湖南省长沙县实验中学高三英语二轮复习 书面表达复习重点话题指导专题14 社会交际类话题指导（教师版）.doc

湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习 书面表达复习重点话题指导专题14 社会交际类话题指导实例指导1-身势语【写作任务】 身势语在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用，请根据下列提示写一篇书面表达： 什么是身势语(body language) 身势语的作用 举例说明在讲英语和讲汉语国家有相同含义的身势语。如：挥手表示再见、微笑和握手表示欢迎。 对于不同的国家来说，身势语也不同。例如，在俄罗斯、法国、阿拉伯国家里，男人们见面时彼此亲吻。然而，在中国或澳大利亚男人见面从不亲吻而是握手。 学一门外语时，了解这个国家的身势语很重要。 根据提示可以适当发挥。词数：120左右。【参考范文】 body language is used by people for sending messages to one another. it is very useful because it can help you make yourself easily understood. when talking with others, you are not just using words, but also using expressions and gestures. for example, waving ones hand is to say good-bye. a smile and handshake show welcome. and they are accepted both by chinese and foreigners with the same meanings. however, different countries have different body languages. for example, men in russia, france and arab countries kiss each other when they meet, but men in china or australia shake hands instead of kissing. when you use a foreigin language, it is very important to know the meanings of gestures of the country. and it will make your stay there much more pleasant and comfortable.实例指导2being a good listener【写作任务】 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“being a good listener”的英文演讲稿。词数150左右。为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）good afternoon, everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good listener”._【写作指导】文体分析本文是演讲稿。主题是如何成为一名好的倾听者。要求根据表格内列出的要点提示进行说明，并发表自己的看法，属于半命题、半开放性作文。此范文要点齐全，论述严密，一环扣一环，同时较多地使用了祈使句，整体上给人一种灼灼逼人的气势。文章使用了第一人称，所用时态主要是一般现在时。行文模式本文采用了“三段式”的结构。【范文参考】good afternoon, everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good listener”.good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.what i want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. in a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. thank you for your listening!佳句共赏1. many people suggest that and find it easy to narrow the generation gap.2. what i want to stress is that 3. show show be open-minded to .实例指导3how to communicate作任务:为了促进在校中美学生的交流, 友谊国际学校决定组织一次主题为how to communicate的英语座谈会。假设你是参加座谈的学生代表之一,打算在会上就body language在交流中的作用及重要性谈谈你的看法,现请你拟一份简短的发言稿,词数150左右。初稿:body language is very important in communicating. i think people all use body language when they communicate with someone. there are many kinds of body languages and people from different places may have different body languages. if you want to communicate well, you need to understand the meaning of the body language. most of the people use hands, eyes, and emotions to help them express themselves. pay attention to them when you are communicating. you will learn more about the people. at the same time, other people are also reading your body language. so if you dont use body language correctly, you may give a wrong message to the person. you may create misunderstanding and make the communication difficult to carry on.的观点或者写一个简短的结论来结束全文。最后一个需要注意的细节是开头。由于本文是为座谈会上的发言准备的,礼貌地打招呼是演讲基本的礼仪。成稿:im honored to have this chance to give a short speech here. body language is an important part of communication which, according to a study, constitutes around 55% of what we are communicating. it is a language without being spoken, which is used especially to help us express feelings. knowing how to use body language would help you communicate effectively. you can learn more information by interpreting a persons body language. when learning to understand body language of others, we can learn to use our body language. using right body language can help you to express yourself clearly and quickly. it is important to note that body language has different meanings in different cultures. if we do not take this into account and use wrong body language, we may create misunderstanding and get ourselves into trouble.if you wish to communicate well, use your body to say what you mean and pay attention to others body language.实例指导4getting along with others 写作任务:在日常生活中,我们每天都要与人打交道,而说到与人打交道,我们更多想到的是如何处理好与同学、老师以及朋友的关系,而往往忽略了与我们每天都要面对的、最亲近的父母之间的关系。不少同学以代沟为借口,拒绝与父母交流沟通。你怎样看待这个现象？说说你的看法以及你与父母融洽相处的小秘诀。【写作指导】1. 写作任务要求大家根据某一话题发表自己的看法,根据所给题目,我们可以提炼的信息是,该习作要求对一种社会现象进行分析,然后给出自己的见解。写作任务部分已经对这种现象进行了描述,因而写作重点是你对该现象的看法。我们可以从自己的日常生活中总结经验,提出自己的观点:多和父母交流才能促进理解,进而融洽相处。2. 确立写作重点之后,就要考虑文章的结构。该习作可以分三部分来完成:首先,简要描述当前同学们在与父母相处过程中遇到的问题；其次,就这些问题阐明你的观点,论述时要注意条理性和逻辑性；最后,再次强调一下文章的主题思想,突出中心。3. 注意语言的流畅性和上下文之间的连贯性。初稿: how to get along with your parentsnowadays, many teenagers are having problems getting along with parents. some quarrel with their parents from time to time. some even have negative attitude to-wards their parents. nobody wants to have problems with his or her parents.first, i think because of the age gap different generations may have different points of view. and we should try to talk with parents more. second, i think we kids should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble, because they are more experienced and they may help us out. third, we kids should think more about our parents lives. our parents have much pressure on them from society and theyre very busy. sometimes they may scold us and may not have the patience to listen to us, but we all know our parents love us. finally, i want to emphasize that communication is the best solution for getting along with others, including the most intimate people -our parents.后展开论述,第一点最好跟后面两点保持一致。(3)文中有些句子显得很突兀,如第一段中最后一句nobody wants to have problems with his or her parents以及第二段中最后一句sometimes they may scold us and may not have the patience to listen to us, but we all know our parents love us.建议将这些句子去掉或是整合到其他部分。(4)此外,文中有些地方用词不是很恰当,如最后一句中,best solution for建议改成best way of。成稿:how to get along with your parentsnowadays, many teenagers find it hard to get along with their parents. in daily life, they may quarrel with their parents and even have a negative attitude towards their parents opinions. so, how can we teenagers get along well with our parents? first, i think we should spend more time with our parents and communicate with them. different generations may have different views towards one thing, but we should not use that as an excuse to refuse to talk with our parents. second, we should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble because they are more experienced and may help us solve our problems quickly. third, we must understand our parents better. they have a lot of pressure in their work, but they still have to spend time taking care of us. the most important thing for us to remember is that our parents love us deeply, so it should not be so difficult for us to understand and communicate with each other. powerful sentences:1. nowadays, many teenagers find it hard to get along with their parents. 2. i think we should spend more time with our parents and communicate with them.3. we should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble because they are more experienced and may help us solve our problems quickly. 实例指导5how to make friends 写作要求假设你叫王华，你的笔友李君来信询问关于如何交友的问题。请根据下面的汉语提示，结合自身实际，给他写一封回信。内容包括：1. 交友的重要性；2. 如何交友：至少提三条建议；3. 患难朋友才是真朋友。词数要求：120-150。文章中可能用到的其他词汇和短语有：discuss with ,in my opinion the most , besides , whats more , on the other hand , firstly ,secondly .last , in return , think of , agree with2. 构句：1) im writing to discuss with you about how to make good friends. 在这个句子用到了不定式作目的状语。2) as you know , everybody needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. 首先本句用到了as 引导的非限制性定语从句，另外本句how不定式结构作句子的主语。3) in my opinion, to make friends, the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others. 这个句子有连个地方运用的比较好，一个是不定式作目的状语，另一个是出现了表语从句的用法。 4) whats more, you should think more of others than of yourself. 本句子联合使用think of 和more than 这两个短语。 5) on the other hand, if you dont agree with others on a certain matter, dont argue but discuss with him. 首先本句是一个不错的复合句，if 引导的条件句，同时也出现了not but 句式结构。dear li jun ,glad to hear from you . now im writing to discuss with you about how to make good friends.as you know , everybody needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. in my opinion, to make friends, the most important thing is that you must be friendly to others. smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. besides, never judge a person only by his appearance. whats more, you should think more of others than of yourself. on the other hand, if you dont agree with others on a certain matter, dont argue but discuss with him. always remember, a true friend is the one that is coming in the door while everyone else is going out, as the saying goes, “a friend in need is a friend indeed”. yours faithfully wang hua参考答案：仿照范文中的句子，将下列汉语译成英文。1.to sleep late in the morning, bob turned off the alarm. 2. as is known to all, the earth moves around the sun. 3. how to get through the valley is still a difficult problem. 4 .the trouble is that i have lost his address.5. she speaks more english than i do. 6. if he has found it, he will send it. 7. all flights have been put off because of the snowstorm , so many passengers could do nothing but take the train. 实战演练每个人都有自己的朋友,有时候朋友在遇到困难时可能会向我们求助,如果能办到,我们当然应该尽最大努力去帮忙,但如果朋友提出的某些要求不是我们力所能及的,这时我们就要学会说不。不少人往往不知道该如何开口拒绝,尽管明知道有些事情自己做不到,却害怕伤了朋友之间的感情。那么,究竟该如何开口拒绝,才不会伤害对方呢？请就此以如何正确说不为题来谈谈你的看法。词数120-150。how to say no properlya friend in need is a friend indeed. when our friends get into trouble, we should try to help them out if we can manage to do so. however, if its something beyond our capability, what should we do? how can we say no in a soft and proper way? first, we should explain to them clearly why we have to turn their requests down and at the same time apologize for being unable to help. second, try to avoid using ambiguous words that may cause misunderstanding. wed better make it clear whether we can help or not. and one thing is very important: we should express ourselves in a polite and sincere way and make our friends understand that we have tried our best.如今世界粮食短缺，价格飞涨，给部分地区造成社会动荡。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。_as you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. but who is responsible for the current world food crisis? first, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization. then what should we do to deal with the problem? on one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. on the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. as for me, i will call on the people around me to live thriftily. and for the moment, i think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.近几年，很多广告都请明星代言，同时“明星代言”也出现了一些负面影响。 请参考所给要点，写一篇有关明星代言的英语短文。要点：1、明星代言现象很普遍。 2、明星代言广告存在一些问题。 3、你的看法。注意：1、词数：100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计入总词数）。 2、参考词汇：名人，明星 celebrity 假冒伪劣产品 fake commodities 有系统地调节、管制 regulate v现在，照顾老年人成了一个突出的社会问题。你公司顺应社会需求，适时推出了家用机器人。该机器人的主要功能有：1在固定的时间做饭，时间可按需调整；2陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动等；3及时处理突发事件。如老人病时，拨呼救电话等。 请根据以上内容写一个发言稿，在新闻发布会上向大家推荐公司的这一新产品。注意：1词数为100左右；2内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：突出的，显著的 prominentladies and gentlemen, thank you for attending our companys news conference. as you know, _范文：ladies_and_gentlemen,_thank_you_for_attending_our_companys_news_conference._as_you_know,_with the development of economy, people have to face various pressures. they dont have enough time to attend to the old people in their family, which has become a prominent social problem. to solve this problem, our company put out the household robot, which is designed to take care of old people. it can cook meals at a fixed time, which can be adjusted according to individual needs. it can also accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise. moreover, it can deal with emergencies. for example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help. it would be a great help for you if you own such a robot. thank you.高一（4）班学生就学校研究型课程的要求对全校学生进行了一次关于钱是否能带来幸福进行了调查，请根据下列材料写一篇报告，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的意见。recently i have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. _【参考范文】recently i have made an investigation on whether money is the source of happiness. the students have different opinions.some students think that money is the source of happiness. money is important and we can use money to solve any problem. without it, we can do nothing. besides, it enables us to live a comfortable life.others, however, are against it. in their opinion, money doesnt mean everything. we can buy happiness with money. if someone focuses too much attention on making money, in time he will lose his healthy, friendship and even love.to be honest, i think we should not regard money as everything. money is just a tool that can help us solve problems. what we should do is to use it properly. in this way, all of us can lead a happier life.假设你是某报社记者，请根据下表提供的信息写一篇英文稿，简要地报道中国开发中西部的有关情况。主要概括和实施要点范围：9个省、自治区（autonomous regions）、1个直辖市（municipality）面积：540万平方公里人口：2.85亿交通建设：修建多条公路、铁路环境保护：退耕还林；防治污染资源利用：开发利用其丰富的天然资源人才引进：广纳各类专家、技术人员【写作要求】标题：new development for central and western china必须使用5个句子介绍所给的内容将5个句子组织成连贯的短文.news report,four young female college students died friday after falling or jumping from a blazing room on the sixth floor of shanghai business school. witness said one woman who jumped appeared to be aiming for bushes on the ground, but missed and landed on concrete. witnesses said the other three were desperately trying to climb to another room amid roaring flames when they fell to the concrete paving. the fire broke out in room 602 of the seven-floor dormitory at the schools downtown campus on zhongshan road west, just after 6 a.m. the fire was caused by an electrical device used to heat water. this had ignited flammable objects, police said late friday afternoon. after receiving reports of the fire at 6:12 a.m, police, firefighters and ambulances were quickly on the scene. the fire was extinguished by 6:30 a.m., according to the school.there is only one public toilet on each floor to get water and fire extinguishers in the dormitory were outdated, students said. (sz-agencies)【参考范文】基础写作：new development for central and western chinathe chinese government has recently decided to develop central and western china which includes 9 provinces and autonomous regions and one municipality, covering and area of 5.4 million square kilometers with a population of 285 million. the government will pay special attention to its transportation and some highways and railways will be built. to protect the environment, farmers will return farmland to forest and measures will be taken to prevent pollution. western china is rich in natural resources, which can be exploited and made full use of. to meet the need of the development, different kinds of experts and skilled workers are to be brought in.after the tears, lets focus on dorm safetyit was reported that on november 14, a tragedy occurred in a girls dormitory of the shanghai business school. four girls jumped from their sixth-floor balcony in an attempt to escape a fire, and lost their lives. people expressed their sympathy after hearing the tragedy. in my opinion, this incident reflects a lack of awareness of safety procedures. both the college and the students are responsible for it. on one hand, we students should learn to deal with an emergency calmly in daily life. if there is a crisis, we are supposed to remain calm, ensure we are safe and then call for help.on the other hand, it is the school authorities obligation to take safety measures for students living in a campus. furthermore, more