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第一段：Emerging from the picture is a thought-provoking /ironic scene .进行描述，1.In the left picture ,while/in contrast/meanwhile, In the right one /A man , while , The other man2.一个描述，都用两个动词，Furthermore，there are some eye-catching words,which convey us a revelatory implication of/that 翻译题目，简述主题，但不提主题第二段：The motive of the cartoon is to trigger our more reflection concerning 主题.In fact ,recent years have witnessed the (phenomenon) 主题becoming a widespread epidemic.There are several major factors accounting for the matter/case/fact/problem/trend/.To begin with ,Instead,Whats more,原因论述：发展、经济、意识、客观现实、媒体发展1.The fast development in economy lays a solid financial basis for sb afford 主题相关,a considerable number of people once deemed expensive2.The advanced network science and technology has provided people with much convenient communication tool as Microbloges,which will promote 坏事主题3.the side-effect of rapid growth/blind industrialization induces degradation of 4.As china explodes economically,it is imploding ecologically.经济1. 人obsess with short-term and handsome economic benefits/interest/profits2. Obsession with short-term and handsome economic benefits/interest/profits , make/induce/generate/cause/spark3. Driven by their economic need to improve their life ,they choose to do 主题,apparently,by doing 主题,they can not only obtain the benefits,but also the practical skill.(正面)Driven by their obsession with short-term benefits/illegal interest/selfish comfort/bottomless greed,They(sb)shirk/escape/evade responsibility of ./do sth,apparently,which not only damage sbs right/benefits/thrust /sbs heart/conscience/goodness/charity ,but also induces /. social morality/trust / assistance /honesty /credibility /the sense of value . Collapse(n.v.)/loss(lose lost)/death/decline/degradation/fading（fade v.）/distortion(distort v./distorted adj.)4.the fast development .5.increase burden on their shoulder/our country6.wasting food is not just wasting money,it also means wasting energy ,water, resource consumed to cultivate,transport,package,mark,harvest/perty wealth treasure gold asset rich poor 8.意识1. folks arent aware of the undesirable /underlying/latent crisis/risk/result caused by 主题,which reduce /induce/waste/distract our attention from enlarge our outlook /enjoy meaningful life /refresh ourselves in nature /accompany our parents/friends2. the society suffers from social decline the society is fulled with 坏事 or even 更坏3. the traditional moral values are challenged.it is well known that to do sth is one of our traditional virtue in our country.at present ,some people are so selfish that they even neglect/ignore/disregard our traditional virtue.4. Many people harbor the idea that.5. According to the report released recently by Chinese academy of social sciences,about 34.2% interviewees admit they have the deed of/that.主题。客观现实We live in a vibrant society/community in which we will inevitable encounter adversity and have experiences of being .by difficulty/challenge/bump/block/hinder/barrier/obstacle/obstruct/which fulled with ./in which many people .媒体1.Good evaluation /quality is always consideration as a important determining factor.2.Excessive entertainment program/shows spring up/play on TV channels,sweeping whole/overall country ,flooding into our life.管理Confronting with the problem,parents and teachers who undertake the responsibility for fostering juvenile dont offer a timely and proper guide that help the young set a fine sense of hero.The administration bureau fails to exercise severe/strict/necessary/sensible.laws to punish on devil who./protect common public immune from property loss and mental injuryLacks publicity about inspirational role model of morality.Laws,and dont serve their intended purpose to impose stop sbs behavior/conduct/deed/action中间段的结语Undeniably/clearly,the common existing problem has exerted a negative influence on society.,if no effective remedy were introduced/curbed the trend,the fermentation of the problem will grow into a ticking time bomb for prosperity /long-term security/sustainable development of society/harmonious society/survival of human being.第三段We have no alternatives ,but to put an end to /curb the problem.it is suggested by many that we are in desperate need of robust/effective/sensible/feasible/relevant/corresponding laws and regulation/intervention/supervision/rules from 主题相关groups to punish on those who./to restrict the trend.,such as fine,compensation for victims ,apology for victims/the 主题相关分词修饰public 主题相关人.but,this alone is not sufficient.Actually,we need of a package