广西马山县高考英语二轮复习 语短文改错练习（1）.doc

广西马山县2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（1）1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。in order to realize his dream, bill gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in harvard university, that is the most famous in the worldhe set up a company and researching the computer softwarean old saying go, “interest is the best teacher” i quite agree with this ideai began to be crazy about english when i was a little girli got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customsto meet me curiosity, i read in english stories every dayit seemed to be the best “meal” of a dayas a result, i always did very well in english examinterest is the key of success【参考答案】1.in order to realize his dream, bill gates, richest man in the world, gave upthestudying in harvard university, that is the most famous in the worldhe set up whicha company and researching the computer softwarean old saying go, “interest researched或去掉and goesis the best teacher” i quite agree with this ideai began to be crazy about english when i was a little girli got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customsextremely andto meet me curiosity, i read in english stories every dayit seemed to be the bestmy 删除“meal” of a dayas a result, i always did very well in english examinterest is theexamskey of successto假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（a)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。i will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. one of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. a few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. they are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. they were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. this accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety problem. i strong suggest that the whole society pays more attention to food safety.【参考答案】2.1.story后加that/ which, 2. classmate classmates, 3.enjoy 后加the, 4.ourtheir, 5.arewere, 6.butand, 7.beforeafter, 8.to realize 去掉to, 9.strongstrongly, 10.payspay短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。this afternoon i went to see my grandfather by a bus. it was very crowded and i had to stand. besides me there was a woman held a little boyin her arms. in front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. i heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “whats wrong withthe uncle?” i had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “be quiet. this uncle must very tired because of hard work.” the young man must haveheard the word. his face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once. 【参考答案】3.this afternoon i went to see my grandfather by a bus. it was very 删除crowded and i had to stand. besides me there was a woman held a little boy beside holdingin her arms. in front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be occupiedsleeping. i heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “whats wrong with curiouslythe uncle?” i had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man. that或去掉ifbeyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “be quiet. this myuncle mustvery tired because of hard work.” the young man must have beheard the word. his face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at words toonce. （全国ii）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分） 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（j）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 george,its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. after 78._we said goodbye to you, we went to washington d.c., 79._where we stayed for three days. my brother was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81_another couple of day. however, my father had to return to 82._work on monday so we fly back last saturday afternoon. it 83_was really a nice experience. if youd like to make trip to 84._our city some day, i will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._yours,mike76.after-since 77.them-us 78.for-with 79.正确 80.去掉much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip前a 85.better-more一短文改错的主要特点1内容大都是学生身边或社会生活中常见的话题。以记叙文为主，有时也有说明文或应用文。2内容相对独立、完整。命题的总原则是整篇理解、分行解题。3语言简单易懂，没有生僻的词汇或繁难的句法结构；短文的词数为120左右。4考查要点覆盖面广, 分布合理。涉及词法、句法、行文逻辑等三个方面。二短文改错的常见类型 纵观近几年高考题中的短文改错, 不难看出,其错误形式基本上为：错词占6行左右; 正确占1 行; 多词和缺词一般占3 行左右。错误类型主要涉及动词、名词、形容词、副词、冠词、代词、介词、连词、主谓一致、固定结构等语法知识。其中, 动词时态、语态、非谓语动词等是考查重点。一、短文改错的解题基本思路 1通读全文，掌握大意首先，要认真阅读短文，把握全篇主旨，弄清上下文的逻辑关系，了解文章所创设的语言环境，为正确判断创造条件。2整句理解，逐行找错。 在读懂文章之后，要逐句逐行地找错。分析每个句子中句法、语法、行文逻辑等方面是否有错，要做到逐行分析，不可遗漏，句与句之间要注意连词的用法。3由易到难，各个击破改错要从最简单、最熟悉的项目入手，先从语法的角度入手，再从逻辑方面考虑，最后推敲难题。4检查核对，规范改正最后浏览改后的全文，看全篇是否语义通顺，注意正确行。 要特别注意规范改正错误, 严格按照示范规定符号和要求去改。切忌文字说明或用箭头表示。二短文改错的设题方式一错词：错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义词、形似词选择错误等。1虚词错误介词错误。介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。1.after five years away in my hometown，i find that the neighborhood which i used to live in has changed a lot.(09全国卷i)析：“从离开，远离”应为短语 away from，不能与in搭配。应将in改为from。 连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的关系混淆，是并列、转折、承接、还是表原因；连词与介词、副词的混用，一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义相近连词的区别等。1.i meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and i was held up on my way back(09全国卷ii) 析：分析前后两个句子可知，前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系，不是并列关系，应将 and 改为but。冠词错误：冠词的考查集中在：应该使用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠词；应该使用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词；不定冠词a与an的误用等。1.three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with them. （2009.四川卷）析：初次提到的人或物前应该用不定冠词，因此要将第一个the改为an。2实词错误 名词错误主要集中在：名词的单复数形式，特别注意不规则名词的复数形式；可数名词和不可数名词的混用；抽象名词具体化；名词的所有格等。1. i stayed there for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. （09全国卷ii）析：one and a half 后接可数名词的复数形式，不能用单数。要将hour改为hours。 动词错误主要有：不规则动词的过去式、过去分词形式错误；时态的不一致性；语态的错用；非谓语动词用法的选择，特别是非谓语动词作状语、表语、定语或宾语补足语时是用过去分词还是现在分词；在 to 后是用不定式还是动名词；以及在并列结构中后面动词的形式；谓语动词时态形式的错用；情态动词和 will(would), shall (should) 等助动词后面的动词形式的误用等。1.there exist now a park that has a small river running through. （09全国卷i）析：句子中的there exist相当于there be形式，exist的形式跟后面的名词a park保持一致，因此exist要用单三形式exists。 形容词与副词错误主要表现在：这两类词的混用；形容词或副词的原级、比较级、最高级的混用等。 1.the sichuan restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school are gone. （09全国卷i）析：分析句子，句子中没有比较对象，不能用比较级，要将older改为原形old。 引导词错误：在复合句中引导从句的连接词的错误运用，特别是在定语从句中关系词的错误运用，宾语从句中连接词的误用等。1.one day i saw