作文技巧及范文.docx

初中作文技巧：1. 只要不出错误就不会扣分太多，不需要太多文采2. 用简单、正确的句型表达3. 如何保证正确？答：用曾经背过、见过的句型。不要用汉语句式来写4. 不会写的可以不写，或者换句话、换个词来写。5. 会写的，可以适当多补充、发挥6 练习写作时，可以查个别词，但是不要整句用翻译软件来做，因为翻译软件还极不成熟，翻译出来的句子结构几乎没有对的，生僻词也是大家很难记住的7. 写作文应该选好写的题材，而不需完全真实8. 写作前，先确定时态，保证大方向不出错9. 写作要有头有尾：先有铺垫，最后有总结，这样结构才比较完整10. 注意时态、单复数等细节作文（一）Dear Mr. Dean, Now, many students like to talk with their friends by QQ. Is that good or bad for students? Different people have different ideas. So we did a survey on the problem last week. Here are the results：Some students think that its good to chat by QQ. Because chatting by QQ is relaxing. They can talk about any topic they like. And its convenient to talk online. Whats more, Chatting by QQ can help them make more friends.Other students have different ideas. They think what people talk by QQ is really boring. And they believe its a waste of time to chat online, because you have to spend more time typing than talking face to face. Whats worse, some students even copy homework by QQ. Thats terrible! Students should do their homework by themselves.In my opinion, students can use QQ to chat, because its kind of interesting, but they shouldnt use it too long. Anyway, time is valuable, so we shouldnt waste our time. Thats all for my opinion. Whats your opinion, Mr. Dean? / What do you think, Mr. Dean? Yours, Maggie作文（二）My DreamAs teenagers, we all have dreams. Some students dream to be teachers, some dream to be doctors and some even dream to fly. Do you know what my dream is? Let me tell you. I want to be a policeman when I grow up. Because policemen are cool! Thieves are afraid of them. So its policemen that make our society safe. (强调句)How am I going to do that? Well, firstly, I must behave myself, because a man with bad records can never become a policeman. I will never cheat or fight. Secondly, I must study hard, so that I can go to a policemen college and study how to become a good policeman. Thirdly, I must pay attention to my PE marks, because I need to be very strong if I want to be a policeman. Now, I am not strong enough, so I must do exercises every day.Every one may have different dreams, but any dream requires us to work hard. Do you agree with me？/ Do you think so?作文（三）Good Ways to Keep HealthyEveryone wants to be healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy? Here are three ways that may help.Firstly, food is important to our health（health是名词，healthy是形容词）. Now we can almost buy any food we like. But its important to eat a balanced diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Why dont you eat apples every day? And we shouldnt eat too much meat, because too much meat is not good for our health.Secondly, we should do more exercise. There are many sports that we can do: basketball, football, tennis If you cant play ball games, you can just take a walk. It can also make you healthy and energetic.Thirdly, you should keep happy if you want to stay healthy. Your mood(心情) is important to your health. If you are happy, you can live a longer life. But if you are unhappy every day, you cant keep in good health. So I advise you to make more friends and talk with your friends. Smile at the people around you, and they will smile at you!We have a saying in English, “Early to bed, early to rise, makes you healthy, wealthy and wise.” So we should live a regular life. Only in this way, can we keep in good health.（强调句，倒装）作文（四）A Talk with Him/ HerI used to fight with my classmates, so they didnt like me, but a recent conversation with Mr. Wang changed my life. Mr. Wang is my head teacher. He is not tall or strong, but he is a good Chinese teacher, so we all like him. After I fought with Tom last week, Mr. Wang asked me to go to his office. I felt nervous at that time. However, he didnt criticize（批评） me. Instead, he showed me a photo of my mother. He told me that, since(因为) my father had always worked in Beijing, my mother herself had to work hard to send me to school. So she didnt have much time to spend with me. But she really loved me very much. When I was ill, she felt very worried. When I was happy, she was happy, too. So I shouldnt make her worried about me anymore.I felt really moved（感动的) / shocked（震惊的）. Although mom was always good to me, I had never thought that she had given me so much. At that moment, I decided that I would never fight with anyone. In the future, I must study hard and try my best to make my mother happy. 作文（五）Dear students,I am Daming, the chairman of the Student Union. Today Id like to talk about the problem of school safety with you. Nowadays, all the schools across the country are trying their best to make students safe. So what should we do? And what shouldnt we do? Here are my suggestions.Firstly, we shouldnt bring any knife to school for any reason. Anyway, knives are dangerous. You may be kidding, but it might cause danger. Secondly, we shouldnt swim in the rivers when our parents are away. You may be good at swimming, but drowning (溺水) might happen by accident. So we must be careful. Thirdly, we shouldnt fight with anyone. If we have any conflicts(冲突) with others, we should learn to stand (忍受) them a little longer. And we can ask our parents or teachers for help. Fourthly, when we are on the way to school, we should obey the traffic rule