高考英语第一轮复习 写作专题讲座 第八讲 高级词汇与高级句式课件 新人教版必修1.ppt

一 使用高级词汇写作时 高级词汇 如能运用贴切自然 哪怕整篇文章只用上一两个 也会为你的作文增添色彩 1 标新立异写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩 别人有可能想不到的词汇 恰当地求新求异 weallhavethesamechance weallpossessthesamechance opportunity wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend wehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend 2 短语优先多使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 以增加文采 icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous icannolongerputupwiththewayhespeakstous theboyrealizedthedangerandbegantorunaway theboywasawareofthedangerandbegantorunaway 3 避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词 必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替 ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches 二 使用高级句式 让句子靓起来1 恰当使用被动语态aboveall wemustdosomethingtostoppollution aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution 2 使用强调句theaccidenthappenedtheotherday theaccidentdidhappentheotherday hedidn tcometothepartybecausehewasverybusy itwasbecausehewasverybusythathedidn tcometotheparty 3 使用倒装句wecanonlyimproveourenglishinthisway onlyinthiswaycanweimproveourenglish wedon tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 4 使用省略句althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart althoughfacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart 5 使用感叹句wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday 6 使用with复合结构becausetherewastoomuchnoise icouldn tgoonstudying withthenoisegoingon icouldn tgoonstudying 7 使用虚拟语气ididn ttakehisadvice soifailedintheexam ifihadtakenhisadvice iwouldn thavefailedintheexam it stimeforustotakemeasurestoprotectthewildanimals it shightimethatwetookmeasurestoprotectthewildanimals 答案 havenoidea 答案 madeupmymind 答案 lies 用较高级句式转换下列句子1 irealizedtheimportanceofenglishwhenienteredseniorhighschool 强调句 答案 itwaswhenienteredseniorhighschoolthatirealizedtheimportanceofenglish 2 wecanliveahappylifeonlybythismeans 倒装 答案 onlybythismeanscanweliveahappylife 3 hefellasleep thelightswerestillon with复合结构 答案 hefellasleepwiththelightsstillon 4 ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 省略句 答案 ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 5 theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students 被动语态 答案 asurveywascarriedoutamong260students 6 weloveourmotherlandverymuch 感叹句 答案 howmuchweloveourmotherland 7 becauseiwasillthatday ididn ttakepartinthesportsmeeting 虚拟语气 答案 iwasillthatday otherwise iwouldhavetakenpartinthesportsmeeting 8 theydidn trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout 倒装句或强调句 答案 notuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutdidtheyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting 或 itwasnotuntilallthefishintheriverdiedoutthattheyrealizedtheimportanceofenvironmentprotecting 翻译句子1 2012 福建书面表达 只有通过这种方式 我们才能生活在更加美丽舒适的环境中 倒装句 2 2012 福建书面表达 公园里空气清新 喷泉美丽 阳光灿烂并且伴有鸟儿在歌唱 with复合结构 onlyinthiswaycanweliveinmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundings theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring withthesunshiningandbirdssinging 3 2012 江苏书面表达 在昨天下午的篮球比赛中 苏华和李江在抢球时撞在了一起 分词作伴随状语 4 2012 陕西书面表达 经验告诉我 不是你得到的东西而是你如何利用它决定了你是怎样的一个人 被动语态 强调句 duringthebasketballgameyesterdayafternoon suhuaandlijiangbumpedintoeachother tryingtocatchtheball myexperiencetellsmethatitisnotwhatyouaregivenbuthowyoumakeuseofitthatdetermineswhoyouare 5 他说英语说得如此清晰 以至于大家都能听得懂 倒装句 6 是我们做出决定的时候了 虚拟语气 soclearlydoeshespeakenglishthathecanalwaysmakehimselfunderstoodbyeveryone itishightimethatwemadeadecision 7 由于开车太快 他在事故中受了伤 强调句 8 如果人们被说服了吃更多的水果和蔬菜 那么死于心脏病的人数将