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课 题 英语写作高分策略 课 时共 1 课时本节第 1 课时选用教材人教知识模块课 型新授教学目标使学生英语书面表达提高一个等次,从而提高高考总分.重 点1.整洁的卷面 2.丰富的词汇,句型 3. 行文的流畅难 点丰富的词汇,句型教学方法及课前准备在运用中掌握方法.教学流程多媒体辅助教学内容1.which composition feels more attractive, why?影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点2.which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?1)the character of this gala is that it relates peoples lives2)the most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary peoples lives.3)young people dont want to watch tv ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration. 4)young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in tv.影响给分的因素之二：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装a. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；b. 句型结构运用灵活多变practicefind some similar words or phrases of the followings1.goodperfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent 2. thinkin ones opinion/view hold the view that it is widely shared that 3.clever wise bright smart intelligent cute改变句子结构,与众不同1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。a strong/big earthquake happened in tangshan in the 1980s.there was a strong earthquake in tangshan in the 1980s.a terrible earthquake hit/struck tang shan in the 1980s.2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.i received your letter which was written on august 15th this morning.your letter of august 15th reached/got to me this morning.改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.he got excited when he heard the news._ the news, he got excited.2.the girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty._, the girl went home.3.i studied chinese, english and physics at school._include chinese, english and physics .4.it was early in the morning. mr. smith was in his garden. he was watering flowers._, mr. smith was watering _. 使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.we were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well._we were to see crops and vegetables growing well!2. radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920.it was_.3.he never speaks about his own family.never_.4.a notice is saying ”please save water” on the wall.on the wall_.5.though he is a child, he knows a lot._.3.影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成 正确而巧妙地使用好连接词1.表递进and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.表转折but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on the other hand. .表因果because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.表目的in order that,so that,for the purpose of.表归纳in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion,in a word,on the whole.如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？many houses and schools were destroyed. more than five million people are living a hard life now. the students there need help and schools should be built. students can return to classes soon.william shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达)do you know hamlet? have you read the merchant of venice? these two great works are both written by william shakespeare, my favorite english writer and the man of all ages! shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, i like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; i love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the english language; i admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! since “life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. on this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and i will try my best to play my role well.影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想4. 小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -整洁的卷面2. 文章的语言； -丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -独到的见解5. homeworkbuild a harmonious society-建立和谐