陕西省礼泉县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达赏析选编（6）.doc

陕西礼泉县2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】赏析选编（6）短文写作（共1题；满分30分)请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。 the greatest glory of living lies not in never falling, but in rising every time you fall.注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【2013界广东省茂名市一模】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 nowadays, the term sense of happiness has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias. during the national day holidays, cctv did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by the question are you happy now? what exactly is happiness in your eyes? the survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions. i would say im pretty happy at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a decent job. said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face. though it seemed that most people said they were happy, different voices were still heard and should not be ignored. there was a migrant worker(农民工) whose answer to the question was widely spread online. when asked if he was happy, he said my family name is zeng, showing his determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness. the brand-new chinese nobel prize winner mo yan answered i dont know in an interview when he was asked the same question: are you happy? 写作内容1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就“幸福”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括： （1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；（2）请描述到现在为止让你觉得最幸福的一件事情；（3）谈谈你对幸福的理解。写作要求 1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分） when asked by the cctv whether they were happy, most people gave a positive answer while some didnt. the nobel prize winner mo yan said he didnt know whether he was happy or not. at present, i am pretty happy because i am doing what i like and i like what i am doing. as a senior three student, i study hard every day and live it to the fullest. it feels good to study hard with my determined classmates to fulfill our dreams. when i recall the happy things which happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped them all. it was a time when my family was going through the extreme financial difficulties. so i made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoping to lighten my parents financial burden. after making tons of painstaking efforts, i succeeded. at the ceremony, i could see my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, yet with the brightest smile on her face. it was the happiest thing ever happening to me that i will treasure for the rest of my life. as far as i am concerned, happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile. when we bring happiness to them, it gives happiness to ourselves. 【2013界广东省汕头市质量测评试题】基础写作（满分is分）和睦的家庭有利于孩子的个性发展和家人的身心健康。请你根据表格中的信息，以how we can build up a harmonious family 为题用英语写一篇短文。写作内容题目how we can build up a harmonious family主要特征充满温暖、爱心和欢笑；相互关爱、尊重和理解主要益处生长在和睦家庭环境中的孩子会乐观向上 生活在和睦家庭中的父母会健康快乐父母该怎么做言行举止上做好表率；经常与孩子沟通交流我们该怎么做体谅父母的艰辛，减轻负担，主动做家务等写作要求(1 )只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。题目，文章开头与结尾已给出。(2 )句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。.表率：role model【参考范文】基础写作 how we can build up a harmonious familya harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. a harmonious family is always full of warmth, love and laughter in which parents and children not only show concern for each other bu also respect and understand each other. if a child grows up in a harmonious family , he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic. meanwhile, parents in a harmonious family are sure in live happily and more healthily. to create such a harmonious family parents should be rule models for their children in words and behavior and often communicate with them. as children of the family, we should show understanding for our parents hardship, and try in share their burdens by doing housework voluntarily and so on. if you do so, our home will always be harmonious.【2013界广东省汕头市质量测评试题】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。two years ago, when i was an oversea student, i worked early mornings and late nights to pay for my school fees.one day, i was seriously ill with a very high fever. i had stayed at home for a few days, and i had run out of food. because i had been in this town just for a short time, i also had no friends nearby who could help. so i went out to get some food. i would have gone to the supermarket, but on this occasion, i went into a small store because it was closer.i picked up a few items. when i handed them to the shopkeeper, she said, “you are unwell.” “yes，” i nodded.she pointed at the salami and bread i was buying and offered, “i can make you a sandwich, so you dont have to do it yourself. so, she made the sandwich and asked me to wait a moment. she went in the back room and returned with a bowl of hot soup.“it will warm you up,” she said with a genuine smile.what really warmed me up was not the soup, but her kindness. it made me want to be as kind as the shopkeeper who had been kind to me.写作内容1.请你以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.请你以约120个词以“善举的影响”为话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(i )上文使你回忆起曾经有谁的爱心举动使你感到温暖；(2)在感到温暖之余，你是否受到这个举动的影响，会把这份爱心传递下去？为什么？(3)进入大学校园后，你将如何继续传递爱心？写作要求你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄 袭阅读材料中的句子。【参考范文】读写任务 when the author, an oversea student, was badly ill, a shopkeeper made him a sandwich and offered hot soup. feeling warm with her kindness, the author decided to be as kind as her. the passage reminds me of miss chen, my teacher of chemistry, she just encouraged me not to give up.she even did everything to ease my anxiety. it sounds like nothing big, but her act did make me feel warm. with such a teacher, there is no doubt that i will act as her in future. as long as i do so, others can also feel the kindness of miss chen. when i enter a college, i will keep kindness in mind. if possible, i will try to become a youth volunteer, who offers help to other. no matter how hard it is, i will do my best to help those people in need.【吉林省九校联合体2014高考英语二模试题】书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是李明。上周末你的美国网友jack在给你的电子邮件中问你打算在大学里学什么专业。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封100词左右的邮件。1. 礼节性的开头语并引出问题。2. 首先打算学农学。理由是：（1） 农业是人类生存的基础。（2） 还有很多人在挨饿。（3） 你的雄心壮志。3. 学医也行；希望jack提供建议【参考范文】写作one possible version：dear jack, how is everything going? in your last letter, you asked me what major id like to choose at university. i have two majors in mind. first, i intend to choose agriculture science. why? because food is fundamental to our existence. however, food shortage is severe in many countries where many people are still going hungry and every second there are people starved to death. it is my hope that i can feed the world well through my research on organic farming.secondly, medicine is also one of my considerations, which, i think, is another worthy way to save lives. can you give me some advice? im looking forward to your reply.best wishes. yours, li ming 【 山东省菏泽市2014高考英语一模试题】写作 (满分30分) 假如你是红星中学学生会主席李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师jack推荐一名学生助手（assistant）。请根据所给提示给jack写封推荐信。1. 欢迎jack的到来；2. 推荐刘佳做学生助手；3. 刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三