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the firstprize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to dowas to write a story or present it. My teachershave been telling me how great my writing was.So if they had said was true, I would have a chanceof winning the prize. What were better, I had usefulhelp. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman livingnear my house, who was a very much famous writer.He agreed to reading my story and give me someadvices on how to write like a real writer.2010年（全国卷II）Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together.Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to showmy best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, weve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.2011年（全国卷I）One of my unforgettable memory of my school inXinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going toschool. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunchbell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall treeand had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was usedto share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind ofcake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. NowAigulie andI study at different colleges or we can only see each otherduring the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I missthe food and the good time we had together.2011年（全国卷II）Dear George,Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C. ,that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. Yours, Mike2012年（全国卷I）Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That wont easy, I know，but we have to start anywhere. Whats more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there? 2012年（全国卷II）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.Sincerely, Li Hua2013年新课标1I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 2013年新课标2The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in BritainIt is said to have started in the early 1800sHave tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at nightThis custom soon becomes another meal of dayInteresting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industryTea in China was tradi