湖北省兴山县高考英语一轮复习 短文改错训练题.doc

湖北兴山县2017高考英语一轮短文改错训练题短文改错。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。mr. and mrs. white were worried. that was already december, but they didnt have heat in their flat. every time they called the manager of the building, mr.grant, he has promised to turn on the heat. but he never was. last monday mrs. white went to mr. grants office during her lunch break. she told him it was cold in the flat that her two child were getting sick. she told him they always paid for their rent in time and that it was his job to fix the heat in their flat before it got cold. mr. grant listened polite to the lady. he told her he had a lot of problems in the building and he couldnt do everything himself, so he let her patient. on this, mrs. white left his office angrily and took the taxi to the town right to the mayors office. later that same day, there was heat！【参考答案】3.1. that - itl has promised - promisedl was - didl cold - so coldl child - childrenl pay for - payl polite - politelyl patient - be patientl at - onl the taxi - a taxi (2015陕西省质检二) dear sir/madam， someschools require that students have their hair cut shortly. personally, i dont think that this regulation was reasonable. the school says that the uniform hairstyle can save time for students to concentrate in studying. in fact, a simple pigtail wont take a long time to do it. secondly, school students wear their hair properly long will not only protect the head from severely cold or severe heat butwill also make the wearer look nicer. whats more, some students think the hairstyle is the personal matter. ifthe school insists making students obey the rules, it will only make thestudents more distant from his teachers.i believe students should have the freedom of choose their own hairstyle.yours，li ming 参考答案：dear sir/madam，someschools require that students have their hair cut . personally, i dont think that this regulation reasonable. the school says that the uniform hairstyle can save time for students to concentrate studying. in fact, a simple pigtail wont take a long time to do it. secondly, school students their hair properly long will not only protect the head from cold or severe heat butwill also make the wearer look nicer. whats more, some students think the hairstyle is personal matter. ifthe school insists making students obey the rules, it will only make thestudents more distant from teachers.i believe students should have the freedom of their own hairstyle.yours，li ming 文章大意：本文是一篇应用文。在这封信中，作者关于学生的发型问题，阐明了自己的观点。1命题立意：考查形容词辨析。 解析：shortlyshort句意：有些学校要求学生把头发剪短。根据语意，答案用形容词short作宾语补足语。2命题立意：考查be动词辨析。 解析：wasis陈述自己观点，可用一般现在时。3命题立意：考查介词辨析。 解析：inonconcentrate on 集中在上。根据语意介词in应改为on。4.命题立意：考查语法辨析。解析：删除it句意：事实上，简单的辫子梳起来不会花费很长时间。it在这里多余。5命题立意：考查动词形式辨析。解析：wearwearing现在分词短语作定语，wear应改为wearing。6命题立意：考查形容词辨析。解析：severelyseverecold是名词，用形容词severe修饰。7命题立意：考查冠词辨析。解析：theathe表示特指，a表示泛指。8命题立意：考查动词短语辨析。解析：在insists 后面加上oninsist on坚持。9命题立意：考查代词辨析。解析：histheir这里teachers是学生们的老师，his改为their。10命题立意：考查非谓语动词。解析：choosechoosing介词of后接ving形式。【参考答案】women，present and ancient， at the home and 1_abroad,wear long hair,that adds to their beautybut few 2_people realize it affects her brainshair grows constantly 3_it takes in nourishment(营养) constantlyif it was short 4_of nourishment,itll die and falls offbody supplies hair with 5_nourishment,it cant be stopped even in a minutesif it takes in 6_too many,that means hair has already used too much 7_nourishment which body gives it to the headas time passes， 8_brain is relatively short of nourishmentit leads dizziness 9_(头昏)therefore ones brains will be weakened 10_【参考答案】key 101去掉the 2that which 3her their 4was is 5fallsfall 6minutesminute7manymuch 8去掉it 9 lead后加to 102015届广西桂林中学高三8月月考短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）one day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. however, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “sorry, sir. but a horse didnt eat fish!” the waiter answered. “never mind, just do as i tell you,” my uncle said. the crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. to see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself. 【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文【文章综述】讲述一个人骑马到了一个餐馆，又冷又湿，想一个办法让自己取暖的故事。【答案解析】76. rain前加the 考查形容词。in the rain在雨中；77.coldly cold 考查形容词。句意：又冷又湿，他非常想温暖一下自己。cold形容词做伴随状语。78.去掉and 考查句子结构。and应该连接两个句子，但wet and cold只是伴随状语，故去年掉and.79. too so 考查固定结构。句意：然而这个餐馆如何拥挤以至于不能靠近火源。so that 如此以至于。80. taking take 考查祈使句。句意：给我的马一些鱼。81. didnt doesnt 考查动词的时态。句意：对不起，先生，马不会吃鱼。表示客观事实，故用一般现在时。82. surprising surprised考查形容词。句意：许多人对这个奇怪的菜单感到很吃惊。修饰人用surprised。83. whom them 考查代词。句意：为了看看马吃鱼，所有的人都跑出去了。them代指的是人们。84. besides beside 考查介词。句意：屋子里只剩下他自己，坐在火堆旁边开始暖和。85.warm前加to或warm warming考查动词的用法。begin to do 或begin doing 开始做某事。2012年浙江高考真题：two years before, i traveled to brazil and 1 rented for a car. unfortunate, 1 had an accident and hit another car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. i called my parents, so 1 did not tell them what had happened. i knew that they will be worried about myself because i was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore, i told them interested stories and how 1 was enjoying brazil. as a result, nobody knew truth. i still think that it was the right thing to do.【2012年参考答案】：two years before, i traveled to brazil and 1 rented for a car. unfortunate, 1 had an accident and hit ago for去掉 unfortunatelyanother car, and i needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. i called my parents, so 1 did not tell weeks butthem what had happened. i knew that they will be worried about myself because i was so farther away, and would me farthat my mother would not sleep if she knew. therefore, i told them interested stories and how 1 was interestingenjoying brazil. as a result, nobody knew truth. i still think that it was the right thing to do. 加the 阅读理解。阅读下列短文, 从给的四个选项 (a、b、c和d) 中, 选出最佳选项。according to historical documents, the forefathers of the naxi people were closely related to a tribe called “maoniu yi” in the han dynasty，“maoniu yi” in the jin dynasty and “moxie yi” in the tang dynasty.between the early 10th century and the middle of the 13th century, production in the lijiang area experienced marked changes, as agriculture replaced livestock (家畜)breeding as the main occupation of the people. scores of agricultural, handicraft, mineral and livestock products were turned out, and the country presented a picture of prosperity. during that period, a number of slaveowning groups in ninglang，lijiang and weixi counties gradually grew into a feudal manorial lord caste(世袭封建庄园领主制)in 1278 the yuan dynasty established lijiang prefecture(自治州)representing the imperial court in yunnan province. this resulted in closer links between the lijiang area and the centre of the empire.in the early ming dynasty, the leader of the naxi people，named mude, was made chief of lijiang prefecture, exercising control over the naxi and other ethnic groups nearby. throughout the ming dynasty, the chiefs from the mu family kept taxes and tribute(贡品)flowing to the ming court in the form of silver and grain. the ming, in turn, relied on the mu family as the mainstay for the control of the people of various ethnic groups in northwestern yunnan province.later, with the development of the productive forces, buying, selling and renting of land began to take place in the naxi areas，marking the beginning of a landlord economy.1in the 12th century, the main occupation probably be _.alivestock breedingbagriculturecfishingdforestry答案：b从文章第二段第一句可知，10世纪早期至13世纪中期丽江经济经历了重大变化，也就是“agriculture replaced livestock breeding”。2lijiang prefecture was set up in _.a. the tang dynasty b. the song dynastyc. the yuan dynasty d. the ming dynasty答案：c细节题。从第三段第一句可知答案。3during the ming dynasty, the mu family kept taxes and tribute flowing to the ming court in the form of _.a. gold and silver b. livestock and goldc. gold and silver d. silver and grain答案：d从文章第四段可知，the mu family向明朝政府进贡物品是“silver and grain”。4what marked the beginning of the landlord economy?a. a feudal manorial lord caste.b. the appearance of buying, selling and renting of land.c. the rule of mu family in lijiang.d. the establishment of lijiang prefecture.答案：b从文章最后一段可知，the landlord economy的开始是以“buying, selling and renting of land began to take place”为标志的。5what is the best title of the passage?a. the mu familyb. the history of lijiang prefecturec. the history of the naxi ethnic groupd. the rulers of naxi答案：c通读全文可知，文章主要讲了纳西族的历史。【由内蒙古包头市201模拟改编】 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项(a,b,c和d)中，选出最佳选项。 as i grew older, my dad and 1 grew further apart. we always had totally different opinions. he thought that college was a waste of time, but for me it was important to finish college. he wanted me to work my way to the top as he had done in his field，but i wanted a different life. there was a time when we did not talk with each other. a few months ago, i heard that my 84-year-old dad was in poor health. when he called and asked whether i could move from colorado bank to tennessee to help him,i knew he was seriously ill. i am his only child and so it was time to meet my fathers requirement.two weeks after moving back，we bought a boat and started fishing again. fishing was one of the few things that we did while 1 was young and that we both enjoyed. it is strange but true that as we are fishing we are able to put things that have kept us apart for so many years behind us. we are able to talk about things that we have never talked about before. fishing has heen healing the old wounds that have kept us apart.it is not important how many fish we catch. it is about enjoying the relationship that we have not had for years. i m