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英语六级作文预测及范文(一)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题 2)分析导致该问题的原因 3)大学生应该如何应对该问题 Employment Pressure Facing College Students _ _ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。 高分范文 Employment Pressure Facing College Students 1About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. 1But now, things are different. Todays university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. 2What is the cause of this phenomenon? 3Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, 4the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. 3Secondly, university students 5tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. 3Thirdly, some students dont study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they havent gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require. 6Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. 3Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and 7put our heart into our studies. 3Whats more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to 8accumulate relevant practical experience. 3Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should 9attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary. 【亮点点评】 1过去和现在进行对比。 2设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。 3过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 4“大学生供过于求”。 5“倾向，趋于”。 6“面对日趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。 7“用心学习”。 8“积累相关的实际经验”。 9“更加关注”。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation. 临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。 _. 2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary 临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。 _. 【KEY】 1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis. 2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to ones abilities than to his degree. 英语六级作文预测及范文(二)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的 2)阐述他们各自的考虑 3)表明你的看法 High Salaries or Career Development? _ _ _ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。 高分范文 High Salaries or Career Development? There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. 1Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. 1Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities. 2People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. 3With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression 4due to lack of enough money. 2However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. 5It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later. In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction 6while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, 7generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will 8give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries. 【亮点点评】 1用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。 2用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。 3“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。 4“因为缺钱”。 5强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。 6while引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。 7“一般来说”。 8“选择”。 佳句临摹 1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities. 临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。 _. 2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. 临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得到特殊待遇。 _. 3.佳句：Career may give us long ng term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness. 临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。 _. 【KEY】 1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food. 2. However, the holde