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专题限时训练(四十三)记叙文型短文改错(一)(限时：每篇8分钟)(一)dear editor，im writing to tell you about a shocked incident that happened in beijing zoo in the afternoon of feb. 23rd.i was visiting the zoo that afternoon while i heard bears roaring terribly. i hurried to the place where the bears lived at. i saw the black bear badly injured and one of them roll on the ground painfully. it was hurt too serious to move a foot. the people around was shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. i learned that was a student from a famous university in beijing who caused the trouble. he poured sulphuric acid on the bears pretending to feed them.what an shame! animals are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.sincerely yours，li hua(二)last weekend, i helped my grandparents their trip to dalian. on saturday morning, together with my grandparents, i search the internet for the train schedule, the weather in dalian, and some hotel informations. in the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. after the dinner, i packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. the next morning, i went to the station to show them off. waving goodbye to them on the platform, i felt happily for them and wished them safe journey.(三)i was only 12 when we moved to california. i remember that i enjoyed flying nonstop across a whole country and that i wasnt very happy about leave my friends. but dad think itd be good for we all to live in a suburb instead in the middle of a city.and uncle jeff, his brother, whod been living in california for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderful california it was.he said it would be easily for dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had been dads job in new york. but we all agreed to try it for one year. now weve been here for four years, and we all love it.(四) mr johnson is a hardworking teacher.every day, he spends too much time with his work.with little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night.hard work have made him very ill.“he has ruined his healthy.we are worried about him.” that is which other teachers say.yesterday afternoon, i paid visit to mr johnson.i was eager to see him, but outside her room i stopped.i had to calm myself down.quietly i step into the room.i saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together.i understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.专题限时训练(四十三)(一)dear editor，im writing to tell you about a shockedshocking incident that happened in beijing zoo inon the afternoon of feb. 23rd.i was visiting the zoo that afternoon whilewhen i heard bears roaring terribly. i hurried to the place wherewhich the bears lived at. i saw the black bearbears badly injured and one of them rollrolling on the ground painfully. it was hurt too seriousseriously to move a foot. the people around waswere shocked, angry and blaming the wrongdoer. i learned that it was a student from a famous university in beijing who caused the trouble. he poured sulphuric acid on the bears pretending to feed them.what ana shame! animals are our friends and something must be done to prevent them from being injured.sincerely yours，li hua(二)last weekend, i helped my grandparents with their trip to dalian.on saturday morning, together with my grandparents, i searchsearched the internet for the train schedule, the weather in dalian, and some hotel informationsinformation.in the afternoon, wei went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there hadwas a long queue.after the dinner, i packed the things into the suitcase，whatwhich my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map.the next morning, i went to the station to showsee them off.waving goodbye to them on the platform, i felt happilyhappy for them and wished them a safe journey.(三)i was only 12 when we moved to california. i remember that i enjoyed flying nonstop across athe whole country and that i wasnt very happy about leaveleaving my friends. but dad thinkthought itd be good for weus all to live in a suburb instead of in the middle of a city.and uncle jeff, his brother, whod been living in california for about 20 years, werewas always telling us how wonderful california was.he said it would be easilyeasy for dad to get a job driving a taxi, thatwhich had been dads job in new york. butso/and we all agreed to try it for one year. now weve been here for four years, and we all love it.(四) mr johnson is a hardworking teacher.every day, he spends too much time withon his work.with little sleep and hardly any break, he works from morning till night.hard work havehas made him very ill.“he has ruined his healthyhealth.we are worried about him.” that is whichwhat other teachers say.yesterday afternoon, i paid a visit to mr johnson.i was eager