江苏省常熟市高考英语书面表达冲刺训练6(1).doc

江苏省常熟市2014高考英语书面表达训练【浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷】书面表达（满分30分）假设你是高中学生王敏，当你听说当地政府打算把你所在的有着百年历史的老学校从市中心迁至郊区时，你决定给市长写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1. 简述你写信的目的及你对此事的观点； 2. 说明你的理由。dear sir, _ wang ming, a student of xxx school 【参考范文】书面表达a possible versiondear sir,it is said that our local government is going to move our school to the suburb. i am now writing to express my opinion that it is more advisable to keep the school where it is.for one thing, it is more convenient for both students and teachers to get to the present school which is located in the center of the city. if it is moved to the suburb, it surely will bring students, especially their parents, much trouble.for another, as a school with a history of one hundred years, her value mainly lies in the signs left by time. we can put up new buildings and plant new trees, but we cannot rebuild such reminders of memory. therefore, i suggest the school not be moved. wang ming, a student of xxx school【广东省东山中学高三下入学摸底考试】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。 my mothers hands 50 years ago, for some reason, i was not accepted by the school. however, it was my mum, who held my little hands and tried countless schools and managed to get me registered 50 years later, the day after my mother had slipped into a coma from a stroke, i sat next to her, holding her hand, stroking it, watching her body heaved up and down as she breathed heavily, like she was struggling with something. a few days later. mum died. at her bedside, i spent some time just looking at my mother, soaking in the finality of her death. there she was, my mother, motionless and lifeless. i took hold of her still warm but lifeless hand, holding it for the last time, recalling every piece of precious moment we spent together. . . i finally let go of her hand-1ifeless, yet having given so much life to so many of us-and placed it next to her body. i found myself saying silently to her the only words that came to my mind, “goodbye mum, thank you for everything.” thank you, mother, for not giving up, so that i could go to school. thank you for coaching me, for reading to me, for ironing my school uniforms, for combing my hair, for tying my shoe laces, for making sure i had a little handkerchief inside my pocket rest in peace, mother, you are still very much alive in us. happy mothers day【写作内容】 有人说, 因为上帝不能无处不在, 所以他创造了“母亲”。你的母亲是一位怎样的女性?请以“母亲”为主题写一篇记叙文, 结合自身的经历讲述母亲对你的爱或者她对你成长的影响。内容要点包括： 1. 以约30个词概括以上短文内容。 2. 然后以约120个词讲述母亲对你的爱或者她对你成长的影响, 并包括以下要点： （1）描述你的母亲; （2）简述她对你的影响; （3）你准备怎样表达对她的感激之情?【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）参考范文:1 the writer expresses his gratitude for his mothers dedication and endless effort in raising him. in his memory, it is her hand that leads him through various moments in his life. like the author, i also appreciate my mother for everything she devotes to bringing me up. my mother is a kind and gentle woman, a math teacher at a middle school .as a teacher she works diligently and treats the students patiently, so she is always praised and respected by both her students and colleagues alike. as mother, she takes good care of me and offers me the best thing she can afford. every day the moment she steps into the house after work, she sets about doing housework and preparing delicious dishes for me. my mother is a thrifty and industrious woman. she never buys expensive or fancy dresses for herself. nor does she dine out in luxurious restaurants. though she lives a simple life, she never complains. my mother not only sets me a good example in life, but also in work. she often says, work while you work, and play while you play. that is the way to be happy and gay.” what a piece of good advice! i will always bear it in mind. as far as i am concerned, nothing can be compared to mothers love to me, and my gratitude to her is beyond words. the only thing i am able to do at present is to work hard and make greater progress in study, so that i can be her pride one day.参考范文：2 the writer expresses his gratitude for his mothers dedication and endless effort in raising him. in his memory, it is her hand that leads him through various moments in his life. the passage reminds me of my mother, from whom i learn to be a better person. mum is an ordinary housewife. she is not beautiful, but she is very popular. you can always see her sitting together with some old ladies doing some little craftworks, with attention focused on the work while chatting with others. she always tells me, never put your palms upwards but downwards! i didnt know why, so i would stare at her hands whenever i had nothing to do. then i found that they were busy doing cleaning, washing, cooking, and helping others. i never knew such short small and fat hands could do so many things. holding her hands, i asked mum why we couldnt put the palms upwards. she told me it meant we should never depend on others for help. instead, we should try to solve problems ourselves or make our own bread. but if others needed help, we should give our hands at the fist second.i forever bear in mind the lesson she taught me. to show my gratitude to her, i will spare no effort to work harder so that she can have a better life in the future.【陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟考试】书面表达（满分30分）假如你是李华，请你根据以“老人摔倒你会扶吗？”为主题的班会调查结果及你自已的意见给英语周报写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：注意： 1.总词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。ladies and gentlemen,will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street? a recent survey from our class meeting shows that_更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，让整个文章成为了一个有机的整体。如however、why not? first、second、in my opinion 等等；同时句中还有一些高级的句式，如such a case occurs to us one day when were old中的定语从句when were old。在以后的写作中一定要注意这些技巧的使用。考点：考察提纲短文【2014安徽省皖南八校第一次联考】书面表达（满分25分)据报道,我国学生近视率居世界第一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的, 请你以 why are more and more children getting short-sighted? 为题, 写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1. 造成学生近视的原因；2. 如何保护视力？注意: 1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头已经写好, 不计入总词数。参考词汇: 近视率 rate of myopiawhy are more and more children getting short-sighted?it is reported that the rate of myopia of chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _【参考范文】one possible version:why are more and more children getting short-sighted?it is reported that the rate of myopia of chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.the causes of myopia are complicated. firstly, too much homework leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep. long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight. secondly, medical research shows genetic factors also contribute to poor eyesight. in addition, many students dont form good eye care habits. for example, when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.realizing the reasons of this result, its time for us to take measures to protect eyesight. i think the most important is to encourage students to engage in more outdoor activities and create a vision-friendly studying environment.【广东深圳市第二次调研考试】基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇你校开展“光盘”活动的报道。写作内容写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）at 4 pm on march 4th, monday, 2013, in front of the student canteen, more than 900 teachers and students participated in the activity with the theme “fight against wasting but encourage to eat up everything on your plate” organized by the students union. first, we saw pictures on the boards which had recorded the terrible phenomena of wasting in the campus. after that, we watched video clips, from which we have learned that every year about 10 million people are dying of food shortage. therefore, if we reduce food waste by 5% every day, we can save 4 million lives. and then everybody signed up to show our determination so as to cultivate our g