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写作提升1句子间、段落间的衔接、过渡与写作训练(1)一、句子间的连接词连接词可以使句子之间的联系更加紧密，更具有逻辑性。1表示先后顺序：first(ly)，then/next，after that，to begin with等2表示递进：in addition，whats more，to make matters worse，moreover，further more等。There is no denying that telecommuting is a wonderful source. First，we can purchase our favorite goods via telecommuting. Moreover，companies can make business transitions. Furthermore，it is a perfect way to cut down costs，for both individuals and companies. Whats more，it can decrease the flow of currency.3表示并列：and，or，as well as，neither.nor.等。Either you are mad，or I am.4表示解释说明：in fact，in other words/that is to say等。The student got only fifty marks. That is to say/In other words，he didnt pass the exam.5表示转折：but，or，otherwise，on the contrary，instead等。The woman didnt keep the money. Instead，she donated it to the charity.6表示原因：because，as，since，thanks to，as a result of等。Thanks to your help，we could complete the project in time.7表示结果：as a result，so.that.，such.that.等。Bob risked his life to save a girl. As a result，he was given an excellent job.在下面空格中填入正确的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密1 On the one hand，I am your manager，andon the other hand，I am also your friend.2John teaches wonderfully. besides，he writes a lot.3English is a useful language. For one thing，it is an official language in the UN. For another thing，it is widely used in business，science and technology.4Japan is not a big country. On the contrary，it is very small.5Some people are overambitious. Therefore，they are usually unhappy.6 To begin with，I need your name and address. Then，whens your birthday?7The young man didnt enjoy his previous job. On the contrary, he finds the new job very interesting.8That document was very important. However，she lost it.9Your suggestion is thoughtful. Moreover, it is practical. In a word，it is a good suggestion.10Red is attractive.Many fast food restaurants， therefore，have red furniture or walls.根据汉语意思补全下列句子，要注意连接词的正确使用。1他先去了法国，然后又去了美国。First，he went to France . then, he went to America.2一开始他反对我的计划，但最后他支持了。At first，he was against my plan， but in the end , he was for it.3汤姆把车钥匙忘在家里了。更糟糕的是，他把钱包丢了。Tom left the key to his car at home. To make matters worse, he had lost his wallet.4我不喜欢那幅画，也不关心谁买了它。Neither do I like the painting， nor do I care who bought it .5那个学生没通过面试。换言之，他没有得到那份工作。The student didnt pass the interview. In other words , he didnt get the