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陕西礼泉县2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】赏析选编（8）书面表达：（35分）最近国内一份调查表明现在高中生的健康越来越糟糕。某学生英文报就此问题开辟专栏讨论这一现象，请你根据下列提示给该专栏投稿。1. 你的看法。2. 分析造成这一现象的原因。（至少2个）3. 提出你的建议。（至少2点）注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；3. 稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。dear editor, as the recent survey shows, the health of senior students has been going worse and worse. 【参考范文】书面表达：（35分）one possible version dear editor, as the recent survey shows, the health of senior students has been going worse and worse. i think it is worrying because health is far more important than wealth. good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our future career.as we all know, we are what we eat, however, bad eating habits are very common among us students. all these bad habits surely do harm to our health. whats more, some students lack exercise because of too much homework to do.to improve our health, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables and we have to keep a balanced diet. besides, wed better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health.in conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above, well lead a healthy life.a middle school student【2013界广东省汕头市质量监测试题】基础写作（满分15分）你是英语校报的一名小记者，最近进行了一次采访，一下是这次采访的情况：【写作内容】时 间：上周末对 象：心理学教授kelly lam主 题：中国学生关于分享感受的看法基本信息：（1） 无论是快乐或者忧愁，超过30%的学生都不愿意和其他人分享；（2） （2）我们的教育没有让孩子知道分享的重要性。专家观点：（1） 我们所生活的这个时代，学会分享感受是非常必要的；（2） 应该学会如何分享感受，对未来的成长十分有利。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考词汇】心理学psychology【参考范文】基础写作： last weekend, i am very lucky to interview kelly lam, a professor of psychology, talking about the chinese students opinion on sharing feelings. in china, more than 30% of the students are unwilling to share their feelings no matter when they are delighted or worried. whats worse, our eduction doesnt let children know the importance of sharing. professor lam believes that we live in a time in which sharing feelings is so necessary. therefore, students should learn how to share their feelings, which is beneficial to their growth in the future.【2013界广东省汕头市质量监测试题】读写任务（满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语作文。an elderly carpenter（木匠）was ready to retire. he told his employers of his plans to leave he house-building business to live a more leisurely life with his wife and children. his employer was sorry to see his good worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a personal favor. the carpenter said yes, but it was obvious that his heart was already not in his work. he built it impatiently and used poor materials. it was unfortunate for a wonderful career to end like that.when the carpenter finished his work, his employer came to inspect the house. then he handed the front-door key to the carpenter and said, this is your house. its my gift to you.the carpenter was shocked!what a shame! if he had known he was building his own house, he would have done it all so differently.so it is with us. we build our lives, a day at a time, often putting less than our best into the building. then, with a shock, we realize we have to live in the house we have built. therefore, build it wisely!【写作内容】1. 请你以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 请你以约120词以build your life wisely!为话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：(1)读了短文之后，你觉得文中木匠的做法明智吗？(2)我们能以木匠建房的态度去对待我们的生活吗？为什么？(3)你觉得我们应该如何对待生活才是明智的？【写作要求】你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。【参考范文】读写任务： a carpenter felt regretful when he knew the last house he had built impatiently was a gift for his retirement, which reminds us that we should build our life wisely. it is absolutely unwise of the carpenter to end up his career in this way. treating his last job carelessly made him lose not only a good house but also his fame as an outstanding house builder. there is no doubt that we shouldnt treat our life as the carpenter did. a saying goes, how you treat life, and how life treats you! if we are unwilling to face or deal with our life correctly, it will reward us nothing. then how can we build our life wisely? its fairly simple. the only answer is to be serious. only when you treat all the matters happening in your life seriously can you learn and gain a lot, which is beneficial as well as wise.【四川省宜宾市李庄中学2014高考英语仿真模拟试题】书面表达（满分35分） 假设你叫李林，正在读高三，你的好友张华最近给你来信，想了解你的近况，请你用英语给他写一封回信，告诉他进入高三以来你学习以及生活情况的变化，主要内容包括：1 学习态度与学习压力的变化；2 时间安排的变化；3 你后期的打算（两点）。注意：1. 内容包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译； 2. 字数120左右，文章开头已提供，不计入总词数。dear zhang hua，im happy to have received your letter. now im writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life. thank you! li hua【参考范文】书面表达 (one possible version)dear zhang hua，im happy to have received your letter. now im writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.since entering senior three, a great change has taken place to me. first of all, im studying much harder than ever with the purpose of preparing myself for the college entrance examination. besides, so many tests do we face every day that i feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night. whats more, occupied with my study, i cant afford any time to take up my hobbies, let alone, playing computer games as before.however, i have decided that i will try to adjust myself to senior three. while studying, i will make wise use of my time. by keeping a balance between study and rest, the learning efficiency, i believe, can be improved and my dream will come true. best wishes! (121words)yours【广东省东莞市2014模拟试题】基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）【写作内容】目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演（talent shows）。对此，中学生的看法各有不同。赞同不赞同1. 展示才艺，增加社会经验；2. 增强自信；3. 有利于学生全面（overall adj.）发展。模仿多，没有自己的风格；沉迷于“明星梦”，无心学习；有上当受骗的危险。【写作要求】1. 必须用5个句子表达全部的内容；2. 将5个句子组成连贯的短文。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。_【参考范文】基础写作：one possible version:at present