江西省景德镇市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错编练（4）.doc

江西景德镇市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错编练（4）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。maria, a 91 - year- old woman, has an unbelievable experience last week. a group of thievesbroke to her house but took nothing away with them. maria remembered that the windowswere broken and all her box were opened, but nothing was missing. instead, she found ahandwritten note that was said, this is help you get by. beside the note there was some money. it seemed that the thieves realized how poor maria lived and derided not to take somethingbut to help.one policeman who has been working for 40 years is surprising by this event too. later maria framed the note received from her friendly thieves but used the money to buy sweets for his great grandchildren.【参考答案】4.maria, a 91 - year- old woman, has an unbelievable experience last week. a group of thieves had broke to her house but took nothing away with them. maria remembered that the windows intowere broken and all her box were opened, but nothing was missing. instead, she found a boxeshandwritten note that was said, this ishelp you get by. beside the note there was some tomoney. it seemed that the thieves realized how poor maria lived and derided not to take poorlysomethingbut to help.one policeman who has been working for 40 years is surprising by this anything surprisedevent too. later maria framed the note received from her friendly thieves but used the money to andbuy sweets for his great grandchildren. her短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 mr. wang,were so pleased that you are willing to sharing our views.in the course of the general revision, what we needed is a chain of knowledge. as you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, but please slow down and make sure we have real mastered something. besides, we need a little more time to think for us. as for those important point which also make us confusing, would you please give us more practice in case of we forget? meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, on how to write with natural english. we still have another request: please dont make us do too much homework.by the way, we often feel worried, which has very bad effect on our study. we would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.【参考答案】51.sharing-share2.needed-need3.but-so k$#s5u4.real-really5.us-ourselves6.point-points k$#s5u7.confusing-confused8.去掉of9.with-in k$#s5u10、has-has a短文改错。假定英语课上老师要同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。attention please, everyone. we accepted the weather forecast on the radio this morning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. be sure shut the windows and doors until you leave your classrooms. the winter sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow will be put off. after it becomes fine, well make other announcement. we will have classes on thursday as usually. since it is cold tomorrow, please put on more clothes in time. those who comes to school by bike dont keep your umbrella open while riding.【参考答案】5.attention please, everyone. we accepted the weather forecast on the radio this received/gotmorning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. be sure shut the windows be toand doors until you leave your classrooms. the sports meet that we planned to beforehold on tomorrow will be put off. after it becomes fine, well make other去掉on another announcement. we will have classes on thursday as usually. since it is cold usual coldertomorrow, please put on more clothes in time. those who comes to school comeby bike dont keep your umbrella open while riding. umbrellas短文改错。下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在下面加上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。i like riding my bikethough it is not very new, but it is my best friendi find very convenient to go anywhere with a bikeriding gives me not only exercises but also pleasurei use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dryit can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour downit can also be very dangerousof course i will be very carefully on my bikein fact, accidents are not the only problemonce i went to bookstore on my mothers bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missingnow i have two strong lock 【参考答案】6.i like riding my bikethough it is not very new, but it is my best friendi findveryitconvenient to go anywhere with a bikeriding gives me not only exercises but also pleasureiexerciseuse my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dryit can be very pleasant inmostly cant（ 或unpleasant）winter when it is cold and rain is pour downit can also be very dangerousof course i will bepouringvery carefully on my bikein fact, accidents are not the only problemonce i went to careful abookstore on my mothers bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missingnow icamehave two strong locklocks短文改错dear anish，here are the information about manchester university.1._it is about 200 miles far away from london, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. you can live in the school3._or near the school. they have all sorts of course.4._im sure you will find one you like it. i know you5._are particular interested in human rights. so i will 6._see that there i