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湖南衡阳县2016高考英语短文改错二轮基础选练（7）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear ms tailor,football is my favourite sport. when it is comes to football, i always have much to saying. last week, i quarreled with my mother about if i could play football with my classmates at weekends. my mother holds the view strong that i should devote all my spare time to study all the subjects well. in my opinion, only when i try my best to study i be able to be admitted to a university. but i really cant accept her view. as far as im concerned, playing football not only build up my strength and also makes me full of energy every day. could you give me some advices on how to persuade my mother to allow me to play football at weekends?yours jim 【参考答案】4.1. 去掉 is 2. saying-say 3. if-whether 4. strong-strongly 5. study-studying 6. my-her 7. i前加will 8. build-builds 9. and-but 10. advices-advice短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上勾一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词；并也用斜线划摔。 此行缺一个词j在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的诃。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。mr hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens76 he sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, so he lived in a very77 hot part of the country. he found his hen laid hardly any eggs78 in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner into79 his chicken house so that his hens would lay well all through year80 the boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day81 he thought that he might be able to persuade him to buy for an air82 conditioner when he sawmr hills house, your wife would be more happier83 and more comfortable then ,” he said to mr-hill. but mr hill was not interesting.84 “my wife didnt lay eggs,” mr hill said 85. 【参考答案】5.76. where who 77.so but 78.hen hens 79. 80.在year前加the81.her him 82.去掉for 83.more much 或去掉more 84. interesting interested85. didnt doesnt文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。last weekend, i helped my grandparents their trip to dalian. on saturday morning, together with my grandparents, i search the internet for the train schedule, the weather in dalian, and some hotel informations. in the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. after the dinner, i packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. the next morning, i went to the station to show them off. waving goodbye to them on the platform, i felt happily for them and wished them safe journey.【参考答案】6.1在their 后加with， 因为help sb. with sth.为固定用法。2search改为过去式，由时间状语“last weekend”可知，这是描述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。3information为不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式。4we改为 i，“我”去买票，应用代词i。5had改为was,这里表示的是存在，所以用there be 句型。6在the suitcase前加into.7引导一个定语从句，代替指物的先行词things，所以用that/which。8show改为see, see sb. off意为“为某人送行”，符合语境。9happily改为happy , feel为系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语。10在safe journey前加a,具体的一次旅行。短文改错：请找出下列短文中的错误，并直接在短文中改正。改错格式（要求）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。when left college, daisy got a good work in a company. but after she had been worked there for some years, she decided to change. so she put notice in several newspapers and said what experience she had and the kind of job she would like to have. one of the answer she accepted was from a man was looking for a job, too. this man wrote to her,“ madam, when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as i have been trying to find a position as yours for a long time.” after she read the letter, she suddenly realized that which she had done was real foolish.【参考答案】4.1. left改为leaving 2. had been worked 中去掉been 3. put notice改为put a notice4. answer改为answers 5. accepted改为received 6. man后加who 7. give your的your改为my 8. as yours中的as改为like 9. which改为what 10. real改为really5.短文改错该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。 this morning i was walking along the street to a bookstore while i found heavy smoke pouring out of a building. obvious it was on fire, so i called 119. several minutes late, the firefighters arrived and tried to control the fire. with their help, many people managed escape from the building. suddenly a foreign woman came shouted. however, she couldnt make herself understand. i came up to ask what is wrong, she said her daughter was still trapped in the fire. i told the firefighters about them immediately. they ran into the building and rushed out of with a little girl after a while. the woman was very grateful with me and the firefighters for the help.【参考答案】5.1.whilewhen 2.obviousobviously3.latelater 4.managed后加to5.shoutedshouting 6.understandunderstood 7.is was 8.themit 9.rushed out of中of 去掉 10.withto6.短文改错文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。grandma moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it. she painted careful and her works were nice. she first painted only to please her, and then began to sell her works with a little money. in 1993, a collector, louis caldor happen to see several of grandma moses works hung on the walls of a shop. he liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less. caldor held a show to introduce works of grandma moses to other artists. grandma moses, who was world-famous, was died on december 13, 1961, at the age of 101. 【参考答案】6.line 1: beforeafter; line 2: carefulcarefully, herherself, line 3: withfor; happenhappened, line 4: hunghanging; buyingboughtline 5: lessmore; worksthe wroksline 6: was died去掉was1.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。today i was having a pe lessons when i fell down and hurt my foot. i was in greatly pain atthat moment,but i tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. though i had difficulty walk back to my classroom, i still didnt tell anyone but even refusedthe offer of helpof my classmates. as result, the hurt in my foot became bad. now i know im wrong. we can tell others our need