湖南省武冈市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达浏览新编（2）.doc

2016湖南武冈市高考英语（二轮）书面表达浏览新编（2）2016书面表达训练请以“the benefits of failure”为题，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文发表到校英语报上。要点如下：1列举实例； 2.认识变化； 3.态度转变。注意：1.词数120 字左右;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：激励 motivate【参考范文】the benefits of failure although nobody wants to experience failure, failure plays an important role on the way to success. sometimes, failure can benefit us a lot. when i failed my english exam last term, i felt upset at first, but then i made up my mind to study even harder .it was that failure that motivated me to put more time and energy into learning this subject. whats more, i found it was my small vocabulary and poor grammar that led to my failure. so i changed my learning methods. finally i made greater progress in english than before. most importantly, now i have a correct attitude towards failure. all in all, failure is the mother of success. it really helped me to get closer to success.【思路点拨】范文开篇点题使用了短语“play an important role, on the way to ”。紧接着，按照写作要求，结合自己亲身经历举例证明失败的好处。在举例时对时态的把握准确，对过去事情的描述用一般过去时。使用了一系列衔接词“at first ,but then whats more, finally ,most importantly”，句与句之间衔接自然顺畅。最后，用名人名言“失败乃成功之母”点明文章主题。范文句式多变。when引导的时间状语从句, 强调句型it was that failure that motivated me to put more time and energy into learning this subject。书面表达【2014江西省南昌市高三二模】ipad已成为中学生的新宠，它不仅可以听音乐，阅读电子书，而且还可以玩电子游戏。假如你是南昌某高中学生李华，请你用英语给英语报社写一封信，谈谈你对自己周围学生使用ipad的情况的看法。信的内容必须包括以下几点：1使用ipad对学习的好处；2对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响；3提出自己的建议。注意：词数120左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。dear editor，im a senior high school student in nanchang，named li hua.now many students have ipads and think its a fashion to use them._yours sincerely，li hua【参考范文】dear editor，im a senior high school student in nanchang，named li hua.now many students have ipads and think its a fashion to use them.using an ipad，we can listen to music，download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.apparently，it is helpful to our study，especially to our english listening.some students，however，bring their ipads to classrooms and listen to music with earphones，which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed.whats worse，some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.in my opinion，as a student，we should make good use of ipads.the classroom is a place for students to study，and therefore，concentration is badly needed for us to learn our lessons.furthermore，the school should make a rule to guide the students to use ipads in a proper way.yours sincerely，li hua2016书面表达训练假设你是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，为了弘扬雷锋精神，你校决定开展多项志愿服务活动。请用英语写一篇倡议书，发表在校英语报上，号召同学们加入本校的志愿者俱乐部。内容包括：1.陈述当志愿者的好处；2.向同学们发出几点倡议。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，但不计入总词数。dear fellow students,volunteering has a positive effect on our community. _. students union【参考范文】dear fellow students,volunteering has a positive effect on our community. it can benefit us in several ways. first of all, volunteering can help us learn more about society and gain valuable experience. secondly, by volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we have learned to good use.i hope more and more students will join the voluntary club of our school. lets express concern for the old and disabled people around us and offer a helping hand. lets clean the parks near our home. lets go to nursing homes to bring love to those in need.remember, we can make a difference to society if we are willing to lend a helping hand, so lets take action. students union书面表达(2014福建龙岩市一级达标学校联考)最近，“中国式过马路”成为网友热议的话题。右面的漫画反映了部分中国人闯红灯过马路的现象。请根据漫画内容用英语写一篇短文。内容要求：1.描述漫画的内容；2分析出现这种现象的原因；3发表个人观点。注意：1.短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；2考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实，连贯；3词数：120左右；4文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇：行人pedestrian；违规者jaywalker。chinese style of crossing the roadrecently，a heated debate arose online in china about the chinese style of crossing the road._【参考范文】chinese style of crossing the roadrecently，a heated debate arose online in china about the chinese style of crossing the road.as is shown in the picture，a large crowd of people are crossing the road regardless of red lights，which prevents the vehicles from moving forward even at the sight of green lights.various reasons might account for pedestrians to run traffic lights.some people believe it is not against traffic laws and wont be fined because so many people do it together.others may argue that traffic lights are not arranged scientifically，so that they have to wait too long before they can cross the road.in my opinion，the jaywalkers should be severely punished.most important of all，people should be educated to obey laws from childhood.start out small and develop a good sense and habit of observing laws.only by improving peoples safety and law awareness can we create a harmonious society.书面表达训练你是高三学生李华，进入高三以来你发现你的同桌李雷总是抄作业，为此你很担心。所以借此次月考为契机，请你为他写封信1. 客观分析抄作业的主要原因 (太难；懒，没兴趣；完成以愉悦老师) 2. 分析抄作业的危害（坏习惯：违反学校规定；失去独立思考的能力） 3. 提出解决方法（合理安排时间；有问题请教老师同学）注意：1. 字数100词左右2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；dear friend,i am worried about you because _ yours sincerely li hua【参考范文】dear friend,i am worried about you because ifind you copy others homework occasionally. it is agreed that we students have to do masses of homework both at home and at school. sometimes we do have some problems, too hard to work out. moreover, lazy and uninterested in our lessons, some students copy others homework not only to finish the assignments but also please our teachers.copying others homework is a bad habit.for one thing,itis against the school rules. being students, we should be honest and work hard. for another, copying others homework too often, we willlose the ability that can help us to think. so i would like to give you some suggestions. you should firstly arrange your time and homework reasonably. at the same time, if you have difficulties, you can turn to teachers and classmates for help.yoursli hua书面表达训练假设你是李华， 你的加拿大朋友bob 给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下中国高中生对于大学的选择意向，于是你在班里进行了一次调查。请根据下表的信息，给bob 回复一封电子邮件，告诉他调查结果，并说明原因。选择意向和比例原因省内大学25录取机会大；生活习惯相似省外大学70培养独立性；可选学校多国外大学5了解外国文化；有助于学外语注意: 1.词数100左右；2.电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear bob, last week i did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose. yours, li hua 【参考范文】dear bob, last week i did a survey among the students in my class on what university they want to choose. now im writ