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写作高分作文语言机密一 静态动词和动态动词1 这些原则一直是我们民族的精神之柱。a. These principles are the spiritual pillars of our nation.b. These principles have nourished the soul of nation.2 互相尊重的精神是我们文化合作的基础。a. The spirit of mutual respect is the basis of our cultural cooperation.b. The framework of mutual respect sustains our own cultural cooperation.3. 自我形象是看待成功和失败的基础。a. Self- conception is the basis of ones attitude towards success and failure. b. Self-conception underlines ones attitude towards success and failure. 4. 生态失去平衡是野生动植物乃至人类生存的最大威胁。a. Ecological imbalance is the biggest threat to the survival of wild animals and plants, even human beings.b, Ecological imbalance threatens the survival of wildlife, even human beings.二 动词机构和抽象名词化a. College life makes me feel very excited.b. College life filled me with excitement.a. If you compare two ways of life carefully, you will find the former is superior to the latter.b. Careful comparison of two ways of life will show the superiority of the former over the latter.a. The life style has become accepted and welcomed by more and more young people.b. the life style has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young people.a. If we dont recognize seriously the problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.b. Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big mistake.a. This incident helps me to understand the nature of human beings deeply.b. This incident deepens my understanding of the nature of human beings.三 人物主语和非人物主语1 没有几天的功夫，由于抢购，商店里的货卖光了。Within days, panic buying emptied store shelves. 2 我害怕起来了，而且越来越害怕。Then fear set in and commenced to build up. 3 他疲惫不堪，加上气温越来越高，于是他下定决心一看到阴凉处就坐下休息。His weariness and increasing heat determined him to sit down in the first convenient shade.4 妇女退休后完全过一种家庭生活，她们没有像男的一样感到可怕。Withdrawal from employment to complete domesticity is a far less threatening experience for a woman than for a man.5 大多数人对学生的要求持同情的态度。There is considerable public sympathy for the students demands. 6 他们片面地注重重工业，忽视农业和轻工业，因而导致市场上货物不够。Their lopsided stress on heavy industry to the neglect of agriculture and light industry results in a shortage of goods in the market.四 头重脚轻和头轻脚重 普通人在家里使用计算机的时代已经来临。a. The time when ordinary people can use electronic computers at home has come.b. The time has come when ordinary people can use electronic computers at home.政府应对所有的经济问题要负责是大多数人的看法。a. The belief that the government should be responsible for all the economic trouble is commonly held.b. The belief is commonly held that the government should be responsible for all the economic trouble.大城市行路难，乘车难已成为突出的社会问题。a. The difficulty for people to get to their destinations on foot or by bus in big cities has become a general complaint. b. The problem has become a source of complaint of getting to the destinations either on foot or by bus for people in big cities.a Whether they will send any delegation to attend the conference which is to be held next month in Hawaii is not yet known.b. It is not yet known whether they will send any delegation to attend the conference which is to be held next month in Hawaii.a. Those who receive marvelous news after a long silence are happy indeed.b. happy indeed are those who receive marvelous news after a long silence.五 否定与肯定1 粮食最能激起民众的感情， 因为它最直接关系到个人的生存乃至国家的生存。No issue is more emotion-rousing than food, because no issue is as basic to individual and national survival. 2 几乎任何社会活动都和宴席有关。There are hardly any activities or social events that can not be related to banquets. 3 每个毕业生都接触了新思潮。No one leaves college without some exposure to liberal ideas.4 考试是最令人担心的是脑子僵住了，一片空白。Nothing is more frustrating than freezing up during an important exam.5 过去十年中变化最大的可能要数大量通讯新技术的出现如有线电视，通讯卫星，小型电脑等。Perhaps no change has characterized the past decade more dramatically than the expansion of new technologies of communicationcable television, communication satellites and minicomputers. 六 汉式英语和地道英语1， 对词义不理解造成的看电视可以开阔我们眼界a. Watching TV can widen our eyesight.b. Watching TV can widen our horizon.他没说几句就让我们展开讨论。a. He only said a few sentences and then let us discuss. b. He only said a few words and then let us discuss.2. 对文化习俗不了解造成的如果一个学生只有书本知识，毕业后他就变成了一条腿走路的人。a. If a student only has book knowledge, he will become a one-legged man when he comes outof the university door.b. If a student only has book knowledge, he wont become a well-rounded man when he graduated from college. 有时人们放鞭炮是为了庆祝红白喜事。a. Sometimes people set off firecrackers to celebrate the red and white happy things.b. Sometimes people set off firecrackers to celebrate ones wedding or funeral.他的讲座精心准备，有趣生动，我们不时捧腹大笑a. His lecture was well-prepared and interesting, we often held our stomach with laughter.b. His lecture was well-prepared and interesting, we often held our sides with laughter. 3 由于词语搭配造成的他的脑子很聪明a. His brain is very clever.b. He is very clever.如果像这样看电视，他的眼睛总有一天会瞎掉。a. If he watches TV like this, his eyes will be completely blind one day. b. If he watches TV like this, he will be blind one day.一个人如果胸无大志，就不可能有所作为。a. No one can achieve anything when he doesnt have an ambition in his heart.b. No one can achieve anything if he doesnt have his ambition. 4由于词性不同造成的所以如果没有坚强意志，就没有努力，就没有成功。a. So no strong will, no hard work and no success.b. Without strong will, there is no hard work, nor success. 电脑和电视机一样，可以给我们很多信息。a. Computer like TV and can provide us with much information.b. Like TV, the computer can provide us with much information.有自己独立的主见，会有助他们今后的工作。a. Form their own opinions will benefit their future work.b. Forming ones own opinion will benefit their future work.七 背景知识和主要信息今天的孩子由于看电视，懂的东西很多。电视节目样样都有，触及生活所有方面。但是看电视不能代替家长给孩子立规矩。Today children have become more knowledgeable from watching television-its programs so varied that they cover nearly all fields of life. But exposure and information are no substitute for the rules that parents should set for their children.上个月，公司在北京召开亚太客户会议。这是该公司80 年历史上首次在中国举行这样的会议。The corporation called an Asian-Pacific customers meeting in Beijing, the first of its kind being held in China in its 80-year history. 八动宾连贯式和主次分明式所有的二流子都要受到改造，参加生产，变为好人。All loafters must be reformed into good citizens through participation in work.我们采取了强硬政策，控制了通货膨胀，确保经济稳定增长。By embarking on a “get-tough” policy, we have successfully curbed inflation so as to ensure steady economic growth.要大力开发国土资源，积极发展多种经营，增加农民收入。To raise farmers income, land resources must be filly exploited and a diversified economy vigorously developed. 我们必须抓住机遇，深化改革，扩大开放，促进发展，保持稳定。To promote economic growth and maintain social stability, we must take the opportunity to deepen the reform and open China wider to the outside world. 九 断与不断不像电影，电视可以一直放下去，而无须再付钱。a. Unlike the movie, TV shows on continuously, and doesnt have to pay any extra money. b. Unlike the movie, TV shows on continuously, and one doesnt need to pay any extra money. 如果没有电，世界就会变得一片漆黑，在马路上连对方也看不出。a. Without electricity, the world would become dark and even can not see each other in the street.b. Without electricity, the world would become dark. And people could not see each other in the street.电视成为现代生活不可缺少的东西。因为生活离不开它。a. TV becomes indispensable to our modern life. Because we can not live without it.b. TV becomes indispensable to our modern life, because we can not live without it.我们要保护环境。因为地球是我们人类唯一能够生存的地方。a. We must protect our environment. Since the earth is the only place we human beings can live in.b. We must protect our environment, since the earth is the only place we human beings can live in. 十竹竿和大树他先前在南方参加某项工程建设。完工后，就去乔治岛度假，享受高加索的阳光。他是昨天才回来的。a. In the south he had been engaged in a construction job. After he completed the work he went to spend his vacation in Georgia. There he basked in Caucasian Sun. And he had flown in just the day before.b. He had flown in just the day before from Georgia where he had spent his vacation basking in Caucasian Sun after the completion of the construction job in which he had been engaged in the South.农村距离远，交通工具又缺乏，使得它与外界社会隔绝。而信息的不畅通使这种隔绝更为严重。a. .The rural area is far from the city, and lacking in transport facilities. This makes it isolated from the outside world. And because it is different to access information this isolation is compounded. b. The isolation of the rural world because of distance and the lack of transport facilities is compounded by the difficult access to information media. 大学生现在只关心分数。考试往往作弊，不像80 年代的大学生，他们只关心自己的前途，很少考社会问题。a. College stu