广西贺州市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错借鉴选编（2）.doc

短文改错借鉴选编（2）短文改错not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. all over 1. _the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. since 2. _long ago, many adults and children called their friends together 3. _to spend hours, even days play games. one of the reasons people 4. _like to play is that sports help them to live happily. in other words, 5. _they help to keep people strong and feel good. when people are 6. _playing games, they move a lot. that is how sports are good activities 7. _for their health. having fun with their friends make them happy. 8. _many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. in american 9. _big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 10. _答案及解析1. and改为but。前文说并非所有的人都喜欢工作， 下文说每个人都喜欢玩， 是转折关系。2. woman改为women。并列的四个名词均为复数。3. 在 called前加have。根据句意， 应使用现在完成时。4. play改为playing。固定搭配， spend hours (in) playing games。5. 此行无错误。6. feel改为feeling。固定搭配keep sb. feeling good， 使人们感觉良好。7. how改为why。how不符合句意。8. make改为makes。分词短语作主句， 谓语动词用单数。9. 把others前的冠词the去掉。许多人喜欢观看别人运动， others前加冠词意为“其余的人”， 与文意不符。10. sell改为buy。在大城市里人们买票观看体育比赛。短文改错i was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _family. so i have to work to support my family. my 77. _first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant.78. _i still remember going there early and felt anxious about79. _the new world. i worked harder because i was afraid of 80. _losing the job. at night, i was sometimes very tired to do81. _my homework. and i came to understand that was not82. _easy to earn money, and knowledge could change83. _my life. so what i learned from the job, in a hard84. _way, was much more important as what i earned. 85. _【参考答案】i was a high school student then, from low-income 76. _a_family. so i have to work to support my family. my 77. _had _first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant.78. _去掉one_i still remember going there early and felt anxious about79. _feeling_the new world. i worked harder because i was afraid of 80. _hard_losing the job. at night, i was sometimes very tired to do81. _too_my homework. and i came to understand that was not82. _it_easy to earn money, and knowledge could change83. _that _my life. so what i learned from the job, in a hard84. _way, was much more important as what i earned.85. _than_短文改错-1choose what to eat is no longer as easy as it once was. our eating habits 1. have changed , as have our way of life. and the fuel we need for our 2. body is also different. tradition diets often have too much fat and too 3. much calories for the 21st-century person. if we want to keep up with the 4. high pace of modern life, we had better to learn to make the right choices 5. about what and how we eat. because we have so much to choose, many 6. companies offer advice about what we should eat. its good if we spend our 7. time and money in buying food and keep a balanced diet. instead of eating 8. expensive diet or going on unhealthy diets, we can simply try to eat little 9. sugar and take more exercise. i hope that everyone keeps a good health. 10. 答案及解析 1. choose 改为 choosing 。动名词作主语2. have 改为has 。倒装句中助动词取决于后面的主语3.tradition 改为traditional 4.much 改为many 。calories 是calorie （卡路里）的复数5.better 后面的to去掉。 had better do sth 最好做某事6.choose 后面加from7.正确8.keep 改为keeping 。keeping 和前面的buying构成介词in的宾语9.little改为 less 。 less 和后面的more构成对应关系10.a去掉 。 health 是不可数， keep good health 保持身体健康短文改错which we all know, we are what we eat. therefore, its very important 1. for us to form into healthy eating habits. however, bad habits are still very 2. common among we students . some of us often go to school without 3. breakfast .some like to have snacks; some others are particular with food; 4. and still some eat or drink too many.all these bad habits will be bad for our health 5. to keep fit, we should have various health diets, which generally 6. include proper amount of fish, meat, vegetable, fruit as well as main food. 7. beside, we had better have meal regularly. 8. in my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up 9. a strong body. only in this way can we have enough energy study better. 10. 答案及解析：1. which改为as ， 非限制定语从句放于句首用as，再说as we all know 众所周知2. into去掉， form healthyeating habits 养成健康的饮食习惯3. we 改为us 4. with改为about ，be particular about为固定词组5. many改为much 6. health改为 healthy 7. vegetable改为vegetables ，vegetable是可数名词8. beside 改为besides ， beside 是在旁边，而besides是“除此之外”9. 正确10. study 前面加to表目的短文改错once upon a time there was a farmer worked hard in the fields 1. every day. one day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a 2. bumping sound. he saw a rabbit lie by the trump. he picked it 3. up and found that it was a fat rabbit. he thought to him,“since it 4. is so easy get a rabbit like that, why should i work so hard all day 5. long?” he threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreamed for 6. more rabbits to come. when he finally realized his foolish and returned 7. to his fields, he found that all his crops are dead. this story tells that 8. we should wait for unexpected gains by trusting to chance and luck. 9. or, we should not hope to get rew